Date: Jul 15, 2015 08:21 pm Title: Characters
oohh, I like genie Michael
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2015 06:27 pm Title: SCENE 7
Oh, wow... I hope that Caitlin will give Miss Jenner a good talking-to. :) Plus, I can imagine the lieutenant feeling shocked upon hearing Caitlin say, "He did not kidnap me - I ran away", as well as a twinge of remorse, too.
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing... :)
Date: Jul 14, 2015 06:17 pm Title: Characters
Oh,my lord you put one of my fav girl group member as one of the characters I love it girl
Author's Response:
Yeah, I love her because short girls unite, you know!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2015 06:06 pm Title: SCENE 5
Oh, wow... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very beautiful and phenomenally creative writing... :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2015 06:04 pm Title: SCENE 4
Wow... :) I agree with Caitlin there about marrying for love... :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2015 09:43 pm Title: SCENE 2
Neat so far... I like it... :) Sam is the counterpart of Aladdin, and Sarah the dog like Abu the monkey... :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2015 09:41 pm Title: SCENE 3
Neat so far... :) And I sense that the scene with Princess Jasmine's counterpart is coming up, too... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and brilliantly creative writing... :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2015 09:39 pm Title: SCENE 1
This sounds almost like the 1992 Disney film Aladdin, but different (I hope). Of course, I hope that either Jafar or Princess Jasmine will be in this one, of course... :)
Author's Response:
You'll see if you keep reading ;)
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2015 09:37 pm Title: Characters
Wow... Michael as a Genie sounds awesome right there... :)
Author's Response:
You'll see it soon enough.