Date: Sep 22, 2015 05:22 pm Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
Yesss! Michael is gonna get a chance to go out with Mimi! They need this tbh. I really can't wait to see how it's gonna go. If Porsche ever hears about this, it ain't gonna be nothing nice. Haha Mimi will most likely win the fight though. I love how they hugged at the hospital .. Hmm I see y'all .
Great chapter girl 😌
Author's Response:
Lol, yes. Finally she said yes. We all know Mike is doing backlflips in his head. And yes they really do need that time together. Most likely Porshe probably hear about it or maybe she won't we'll never know until then. Of course there will be some altercation between her and Mimi and like you said Mimi will will the fight . Lol.
And did you?!?!?!? ;;) they being all lowkey lovey dovey. Hmmm.
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2015 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 12. The Answer Is Yes
Yayyyy you updated!! Girl I see the drama. LaPorshe gonna have kittens finding out Michael took Umi on a date. They going on a damn date. Lmao. I don't care what they want to catch themselves calling it. It's a date.
Roc's rusty secret baby having ass finna get caught and I hope he do. I'll be damned if Karsen ass isn't Liam's girl. Does Liam know that baby is Roc's. Shit bout to be off the chain.
I think this DATE will be cute. They both feeling each other hard. They gonna throw down soon enough. Lol.
More soon. <333
Author's Response:
Teehee yes I did. This was suppose to be updated yesterday but wifi didn't wanna act right.
Porshe, most likely she gonna find out about Mike and Umi going toOctane. But who is gonna rat them out tho is the question??? ;) Ha, you right. It's a date. They don't wanna make it seem as more than what it is cause they are 'friends' right.
But the drama is gonna get real soon. Trust me, Karsen is Liam's girl. Just clarifying that, lol. So you don't have anything to worry about right thurr. Alot is bound to take off at any sec. So.prepare yourself Tut. Get ya grandma cane so you can keep your balance for it. It may knock ya down. Lmaaaooo
Yes their DATE is gonna be cutiepatootie. The feelings are mutual and we'll see just how quiet about them they'll be. Someone is gonna break.
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2015 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 11. Hospital Bound
HOLD UP!!!!! I knew that nigga had a side piece and a secret baby. That's Liam's woman?!?!?!?!??!? My jaw is scraping the floor right now. Holy shit storm batman!! She got Liam thinking that this baby is his? How she getting away with the baby spending time with Roc? So many damn questions girl!!! Lmaooo you threw me for a loop with this kicker.
Michael needs to step in! Get his baby Umi back from this trife ass love rectangle. I said rectangle!!! Lmao. Anyway if I'm wrong set me straight girl cause you got a sista twisted right now!!
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Kml!!!!!! Yasss. Roc has a baby that Umika doesn't even know about. And Karsen is Liam's girl. Funny how Umi never thought about the same name flashing on Roc's phone when she called. Hmmm. Karsen already sound like bad news knowing Liam not the father of Royal.
As for Her getting away with it, that will somehow come to light sooner in the story. It does make you wonder how is she able to do that shit and not get caught.
Ans Mike needs to do something and quick. Shit is gonna be real shit soon.
And don't worry. You on the right track. *wink wink*
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2015 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 10. Interviews To Bad News...Almost Caught
First of all, sorry for reviewing so late. My internet has been acting LaPorshe lately, so every time I try to leave my review, the page flies away to where I not know. But I'm hoping this one makes it to you.
Anyway, Mike thinking bout MiMi and not the car. Let's talk about that. He ain't thinkin about the car. I would feel sorry for her, but she already on list of folks I just don't feel sorry for so I won't feel sorry for her.
I'm glad they hired somebody. Yeah, Keanu tryna get the draws. I believe in him! But wtf happened to Liam? Damn, I'm worried for him right now.
Modern Life out here slippin. I don't give a damn that's what he's doing. And yes, you can use the name! lmaoo
He's Modern Life all day for me
Author's Response:
Ha, it's okay. And I got the review girl So don't worry.
Porshe (car, lol), I'm pretty sure no one doesn't feel sorry for her. Everyone just tossed her ass to the curb really quick.
Now Mike is and will always be thinking about Mimi. It's obvious he can't stop himself. The girl is.like a damn drug.to his thoughts. He's so addicted.
Now that they hired Malaysia as MJJP secretary, Keanu is gonna be all up on that fine drop of caramel.
Liam, man ain't no telling what happened to our roll dog.
Rocco (modern life), he really is fucking up but is he really?? And yeah, I can use the nnow. Whoopie!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2015 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 10. Interviews To Bad News...Almost Caught
Oh man I can't believe I missed this update!! Sorry bew!!
Wow Michael's thinking hard about Umi. Lol. Yeah he's still head over heals for her.
I knew Roc ass was up to something. Don't tell me he has some Rachet with a secret baby on the other side of town? Something tells me it may not be as simple as all that tho. Hmmmmm.
Man what happened to Li?!?!
More soon!!! <333
Author's Response:
Oh it's fine. I know you've been bust lately so it's all gucci goo.
Mike.... the nigga is still in love. Boom bam pow, there it is. Porshe is just a filler in his life because of what he did to Mimi.
Roc, it's obvious he is up to something. And the way it sounds, it could be possible that Karsen was a one night stand or some shit and had his baby. The thing is, was it during his relationship with Umika or before that? Hmmmm.
As for Li, well have to wait and see in the next chapter to find out. Hopefully it's not anything too bad.
Let us all pray.
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2015 11:41 am Title: Chapter 9. Tipsy And Envy/Octane?
Modern Life was like
All up in the car. Eat da booty like watermelon
Michael didn't see Modern Life lmaooo Nigga was suddenly blind. He's so rude and then gon have the nerve to stalk somebody to the bathroom. If you don't get yo ass some sense, Mike. But I wonder if she'll make up her mind soon cuz I wanna see this go down
They still got looooove feelings for each other, so I just don't know. Is she really happy? Is Mike really happy? Is Mike gonna eat some watermelon soon? I wonder........
Author's Response:
Code name for Rocco huh? I think I'm gonna steal that from you. Can I???
Mike could have at least spoke to the guy. He ain't mean no harm but I guess he was feeling sometypa way since his first love isn't so single like he thought she was. Boo hoo hoo.
Lol, we all know Michael be on that stalking shit on the low. He just had to do it just get Umika alone once again. He wasn't slick.
It's possible that her decision may be yes, who knows. Maybe she'll turn him down but that love that they still have for each other might end up changing that.
As for Mike eating the watermelon soon....... hmmm don't know. Just keep on reading. You might be surprised.
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2015 11:31 am Title: Chapter 8. Night's Surprise And Distractions
He showed up to the party and I was like
I needed them to have more time!! WHY YOU DO DIS TO ME!?!
Michael's distracted as hell right now. Lawd jesus. It's finna be a hot mess soon. I can smell it in the air. These mothafuckas is in heat
Author's Response:
Lol. Yess Roc has made it to the club. Finally Mimi want be baeless for the night, eh.
But trust me, they'll have more time. And I'm sorry if I needed their reunion short but blame Porshe for that though. I'm innocent :) lol.
Girl yess. Mike can't stop staring at Mimi for nothing. Even Porshe can't even take his eyes away from her. Crazy! Trust and believe, a hot mess isn't what you would wanna call it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2015 10:30 am Title: Chapter 7. Reunited....But Jealousy Is In The Air
I'm glad they talked though! I was sitting here like
Them guards went down like the wall of Berlin. Down like a person on a slippery ass water slide. Down like, basement. They went the hell down. She definitely doesn't hate him anymore. That breakup got em both feelin sore imo. Then Michael started asking all these questions.
"Rocco? Rocco's Modern Life? That's who you seeing now?"
There could be some jealousy on Michael's end. I'm thinking when he sees Rocco, he's just gonna be singing that Nsync song. "He's not the type you said you like, his style is whack, clothes are bad, come on girl, let him go, I want you back" Let me go listen to that song cuz that's how Mike gon be feeling soon enough!
The car girl got put in her place twice today. She needs to have a seat and think her life over. How you gon get told off twice today?!?!!? I'm cackling
Great update babe. Sorry for being late on this one. My internet is being nice to me today so I had to hurry and catch up
Author's Response:
Your gifs and reviews have me lmao.
Anyway, you saw that didn't you? Her guards went to tumbling down foreal foreal. And of course she doesn't hate him anymore. What's there to hate? Lol. And Mike with the questions. Let's just say he's nosy as hell. All in the girls love life and whatnot.
Now it is obvious that Mike is a little jealous. And you are a mess. I'ma have to listen to that song too.
So I'm guessing car girl is Porshe. Lol. Yes she got put in her place twice in one day. Good.
And it's fine. Tbh, my wifi has been acting stupid and I'm surprise I can even up date shit on here.
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2015 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 10. Interviews To Bad News...Almost Caught
Oh snap, whats Roc up too? He need to get his self together before some shit really pops off lol!
As for Michael he needs to get his priorities together it's either Umika or LaPorsche.
I hope that Li is okay too!
Update soon
Author's Response:
Ain't not telling what Roc is up to or already done. But the thing is, who is Karsen and Royal to him???
As for Michael, yes he really do need to get his priorities straight. He's battling between two girls. One he is still in love with and the other who he says he his on edge of leaving. So who's it gonna be??
And poor Liam. Let's just hope he is alright.
And I will.
Date: Aug 29, 2015 11:32 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
Does photovisi work on tablets? I think it does
Author's Response:
Never heard of it but I'll sure look. Is it an app or something that's on the internet?
Date: Aug 29, 2015 11:16 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
In the summary, yes. Thanks for putting them side by side :)
Author's Response:
Oh you're welcome. Glad you told me that too. I felt kinda bad taking up space. I would really love for someone to make a banner for this story or I could do it myself. The only thing is, I have a Kindle Fire tablet and not a laptop to actually do it. I'm not sure if I can on a tablet. Do you know anyway I can on a tablet if not then I'll ask someone who can make one for me.
Date: Aug 29, 2015 06:23 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
Hey Girl, Could you please put your images side by side within the next 3 days? The rule is one 600x500px image or multiple images side by side. Ditto for "Running Back into You".
Let me know if you have any issues.
Best.
Author's Response:
The pics that I have for the story?
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2015 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 6. An Invite To Old Feelings
I've been rooting for em all this time and now I'm nervous for em to get together lmaoo
I talked so much shit. Now, I'm trippin!
but I'm ready no matter how nervous I am
Author's Response:
You and everyone else wants them back together. Hell, even I do. But there's no need to be nervous. Maybe hey are meant to get back together but only time will tell that.
But don't be nervous girl. Everything gonna be fine.... hopefully, lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2015 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 5. Anticipating To See Her...Not Anticipating To See Him
The fact that Michael knows damn well who started what, though! Good for you, Mike. But I can honestly say when she mentioned her name, I pictured his ears standing on high like an eager puppy. This dude is ready and you can't tell me he ain't.
She started shit and Idk, I wanna see a fight. If she touches Mimi, I just want a fight if it goes down like that. I'm just sayin!
I don't think this dude's eyes are gonna be on that car so much. Yes, I called her a car because I'm that type of person. I already don't like her lmaoooo I'm gonna be a mess the whole time so don't even mind me.
I saw your reply from earlier! Yes, I post. I have 6 stories on here, so feel free to give em a read.
Now, on to the next!
Author's Response:
Haha, yes. Mike knows who is the messy one and who isn't. Lol, we all know how Mike is about hearing anyone mentioning Umika's. He can't wait to see his 'baby'.
Porshe, she makes you wanna slap her silly, I swear. She just trying make herself Look like the good person and Umika the bad one but Michael had enough sense to know it was the other way around.
And you're a violent one I see. Just wanna see something pop off. Lol.
Kml, a car. Yes indeed. Trust me I'm gonna be looking forward to your reviews. You see as if you have a lot of crazy things to say.
Oh, I haven't read anyone yet but I will tonight before I go to bed. Have school in the morning.
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2015 02:05 am Title: Chapter 4. Tells No Lies
They still got feels.
It's about to look like this when they get together again
Author's Response:
Haha, yes they do. Mike isn't ashamed to admit he still does but that Umika be lying I swear, kml. Just like what India and Carenza said, she still got feelings him so there's no need for the lies.
And the gif tho. I see a raccoon, lol.