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Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2015 08:22 am Title: Chapter 17. Drama And Lies

I know this dude didn't lay hands on Umi. Lawd when Michael find out his little ass is gonna go ballistic on that big ass dude. 

They both a lie. Lmaooo. They should just end it with those folks and call it a day. Be with each other because it seems like what they want anyway. 

And Roc out here with ANOTHER chick. Damn how many he got in the side? Don't he have a baby momma too. Jeez. 

I'm looking forward to that throw down between Michael and Roc. Lmao. 

More soon!!!<333



Author's Response:

Yasss, girl, yasss he did. Michael is gonna do some serious damage to his ass foreal for putting his hand on his baby.

The lies are something crazy. Lol. I don't what's taking them so long to end it. Rocco effed up bad to make Umi want to end them and Porshe is just being Porshe. They need to call it quits with these people.

Roc.... Roc is a damn hoe, a thot, anything else you name. This nigga got chicks everywhere . Just a sign that tells us that Umika needs to get rid of his ass and be with Mike.

Oh, and that throwdown is coming soon.

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2015 09:08 am Title: Chapter 17. Drama And Lies

omg this is getting good dwl



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Thank you so much. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2015 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 16. A New Flame

Hold up isn't Porshe supposed to be away for that magazine photo shoot in LA? Why would he be hurrying home if she's not even there?

I'm not surprised she got somebody else on the side. I can bet he's nothing like Michael tho so she short changed.

Michael and Umi took that whole room for a ride. Lmao. 

I'm glad Michael sees them as being together. Let's hope he's going home to tell Porshe to fuck off like he said it to Umi and she needs to do the same with cheatin ass Roc too. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

Oh trust me, Porshe is still there. She hasn't left to Cali yet. She still has two more days left until her departure to the west coast for 2 weeks. Lol. You must have forgotten? As for Her having a side nigga, we all shouldn't be surprised. She seem sneaky but yet she wants to jump on Mike's case about Umi.

YassAssess! That bedroom I'm sure should be ready to come crumbling down after what they did in there. And you know in Michael's they're together. Hopefully, they both break up with Roc and Porshe, but who knows. We'll just have to wait and see what they gonna do.

Reviewer: alwayslovemikey Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2015 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 15. Makin' It Right

Girl yessss! They told each other how they felt. Getting it all out the way, they needed to anyway. Hopefully Michael can stick to his word and keep his 'junebug' in his pants haha.

Mimi make him work for it girl! Haha that excuse was cute but he needs to get rid of Porche pronto before he gets the goods again .

 

great and cool chapter :) waiting for the next 



Author's Response:

Yasss. Finally they did and now they can move forward knowing the feelings are mutual. And let's ope he does stick to his word. Maybe he will he sound so serious when he told Umi that he was. And I'm sure he'll be able to keep Junebug tucked away from these skeezers.

His excuse was cute. Brownie points for that. But not only should he get rid of Porshe you can't forget that Umi is with Roc too.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2015 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 15. Makin' It Right

Damn coffee turned into something even sweeter!!  I wasn't expecting it at all. Lol. 

Michael acknowledged he was a dumb fuck. His excuse was lame but already he didn't try to justify he foolishness. 

Who cares where Lawhore and Rocco fit. They need not fall all the way back and take the L. Michael and Umi are BACK!! 

Michael is about to put it down when they get upstairs. 

Now who knows what comes after they come. Let's see. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

What a day out to Octane, right? Filled with confessions and giving head afterwards. A very unexpected chapter huh. Lol.

Michael should have been acknowledge he was dumb the first time he cheated. But at least he did anyway. He was really stupid. He was right about that of himself.

Y'all just don't give poor Roc and Porshe a chance nor time of the day. Lol. They just don't exist. Apparently Mike and Umi are back as one.... But partially though. They're still in relationships with other people. 

And yes girl. Mike is about to take her down she ain't gonna know what to do.

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2015 02:26 am Title: Chapter 15. Makin' It Right

They went from friendly coffee to confessin more than Usher to Michael begging to Michael giving her head

Yeah, I'm with him. It's truly about to go down today! 

I can't wait for more. Modern Life, we finna bust yo shit up!



Author's Response:

Ha, you saw that huh? No one didn't expect that at all. 

Mike is about to tear dat ass up and as for Modern Life, girl.... eff him, lol.

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2015 12:04 am Title: Chapter 14. Confessions

All I know is, that's the perfect name for this chapter. DAMN! It's all out there like chitlins. WE SMELL DAT FUNK.

Lawd I am so ready for what's about to happen. Of course you know I'm more than happy about these confessions. Everybody's tellin the truth now.

Modern Life just ain't ready.

He ain't ready lawd, HE AIN'T READY

 



Author's Response:

Thank you thank you. Lol. Yes it's all out there and like coon too. 

I have something up my sleeve and of course I know you're more than happy for what's to come next. Everyone is confessing their love. 

Modern life may not be ready but we'll see. Lol.

Reviewer: alwayslovemikey Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2015 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 14. Confessions

Michael couldn't hold his feelings in! Poor thing 😩 I feel you Mike. But better late than never. 

I hope Porsche gets furiated so much that she wants to leave Mike so that him and MiMi can live happily ever after haha forget her and her messy ass friend! 

 

Great chapter, I'm already waiting for the next one :)



Author's Response:

Lol, no he couldn't girl. Even if he tried. It'd possible that Porshe May get so done with Mike and leave him for good. We'll just have to wait and see what happened in this love square now.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2015 07:08 am Title: Chapter 14. Confessions

Lawd Tarinisha messy as hell. (I know that's not her name lmaoooo) I know she's looking out for her girl though but her and her scary ass starting shit she can't finish. 

Wow that confession escalated quickly. I'm glad they put it all in the line because it was obvious they still have that spark between them. 

Shit bout to hit the fan but like I'm glad. I know Rocco triflin ass better not have shit to say!!

More soon bb!! <333



Author's Response:

Lmao, Tarnisha. Yes she is messy ass heel but you can't blame her fir looking out for Porshe. She just took a gentlman gesture the wrong way. She doesn't like Umi because of Porshe. That's all. 

As for Mike and Umi confessions, whooo did it escalate quickly alright. It was about time they come clean and stop with the bs, especially Umika cause we all knew she still loved that negro. 

Alot is gonna happen which means alot of drama.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2015 06:21 am Title: Chapter 14. Confessions

I'm all caught up and oh Lord! The fuse had been officially lit! This story is all kinds of juicy and I love it <3



Author's Response:

Lol. Yes the fuse has been lit and a lot is gonna happen. 

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2015 08:50 am Title: Chapter 13. A Place Of Memories

Oh my goodness, I'm so happy lol they are the cutest things ever! I hop everything works out at the coffee shop and I hope they get to rekindle their love while Porsche is away cause she driving me up a wall too tbh lol 



Author's Response:

Lol, yes Mike and Umi are the cited though they're not together anymore. Hopefully everything does work out with them on their 'date'. And maybe a little rekindling may take place just stay tuned for more.

Btw, Porshe been driving folks up the wall since day one when this story was posted. #TeamHatePorshe lol!!!!!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2015 08:46 am Title: Chapter 13. A Place Of Memories

Well congrats to Porche. That magazine sounds shady as shit though. Lol. I hope it's on the up and up and she don't ruin her chances with her damn mouth. 

Roc need to sit is philandering secret baby having ass down. Not going to lie though I would feel bad for him if he wasn't a POS. Maybe I would say I see his point about her going out with her ex even if it is casual. 

Michael way sprung off Umi. He can't even hide it. The flashback says it all. What the hell was he thinking when he fucked all that up?  I guess he was thinking with his Ronald. Of courses he's beating himself up cause he feels guilty and he should. He messed up. 

This DATE bout to be interesting. They both look so cute. Michael was always ahead of the times in fashion. 

More Soon! <333



Author's Response:

Lol, right tho. It does sounds a bit shady but it's actually not tbh. Hopefully everything goes good and she doesn't messes it up for herself. Knowing her and her ways.

Idk, why all of a sudden he tripping now. But we all can understand why he would . Ex and ex going out for coffee is a lil something on another level. I'll feel some typa way myself. But screw Roc for right now. He'll get over it eventually.

Tsk tsk tsk, Michael taking a blast to the past and reminiscing about him and Umi on how they first got together as a couple. It was sweet but turned sour the moment he had to fuck it twice. Why Michael? He should feel hella guilty at charge for letting a wonderful woman like Umika go. Smdh.

Girl you don't know what you in for so stay tuned. Things gonna be a whole lot different in the next chapters to come. ;)

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2015 01:37 am Title: Chapter 12. The Answer Is Yes

So where da update?



Author's Response:

Lol, I know and I apologized. I just updated the new chapter. Sorry for the long wait. I know how much you're feeling this story. 

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2015 03:38 am Title: Chapter 12. The Answer Is Yes

Them feelings pouring out and I'm drankin. I'm drankin em up 

There's no telling what that day is gonna be like. Who knows? Especially cuz the feelings are there and I'm already drankin. Both of their unnecessary companions ain't shit soooooooo 

Some expressing could happen, though! That's what I'm ready to see. They could probably be friends, but it's gonna have to take some secrets cuz you know dat car and modern life probably ain't for it.

I don't see em seeing it at all

 



Author's Response:

Lol, yassss. Them feelings coming from left and right, up and down.

Sunday at Octane is gonna be something else to.look forward. Those feelings make take over a make a.date for themselves as.Well. 

Why So mean guh?!?!?!!? 

It's possible that they may express their feelings or.maybe.not. they gonna be friends alright ;).

And those two, of course they're not gonna have it. But who cares right?

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2015 03:20 am Title: Chapter 11. Hospital Bound

I'm glad Liam is alive! I was worried. He's banged up, but I'm glad he's good. Poor thing. I know Mike woulda been too done if he lost him. 

Oh gawd. I'm wondering if Mike is gonna behave now lmao For some reason, I see him NOT doing that. You can't blame me. This is Mike we're talking about.

Modern Life got a baby by Liam's girl!?!? BRUH

CUH!

BRUH!

How we get here?!?! 

Good lord, it's gonna get wild. 

She don't like MiMi either. BRUH!

 



Author's Response:

You and me both girl. I'm happy myself. He had everyone s as he'll about him but thank God he's alive and well. Mike probably would have went crazy if he lost Liam. They are like brothers. That's goes for Zay and Keanu too.

Mike is just a trip. 

Modern life is seriously cutting up now. Yes he has a baby and with Li's girl.

Yeah the hoe don't like Mimi but oh well. 

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