Date: Jun 25, 2022 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Geez I wonder who peed in birdman cheerios...did he take grumpy pills or something??? Lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2015 05:53 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh My. My heart leapt out of my chest when Storm (cute name definitely fitting lol)ran out of their hiding place. Then When Bea did the same thing I almost had a conniption fit Lawd!!
The way you describe the landscape and the beings of the land is very vivid. I imagine the Skywatchers as the crows in the original wiz but more stream lined and modern.
I'm glad that they are safe now and I can see a spark brewing with Bea and the Scarecrow. I'm thinking they might have to find a new place to hide being that the Skywatchers have an idea where they are and will come back looking with reinforcements. Some new stronger creatures.
Love his story. More soon! <333
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was so worried about how effective this chapter would be because it is a little more epic than the movie. However, I still plan on keeping all recognizable characters as familiar as possible. I'm really glad it's keeping your attention 😊
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2015 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow, there was a lot of action in this chapter! I loved it! The name Beatrice gave the FlyMam is adorable! I can't wait for her to meet Tin Man and Lion. Next chapter!!
Author's Response: Lol I can't begin to describe how much fun I had working on this chapter. This is actually my first shot at a adventure scene, so I was hoping it would be enjoyable to read. I am so thrilled and relieved that you loved it. Thank you 😄
Date: Mar 10, 2015 08:00 am Title: Chapter 4
Anytime! I love how Scarecrow has gotten a little braver in this story; he's more of a fighter. The "intelligent names" reference made me smile. Overall, this chapter was worth the wait-and we're gonna meet Tin-Man next!
Author's Response: Considering the new foe in Oz, he kind of has to be. All the while, I still tried to make him the loveable clumsy and animated Scarecrow we loved so much from the movie. The last thing I want to do is change him so much he becomes unrecognizable. I'll try to keep this up.