[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2016 07:51 am Title: Chapter 5 (Leave Me Alone)
Interesting but who does Jose think he is? He need a dose of that strawberry lemonade better yet, a kick in his butt; punk self, I bet he's the father of her baby too. I'm probably wrong though because they probably never slept together...maybe they did but, I guess I'm gonna have to keep reading to fill in all the gaps. I'm happy that she's being nicer to Michael though. See ya!
Author's Response:
Only time will tell what will happen between Michael, Ali and all of the other characters. Just know that I got a few tricks up my sleeve so look out for that! I am currently working on chapter 28...no rush boo, take ur time and enjoy! Once again, I am looking too forward to your story with Michael's BAD self and Gina with her Halle Berry Boomerang Haircut (lol). Thanks for reviewing boo! Much love!
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2016 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1 (Who Is It?)
This is the bomb! I know I said that I hadn't read it but I actually remembered reading some of it once I began reading those parts again. I love it, just the whole set up. It's funny and extremely interesting! I will continue to check in on this one...thank you for reminding me <3
P.s. Michael and his friends are priceless lol I rolled on the floor too many times and I also love how down Ali's friends are for her. I hope you continue to update even though I am still in the beginning stages because I am beyond hooked! If the day didn't move so fast and I could finish it and do everything that I had to do at the same time, I would! Now, if you will excuse me, I'm gonna go squeeze in another chapter with some popcorn lol See ya!
Author's Response:
Chile, I'm a need some popcorn and some strawberry lemonade for all this shade lol ironically Momma made some today, but anyway I'm glad you like it and you better not leave me hangin for another chapter as well. I love writing the dialogue between the friends, I picture it as my own friends and how I would talk to them and vice versa!
Well, you keep me posted on your story and I will do the same! Peace, love, blessings and all the fun stuff in between! Bye!
Date: Jan 30, 2016 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 27 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 3)
Girl I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed! Some weeks I wasn't on mjfiction. And I missed commenting on yours and I miss you commenting on mine. Also this chapter was adorable! Anton is the cutest little thing. Wayne's speech :,))) but That's true. Michael's generosity is what makes him a superstar. A lot of people that met him says he's the most kindest person. He's sweet. And I wish more people would see that then believe the negative. But I'm glad we see what makes him beautiful. But back to the story lol you done got me started! But back to Michael and Alessandra... Another chapter girl! Lls I want more! I want more! <333
Date: Dec 07, 2015 08:09 am Title: Chapter 26 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 2)
Love love love
Author's Response:
Thanks girl!
Date: Nov 20, 2015 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 26 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 2)
🌚 hmmmmmm it could be a baby hittin the scene soon lmaoooo I wouldn't be surprise if she's pregnant. Lil nasties breakin beds Lmaooo Michael is so excitedthsy she might be pregnant lmaooo
Author's Response:
man...only time will tell nene but girl...i was too thru with them...breaking the bed lol even though michael got more than enough to cover it, you don't go around bustin up people's beds n shit lol and awww...what if there is a little mike or a little ali on the way? well stay tuned girl!
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2015 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 25 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 1)
Add more! Lol
Date: Nov 16, 2015 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 25 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 1)
Uh oh! What happened? Giiiiiirl, I gotta see what's gunna happen. And finally she told him she'll be his girl! Almost had Michael shit bricks with a mug on his face. He can get so grumpy when he doesn't get what he wants
Date: Nov 14, 2015 04:56 am Title: Chapter 24 (You Are There)
I knew in the last chapter Wayne liked Mo! That's really adorable! And oh lord Michael is feelin some type of way. They need to read Anton a bedtime story and have him fall asleep. Lmaooo then get busy. Also glad the sisters made up! Now let's see how Michael is going to be in the next chapter. Since he was already mean muggin' Alessandra. Great chapter girl! And love ya, too!
Author's Response:
Girl, he did a Monette mean-mug! Bitch face was on lock! Haha, girl...only time will tell what happens with Michael and Alessandra as well as Wayne and Monette....stay tuned girl! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Aug 30, 2015 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 23 (Ease on Down the Road)
I love Wayne. He's giving great advice. Mo and Ali were all grouchy in that car and dry lmaoooooooo! Ya'll asses need to talk it out!
thise pictures are soooo beautiful. I have to see a waterfall one day. So so beautiful. And so was the Cabin! Michael really knows how to show off! So sweet him and Ali holding hands and kissing. Too sweet for me!
great chapter as always!
I wonder what Mo is going to tell Mike....hmmm...
Author's Response:
Girl, Mo and Ali were too over it....haha! And Michael's romantic ass is too much and he pulls the spontaneous shit off so nicely don't he?And thanks girly, I will be back with more and Wayne is awesomesauce!
Date: Aug 13, 2015 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 (Who Is It?)
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Date: Aug 13, 2015 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 22 (Whatever You Got, I Want)
Ah shit. What the hell is greasy ass Jose gunna do. I really liked how you wrote all the chapters. But with Jose, how you wrote him really makes my skin crawl. He's so annoying. No one likes him
Author's Response:
Greasy ass Jose lol...but yeah he is sickening, but your gonna have to read on to find out! Glad you love it, girl!
Date: Aug 13, 2015 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 21 (With a Child's Heart)
Sorry I didn't review :((( I don't know you uploaded!
but anyway back to the story. Loved the chapter and Michael is the best babysitter!!!!!! Michael and Anton We're having a ball! So sweet! Michael is good with kids anyway. And Michael is about to get in Ali's ass about that 'title'! She needs to give it a rest! Michael is her man!
Author's Response:
Girl, I'm too thru with Alessandra too and I'm the writer lol but yes, Michael Jackson not only the King of Pop but the King of Babysitters!
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2015 03:59 am Title: Chapter 21 (With a Child's Heart)
This was really good update please :)!.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2015 12:06 am Title: Chapter 20 (Wanna Be Startin' Somethin')
Hey gurl, I liked the urban dialog which is a personal preference of mine. I like the characterization of Anton, he is sooo cute lol and love his interaction with Mike! Nice to see your still writing, keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, realtalk92! I appreciate your feedback and yes I find the urban dialog more relatable and it's fun to write and Anton is cuter than baby buttons isn't he?
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2015 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 20 (Wanna Be Startin' Somethin')
Awww! This was cute but her sister got issues! She seems like she is mad all the time.
Author's Response:
Yasss...Monette need some happy juice lol