[Report This]Date: May 21, 2016 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 30 (Somebody's Watching Me)
Girl l am happy for you anyway this crazy l love it😂😂😂😇😎
Author's Response:
i know girl and thank you! and this shit bout to hit the fan...stay tuned!
Date: May 20, 2016 11:09 am Title: Chapter 30 (Somebody's Watching Me)
Mikey and Alessandra freakiness though!!!!! Lmaoooo and Wayne and Mo are soooo cute!
Also I know it can be so creepy to have someone just watching you all the time it can be so creepy. Especially for Michael in the story and in real life. But Michael and Alessandra were being watched the whole time! So scary! Now they're all over the news. Nosy ass people 🙄🙄🙄 great chapter! Finish soon!
Author's Response:
Yes, chile! It's gonna be some shit! It ain't even the worst of it. Stay tuned boo and I'm finishing up on Waterfalls and the Dangerous Tide!
Date: May 19, 2016 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 29 (Girlfriend)
Since I'm half sleep Lmaooo this review might be a little weak.
Michael is absolutely so sweet with his surprises. Alessandra is sooooo lucky. And of course they are some freaks and hmmmmm they're being watched??? Noooo I would've jumped right in that log house. That's too creepy for me lls
Author's Response:
haha thanks girl and no problem, I feel you being tired and all and yeah, a lil too close for comfort!
Date: May 04, 2016 10:01 am Title: Chapter 29 (Girlfriend)
Hey boo, I was on the site and I just wanted to say what's up but girrl, where is my new chapter? I'm waiting on you lol 😘👀
Author's Response:
hey girl, OMG college and work is running me ragged. Don't worry I got you its just been a lot but I missed writing and catching up, and i'll be sure to hit u up on your story. Peace love and blessings, boo!
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2016 03:57 am Title: Chapter 29 (Girlfriend)
Gosh darnit, I was wrong. But hey, I'm all caught up with you now. Heeey lol and this chapter was too cute, I hope it isn't the paparazzi though because that would be a mess. But it could also be Jose and the Simone cow but we'll see. Can't wait for more. I'm really loving how this is turning out!
Author's Response:
Girl, I wanna know who was in them bushes, too! Thanks for reviewing each and every chapter, I really appreciate it! And didn't I tell you hell is about to break loose! Stay tuned for chapter 30! I can't believe it, 30 chapters and on this site for a whole year and change with 10,000 reads! And yes, I will be back soon, cuz chile, college is killin me lol but gotta do what I gotta do! But thanks, glad you enjoyed it nonetheless! See you in the next chapter and happy reading!
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2016 03:35 am Title: Chapter 28 (Ride with Me)
Hmm, I don't know, I predict...hmm, I really don't know maybe he could be taking her to one of his rehearsals possibly. And I don't know about him driving, with Michael you never eva eva eva eva eva know lol But Wayne coming to get Mo was cute too. And aww, he brought her daisies. Hmm, wonder how their date is gonna go too?
Author's Response:
Yassss, both sisters going on dates! I swear Michael always has something under his sleeve! And his driving, lmbo! Ali must of thought that she was heading to their funeral lol she was so scared! And Wayne is so sweet bringing his Vanilla self with some daisies, and Ali was too funny for ragging on Monette! Now Mo knows how it feels when your sister be all up in your business lol!
Date: Apr 02, 2016 03:11 am Title: Chapter 27 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 3)
Things are getting so cute and no, they don't need another bed bill. They shol don't. Great chapter and Anton is too cute. I am loving everything about this story!!! I love how you're developing it!
Author's Response:
Yes girl, I knew this chapter would be long that's why I delivered it in 3 doses. And yes everything is cute, but I'm assure you, some hell bout to break loose around the corner! Stay tuned and thanks for reading girl!
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2016 02:56 am Title: Chapter 26 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 2)
They broke the bed? Nooo!!! Then they give Anton that messed up story about jumping on the bed...Girrrl. Then it cost 4k? Mm.mm. I would be breakin' not another bed with 4k. Shoot, I would be sleeping on the floor before I slept in another bed again that cost that much lol. And is Ali pregnant? Hmmm, I with her though that there is too much at stake, that would be me too. Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
Chile...ain't nobody got time for breaking $4000 beds now, here? And yes, that was so funny and embarrassing with the bed story, but Michael came through with that cover-up lol and I died when Mo and Wayne looked to the side like "Y'all got that," lol And hmm...what if a baby is under tow? Let's find out!
Date: Apr 02, 2016 02:44 am Title: Chapter 25 (Enjoy Yourself: Part 1)
Uh-uh, see, they ain't right lol. What's little man gonna think? Ooooh, they're have some explaining to dooo. But in other news, I'm so glad that they are finally together!!!
I smiled so hard. But hey, I almost forgot.
I can't believe Michael said we should have done this 25 chapters ago lmbo. I was screamin!!!! Why? That was clever though, so kudos to you! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yess, I thought that was funny too, especially with Michael chomping at the bit about him and Ali's relationship! In fact, I kinda wanted it to seem like Michael was talking to us lol haha, and yeah, 25 chapters is a long time to wait for a kiss with a man that is sexy, smart and entertaining (in and out of the bed)...Ali, stopped foolin before we had a chance to get in the story and take him lol
Date: Apr 02, 2016 02:29 am Title: Chapter 24 (You Are There)
I say yes to all of the above because I pretty much called it. *Pats self on the back* I'm so glad they made up, I was beginning to worry but I'm more happy that they got a new understanding and Ali's right, Mo better give Wayne a chance lol. That man came and found you girl to check on you, you can atleast hang with the man damn!
Any way, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Mhhmmm, and he is cute, strong, and Vanilla...girl get ur swirl on, I ain't mad. Well, you could even say that Alessandra is getting her White Chocolate on with Mike too lol!
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2016 02:10 am Title: Chapter 23 (Ease on Down the Road)
Ok, cool. That was nice of Wayne to advise Monette like that, he's a good guy. Hmm, maybe they might even get together....ok lemme stop, wishful thinking lol. But this was really sweet. I hope she and Ali do patch it up though which I'm sure they will because that's what sisters do but Mo just needs to relax.
Author's Response:
I think Monette is so used to looking out for her that that is really the only thing she has become accustomed to. However, later on the story, you will see why Monette goes to bat for Alessandra the way she does, especially flashing-back to the years before. And hmm, things might be heating up with Wayne? Do I smell attraction here? And damn it Mo, you were hungover and got a man feelin u within only hours! I swear her and Ali have some magic formula or something with these men lol
Date: Apr 02, 2016 01:53 am Title: Chapter 22 (Whatever You Got, I Want)
Ok! First things first, Alessandra need to teach me that, she got a man in the house flippin' pancakes? Oooh!! * Chokes on the tea*
And Jose stank behind? What is he doin' girl, what is he doin!? I can't he must want a foot up his butt because...no. And who is this Simone cow? She must be a hater in that case, we have no time...be gone!
And I remember in an earlier review I asked if Jose was Anton's father but I'm so glad he's not but he is definitely thirsty though. He stay parched lol
Anyway, great chapter and I will talk to you soon!
Author's Response:
Girl, you said this Simone cow! I'm done! Tell you what, every time she pops up, we say, "MOOOOOOOO!" LOL and Jose is definitely asking for it! I smell trouble with him so stay tuned!
Date: Apr 02, 2016 01:34 am Title: Chapter 21 (With a Child's Heart)
Uh oh.:o I wonder what she'll say. If she doesn't say it right, that can be a tough pill to swallow.
Author's Response:
I was on the edge of my seat too with that cliffhanger girl! Come on Ali, as Tisha would say, "Stop playin cuz that friend shit is getting old," lol!
Date: Apr 02, 2016 01:20 am Title: Chapter 20 (Wanna Be Startin' Somethin')
This was too cute. Michael is the ultimate baby sitter lol I want some pizza :(
Author's Response:
I know haha, Michael racked up another title, "King of Babysitters!" Is there anything he can't do! I swear he is the Superman of the 90's lol
Date: Apr 02, 2016 01:08 am Title: Chapter 19 (Workin' Day and Night)
Uh oh, where my tea at! Mo catching Ali with Michael? Uh-un this is about to be fu-nny. So crazy of her to get Michael to babysit, I never saw that one coming. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
I know, Michael to the rescue! He came through on the real though! Besides, not too many kids could say that they had Michael Jackson for a babysitter!