[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2015 12:01 am Title: Chapter 56
Michael, you fool, you don´t solve anything with pills and alcohol. I just hope he find the strenght to fight with his addiction and go to the court and I hope that Malania will be strong enough to go through it with him.
You are amazing writer, I love how you captured Michael´s and Malania´s emotions, when I am reading this story I can vividly imagine it, it is like I´ve been watching it with my own eyes. Can´t wait for next chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review Janina :) <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 56
Michael you fool!!! *Shakes fist at sky. It's terrible what stress can force one to do when they have bad addictive habits. Ugh.
"Babyheart..." Are you trying to suffocate me with cuteness??? That's the sweetest Little pet name.
No I see your trying to take my life another way. Omg. That relationship he had with Diane must have been exhausting. I mean I'm tired and I'm only reading about it. All of it seemed like so much work. Like an actual nine to five.
You captured each and every one of those emotions impeccably!!! I even felt the vomit on my chin. Gawd Michael, my heart twists for him. Hes being stupid and destructive and I'm sure driving a knife into his relationship. Mal can't be holding up well. It's not about her right now but I'm gutted at what he's doing to himself.
Does he plan on being drugged up the whole damn time man!!!! I want to climb in here not so discreetly and administer a couple sobering slaps to the back of his head.
I understand but at the same time I don't want him to do this. Is he even thinking about how it will look if he shows up to court zonked out of his mind on pills?!?!?
I'm gearing up for the next chapters because I know they'll make this one look like a cool breeze.
Im glad you heeded my threats. Lol. I will heed yours and update in the next two days!!!
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Michael is a total dummy!
I definitely am taking your life in lots of directions; I'm good like that!
Diane is a troubled bitch. lol. She's emotionally checked out on the both of them but still expects Michael to be the everything.
Thanks for the compliments on my writing.<3I appreciate it.
He wont be drugged up all the time...just this time!
haha now... speaking of threats, UPDATE THE STORY!
Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 56
My heart is aching for Michael. Playing this scene out in my head made for incredible, albeit gut-wrenching, reading. You captured his turmoil so well!
Author's Response:
Thanks, BluJay! You're awesome :)