Date: Mar 14, 2020 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 44
What a rollercoaster! Omigod, that literally tore me apart. You have such if way of expressing emotions through dialogue, and I really enjoyed how you transitioned MJ from fear/sadness to complete anger/sadness. I love this so much. Like I said, you have a way with expressing emotions, and man, is it killing me!
Author's Response:
I cant remember exactly what happens in this chapter without reading, but i have a brief idea. Poor MJ. Surely theres to be some relief soon.
Date: Jul 20, 2015 11:49 am Title: Chapter 44
YES! This is the talk that they needed to have. What a beautifully written update this is!
Author's Response:
you are great :) thanks x
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2015 09:19 am Title: Chapter 44
Wow, that was a deep chapter. Lots of emotions and fears coming out, but this is good, this is the true path to healing. Malania has a lot to heal from, but she will be able to differentiate true passion from abuse and when she feels how love should happen, her past will be powerless to keep her back.
Author's Response:
Yep, you're pretty on the ball. Maybe not entirely powerless though :)