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Reviewer: kingskid17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2021 08:39 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm new to the site and just started reading this story and I'm already hooked.. it's really interesting reading from Michael's "perspective", and I believe you've done an amazing job of making the scenes credible; I feel like a fly on the wall. Excellent work

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2020 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hi! New reader here:) Just dropping by to say that I have read the first 3 chapters of your story (the Prologue and the first 2 chapters), and I have enjoyed it very much! You have a wonderful way of immersing the reader into the heart of the characters (Michael, in this case, as the chapters have been from his point of view so far). I think your description of his thoughts and feelings is on point, I can easily imagine that he has experienced such emotions (or at least some of them) when he first heard about the allegations against him.
I am looking forward to reading more, although I am a slow reader (because of lack of time). Great story!

Reviewer: Linalinskaya Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2020 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is breaking my heart..:(

Author's Response:

Awwww but i promise it becomes nicer :)

Reviewer: cat105 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2020 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

That ending scene where MJ refuses to get out of bed was really well written. I’ve always thought of him as a guy who, as an adult, had a part of him who was a bit of a kid, slightly innocent, tired, bit whiny, but of course still jaded as he grew older. I feel like this scene highlighted that part of him, and honestly, I can totally imagine this happening in real life. Good job!

Author's Response:

Thanks Cat! Your compliments mean a lot and yeah, thats totally how I imagined him as well :) a bit of a baby about things, wanting to try to block it all out and just have someone be able to swoop in and make it okay. I can understand that....

Reviewer: serena2534 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2020 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

Omg this is so sad

Reviewer: Ms Apricot Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 03:43 am Title: Chapter 2

I really like your story, there is a heavy air of realism in it and I love the little extras you throw in to make it realistic. And above all I LIVE FOR the fact that you didn’t paint Michael out to be a saint and you let him use bad language as well as the people around him, those that were kind as well as those who didn’t sugar coat things just because he was Michael Jackson! Amazing! Thank you for writing this, I’m only on chapter 2 but I love this already :)

(also loved the build up to Michael lashing out) x

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2015 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh wow. Michael is really upset. Can't blame him though...

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is so sad.  It make s me feel sorry for Michael all over again that he had to go through this in his real life...

Larry could have shown a little sympathy, but speaking of... Rosa seemed so sincere and she bounced too?! This is so so sad. Michael is being stubborn though. Yeah, it's rough but handle your business



Author's Response:

I think the whole thing with Rosa was misunderstood. She didn't bounce, more like that in a tumulteous situation, everything happened so fast and she would have pushed out in the craziness. 

I can imagine MJ wanting to just run away and hide in bed and put his hands over his ears. 

Reviewer: wonderfultonight Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2015 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

Shit, shit, shit, shit! I'm hooked, man! Omg!



Author's Response:

LOL! you're awesome. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2015 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 2

Your writing has really matured over the years and the content is noticeably riskier.

What an ominous ending to the chapter! I was already trying to balance which chick was going to be the "main" (Rosa vs Malania) and then you threw in that final twist?! Please update soon!

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