Reviews For The Accused
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Reviewer: dirty4mj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2023 04:38 pm Title: Prologue

I absolutely loved the way you conveyed MJ's emotions during this horrific time. I can't wait to continue reading!

Reviewer: LynDreams Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2022 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wauw...such good writing!! I can see it all in front of me.

Reviewer: LittleRed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2022 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 76

Did I just spend an entire day and night binging this whole fic all in one go?? Yes, yes I absolutely did.

This is, honestly, one of my top favorite fanfics I have ever read, period. The story is so engaging and suspensful, I feel the way you write for Michael is very true to his actual character, and the interactions between your original character and him are so realistic, believable and lovely. 

The big revelation in this chapter, oh boy, really got me in my own feelings. I really feel for Michael here, I can't even begin to imagine what it's like to KNOW you are innocent, but still see the whole world turn against you in real time, only for your own accuser to then call you up after dragging your name through the mud and say "I was wrong" in a phone call. There's a lot of very powerful emotion behind that.

As a fan, I only wish something like that, his accusers coming forward to say they were wrong, could've happened for Michael in real life.

I anxiously await the next chapter, I am way too excited to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Lonelyheart22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2022 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 76

Im so glad that they finally realized that it was that scumbag Larry!!!

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2021 11:05 am Title: Chapter 76

Ohh my goodness, I just caught up. I haven't been on this site since maybe 2015 and this is the 1st story I'm reading since coming back. Getting to know you through the little author notes, I'm so sorry about your mom and I'm hoping you've been doing well in the past year. I'm sure it wasnt easy at all, you're incredible for keeping on with this story. You're also so extremely skilled in writing! I can't wait for you to come back but I completely understand that life gets in the way.

Absolutely enjoying the well paced relationship and realistic timing so far between Michael and Malania. I'm kinda sad to have caught up but I'm excited for more whenever it comes hahahahhaha

Sending lots and lots of love!

Reviewer: kingskid17 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2021 09:48 pm Title: Prologue

I absolutely love this story; it has taken me through so many peaks and valleys with our protagonists. It has been really exciting to journey with Michael and Malania as they face their demons together and I love how they have grown. All that's left now is for them to find the disgusting scumbag that's Larry so he can face up to what he has done to poor Casey.
Thank you for sharing your amazing talent and I hope that you'll be able to finish up this story one day.. all the very best to you!

Reviewer: kingskid17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2021 08:39 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm new to the site and just started reading this story and I'm already hooked.. it's really interesting reading from Michael's "perspective", and I believe you've done an amazing job of making the scenes credible; I feel like a fly on the wall. Excellent work

Reviewer: Styxen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2021 09:33 am Title: Chapter 76

Honestly, I absolutely demolished this book. It was such a good read and I just couldn’t put it down.

Author you’ve done a fantastic job creating such a believable original character with flaws that you can’t help rooting for. The manner in which you create conflict is just *chef’s kiss*! It’s so difficult to consistently introduce problems that make logical sense and don’t feel unnecessary and awkward in such a long book so it truly deserves praise.

I also love how you’ve humanized Michael and how you shift perspectives between him and Malania. They both have their own challenges that don’t feel disconnected and are interesting in their own way.

I especially love the supportive relationship dynamic. Because, as mentioned, they both have a lot of mental stuff to deal with that understandably need to be prioritized and yet they manage to support each other when a crisis occurs. It’s a great example of the relationship dynamic you wish to create in real life.

The Accused is one of the best fan fictions I have ever read, and trust me, I have read MANY.

I eagerly await another update (but of course that’s up to the muse of inspiration, so take your time and don’t force It) :D

Reviewer: caytannp13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2021 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2020 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 76

Sigh. I forgot how awesome this story was. The tension is just right. I hope Greg just blasts Larry all over the news and Daine and his wife could go public in support. I'm happy Michael doesn't feel like running. He should also tell Mal about Diane if he doesn't there will be so much contention. This was awesome! Hope all is well with you. 

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2020 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 16

Lovely chapter! It was so nice to see Michael doing normal things such as driving and shopping, and all these with Malania's help. It was very entertaining to see their playful interactions.

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2020 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 15

Malania is a true and good friend to Michael:) Yes, he was a bit of a jerk at the beginning of the chapter, but given his chaotic state of mind, and his fear that his secret has been discovered, it is forgivable (especially because he went back to "normal", caring Michael).
And something struck me in the previous chapter - it was present in the other chapters too: Michael had become too involved in the lives of Casey and Diane, I think it was not very healthy.
It would be very nice to see Michael and Malania's adventures in town in the next chapter. I am curious if Michael will go unnoticed:)

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2020 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 13

i loved how Michael sensed there was something that was bothering Malania, that she was not herself. And it was nice to see her starting to open up to him about her past and about the relationship she has with her family. The understanding and connection between two hurt souls like Michael and Malania was done in a beautiful and realistic way.

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2020 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love how beautifully insert the flashbacks into the present time (and without notifying the reader). I feel like I am watching a movie. And even if the flashback does not seem to immediately connect to the present time presented in the same chapter, it feels like it is not random at all.
Malania has had a hard life. I loved the scene between her and her father, they seem to have a beautiful relationship.

Reviewer: Honor Bright Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2020 09:18 am Title: Chapter 10

Lovely chapter! I have been waiting for a longer conversation between Malania and Michael, and I am not disappointed:) It seems they have established a connection, and that they have things in common. It appears that Malania hides some trauma (and Michael perceived that) and the moment with her brother in the previous chapter is just a part of it. I loved that she was not intimidated or overwhelmed by Michael's status, nor did she act like a fangirl, but treated Michael like a human being.

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