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Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2022 03:08 pm Title: Cursed

Hey girl, it's me..anyway, I 've been rereading this over and over again and I'm eager to see what's next for Mike..can't imagine what Noelle would would want from him since she already did what she set out to do, but anyway...I hope your muse wakes up and time allows you to write down those details. <3

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2015 09:40 am Title: Cursed

Your descriptions are vivid and paint engrossing scenes. Your diction is on point and scenes are fluid.

I'm not much of a fantasy reader, so when the book came out, I raised an eyebrow. Well, that and recall "The Return of Oz" lol.  That being said, I think you have a creative premise and you carried it out very well. My main comments on things you might want to reconsider:

-make this a prologue rather than a first chapter. It feels more as though you are setting the reader up for the story than starting the story. Does that make sense?

-removing the last line. It was written in third person POV limited, but that last line made it suddenly omniscient. If you want the POV for the scene to remain consistent, I'd omit the line. Then add a date to the beginning of this chapter and the beginning of the next, to show time change.

Hope this helps!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you! That means a lot! I do know exactly what you mean. I actually read through it again before I asked you for your opinion and the first chapter is basically a prologue. I just didn't think to call it one. Thank you so much for your opinion. I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 06:48 pm Title: Cursed

Hey, I have to say this is pretty good so far. You have to promise me you'll update soon though. The suspense is killing me. I love your use of fantasy elements. Dark fantasy romance has always been my favorite genre to read and write. I am encouraging more from you. Keep writing & thank you for posting it. BTW I absolutely loved the ending 😀

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, thank you! That's so sweet! Yeah, it's my very first actual story for the site, so I was really nervous when I was about to post it. I'm really glad you liked it! I'm gonna try to update by next week, hopefully, so keep your eye out!

Reviewer: mjlover_378 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 08:57 pm Title: Cursed

This is so good! I'm happy that you finally have your story up. I'll definitely be reading. 😊



Author's Response:

Awwww, yay! I'm so glad you like it, Destiny! Thank you so much for your support! It means a lot! <3

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 05:39 pm Title: Cursed

Well well well, look who finally got her fic up. Was wondering how this was coming along!!

On a serious note though this was definitely worth the wait. I am very much intrigued..what a backstabbing little weasel Noelle is..took me by surprise to realize she's a witch. And your writing style is awesome..possibly better than mine. Well done! 

Looking forward to where this goes. <3



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know. It took me forever to work out this one little detail, but I finally got it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Chris! Yeah, Noelle is a sneaky thing, isn't she? We haven't seen the last of her, unfortunately. Thank you so much for the high praise! I appreciate it! <3

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2015 05:26 pm Title: Cursed

Poor Michael!! Hope he gets out! By the way, when are you gonna do your roleplay?

Author's Response:

Oh, he'll get out........eventually >_> I should have time for my RP in a few minutes. Thanks for reviewing, Syd!

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