[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2015 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 18 Happy ever after
Oh my God, no! Why?.. ......This is just a heartbreak for me, Don't get me Wong. I am very satisfied and happy that Sarah's and Michael's conflicts and hardships have been resolved and now their future has brighter days; but I'm devastated that it was at the expense of Gabriel's life.Especially now when he was bringing to light the less intimidating, selfish, stern, uptight,arrogant man I wish he would've shows more often. But I like to say...
It is what is...I loved reading this story.
Thank you very much.
Author's Response:
I knew it was gonna hurt you :( But thank you so much for all the feedback and comments.....its meant a LOT to me xxx
Date: Apr 27, 2015 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 18 Happy ever after
Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The ending was abrupt, but it was incredible! You reap what you sew, big time. Karma at its finest 👏
Author's Response:
yup that was my feeling lol.
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2015 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 18 Happy ever after
😭😭😭 Gabe is dead!!!! Whyyyyyyyy?? I whish they would have get along together before his death!! Oh God, I'm happy that Sarah got her baby and what Gabe had done was amazing!!! But I'm sad it has to end now!!!! Come back soon with more stories please miss! And thank u for this one!!!
Author's Response:
I am sad it's ended...don't laugh but i have felt empty all day :/ I will write more.....definitely and I have been planning the next story. I want to improve my writing so it's probably going to be a few days before the first chapter can be put together. Thanks for the comments and support x
Date: Apr 27, 2015 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 18 Happy ever after
Yes finally 👏
Author's Response:
lol, you wanted Gabriel dead or the happily ever after? heheheh
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2015 10:50 am Title: Chapter 17 - New Beginnings
There is just something that bothers me a bit... Even if Mike and Gabe hate each other, they are brothers so there is really not even an inch of Love between them??? I really want Michael to kick Gabe's ass, but I will love it if they began to care about each other as brothers...
Author's Response:
:( :( :( not in this story but i will definitely explore that in the prequel x
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2015 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 17 - New Beginnings
I just knew Gabe still had a soft spot for Sarah. Yes! Woman's intuition is superior to all!
Thank you and update.
Author's Response:
LOL....
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2015 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 17 - New Beginnings
Amazing girl!!! I've waited for this to happen for a long time!!! They are finally really together! They are so cute!!!!! Thank u for this!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
:D it's great! I wanted them to get it on for ages...hahahha
Date: Apr 26, 2015 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 17 - New Beginnings
Helll yeah I do! And honestly I'm a little surprised that the story is nearly at an end but I haven't ever lost interest in it. So no I don't think you have.
:-)
Author's Response:
all good things have to come to an end i guess :'( lol. But the prequel is another beginning lol
Date: Apr 26, 2015 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 17 - New Beginnings
FINALLY, they got together. Michael had better be hiding in the bushes during the meeting with Gabe; I have a bad feeling about it already. And a prequel would be fabulous!
Author's Response:
:D Yeah this meeting is going to be something.....hehehehe
Date: Apr 20, 2015 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 16 - A Night to Remember
I DONT KNOW! I still just keep on loving him, no matta wat.
I want to hate him completely, but i can't.
Help me.
Author's Response:
Lmao you do need help! I hate Gabriel.....I created a monster lol
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2015 03:34 am Title: Chapter 16 - A Night to Remember
Wow, Gabriel is really a fucking jerk!!! I hate him more and more!
And Michael and Sarah are sooooooo cute together!!! After all, Michael really deserves a revenge over Gabriel, he has been through a lot of difficult things because of this bastard!!! But I find him verry kind to Gabe though, He's really kinder than his bro who would have destroyed him for so long!
still in Love with this story miss, so please,update soon! ;-)
Author's Response:
He isn't necessarily kind to Gabe but rather avoiding him.....lol
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2015 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 16 - A Night to Remember
Now they know where they stand in their relationship. Yes.
And as usual we learn more of Gabe's douche behaviour.
(Drawls helplessly) But I still love him. *Sniff, sniff*
Author's Response:
LOOOOOL why do you love him so much?????
Date: Apr 19, 2015 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Hope
I have not a darn clue! But I want her and Michael to keep as safe as possible.
Author's Response:
hopefully :D
Date: Apr 19, 2015 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 16 - A Night to Remember
This was the breakthrough I was waiting for a86;a039;
Author's Response:
:D it was always coming......just had to hang on in there
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2015 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 15 - En France
Purpleskies I've read one of your review. You were saying that you'll have stop this story if three reviewers weren't there. You really scared me, because I thought that if they have really stopped to review you were going to stop the story (and I wasn't registered here at this moment!) . In fact I'm addicted to this story since "two sides of the same coin". I LOVE this story. You really have got talent. And remember that you have French fans, 'cause I'm French! About the story, Gabe is really an assholeand I hope Michael will find a way to kick his ass!!! Also, I prayed for Sarah to get her baby back!!!(And also, if I've made some mistakes, sorry, ;-) I don't really know if my English is great but I hope so!)
Author's Response:
*waves hello* - your English is perfect....my French is non-existent lol. Thank you so much for your messsage. It really really made my day :) You guys who have been commenting have really given me a lot of support.