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Reviewer: KTF1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2015 03:49 am Title: Chapter 1

I love the story and by the sigh from Michael at the end and the description of the arms rapped around him, I would think the girl was his girlfriend not the woman who he makes that a good assumption?

Author's Response:

That's a very good assumption! I had a story that continued the story line of this one-shot, but I accidentally deleted it. I might rewrite it in the near future.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2015 04:35 am Title: Chapter 1


Author's Response:

Hi sweetheart! Unfortunately, this story is only a one-shot.. I am planning on writing a new story if you ever feel like checking it out :) 

Reviewer: Michaela Josephine Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2014 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1


I was intrigued by the second story and just had to check this one out.




PS - Based on the concept of the artwork, I'm guessing the woman is Lisa Marie Presley.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this beautiful review! 

Reviewer: kimi2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2014 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is my third visit to your blog. We are starting a brand new initiative in the same category as this blog. Your blog provided us with valuable information to work with. You have done a marvellous job. 

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Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2014 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a beautiful set up to probably a really great story, how can I possibly help you? You're brilliant! You should give me advice Lol.

I'm about to go attack your other story and check out that Trey songz song. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) this means a lot coming from a very talented writer like yourself! I enjoyed the AMOUR special very much, so I am positive that I will enjoy AMOUR as well! 

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2014 03:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooo...I'd like to see this going further! I'd like to see them getting together again, carrying on with their affair, and dealing with whatever happens next. More, please!

Author's Response:

That's what my story "Sweet Temptation" is for! Have fun reading (: 

Reviewer: smooth_tabloidjunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2014 11:10 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this one-shot and I'm already really into the full story :') KEEP GOING, PLS!~

Author's Response:

Your encouragement will definitely keep me going! :)

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2014 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this one shot story you have done.

Please do a full story.

Author's Response:

I'm in the process of writing the first chapter! The reviews gave me the push to go ahead and type it up :) thank you for reviewing :) 

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2014 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1

I freaking loved it. Both are in a relationship cheating with eachother. I say continue.

Author's Response:

Everyone loves a risky affair hehe thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2014 04:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Sexy stuff ;). I googled it images the first 2 images that showed I was floored. The images are just like one of the scene in YANA (You are not Alone), Michael lays of the floor while his co star is above him.  It shows that Michael knew about this painting.

It would be interesting to see a full version but, can it be a one shot as well even if it has more chapters.  Now that I read the one shot, my curious nature can't wait for a chapter update every day.  I just would like to know how they met.  The 1st time together and finally after the night he claims he made her truly his if they finally chose to be together or continue their secret relationship.... Keep up the great work... l.o.v.e.....Lummi <3

Author's Response:

Yeah, about a year ago I learned that his short Film was actually based off that painting hehe and I have been thinking to do a one-shot with some chapters but also a story about 30-40 chapters long.... I will see what my mind decides to do lol. Thanks for your review though :)

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2014 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh loved it!

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