[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2014 06:34 pm Title: Not a Chapter
I had the same thought. Like maybe a Bonnie and Clyde type couple could kidnap him for ransom because he's Michael Jackson. And then the girl ends up feeling sorry for him and falls for him and then they gotta find a way to escape "Clyde"
It should be like a long story and really focus on the development between michael and the girl to express how she slowly ends up wanting to help him instead of hurt him.
Author's Response:
Oh I like it I make a start now
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2014 06:23 pm Title: The Laboratory
D: please save her jessica..we don't need her dead too..
Author's Response:
I know right all will be revealing in a few hours
Date: Nov 02, 2014 06:18 pm Title: The Laboratory
I hope Jessica saves her in time! What in the world is Michael thinking! Someone needs to save him as well before he destroys more lives! Keep going.
Author's Response:
All be relvealing soon I have the next chapter up later
Date: Oct 26, 2014 07:19 pm Title: Searching
OMG! What's Michael going to do?! Continue soon. I hope Jessica and them can help save Abbie in time!
Author's Response:
New chapter up tonight promise
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2014 05:57 am Title: Searching
i have a feeling this has to do with janet..because michael couldn't just do this out of the blue. also, is he saving abbie for an even worse torture than leah? i freaking love this story!
Author's Response:
good thinking next chapter will be up very soon
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2014 03:34 am Title: We got you Michael Joseph Jackson
now i see why he's doing this, but that doesn't mean he should kidnap a girl like abbie! great job, this has to be my favorite story!
Author's Response:
What he got planned it probably wprsest than you think ;)
Thank you I am glad you love it
Date: Oct 21, 2014 10:04 pm Title: We got you Michael Joseph Jackson
Surely he wont' be able to kill her... Oh poor Michael...now I feel bad for him, kind of... This still is not the way to deal with grief... I honestly have know clue what he will do with her. KEEP GOING! I'm dying in suspense.
Author's Response:
Writing the next chapter now
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2014 05:34 pm Title: Not giving up to cold blood
abbie's doing a really brave task, especially since michael just killed james, but michael is doing a good job at getting away..damn..
Author's Response:
She very brave espically with a mastermind like Michael
Date: Oct 19, 2014 08:31 pm Title: Not giving up to cold blood
This is some crazy shit!!!! Smh!!! Michael is psycho... I wasn't going to continue reading this story after chapter 1 but now I am intrigued...
Author's Response:
Hahahaha I glad you decidied to carry on thank you for the review
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2014 08:07 pm Title: Not giving up to cold blood
Michael just needs to meet a woman to tame him and calm him down! lol He's nuts! I hope Abbie is ok, but I have a feeling she's not gonna be...
Author's Response:
I agree I sure hope she be okay but it not looking at that good
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2014 06:49 pm Title: Suspicions
OMG continue soon!! Poor Abbie... Dude, what is Michael's deal?! lol
Author's Response:
I just literally updated, the poor brave soul lets see if she ever escape from Michael
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2014 05:30 am Title: Suspicions
Michael..you're running out of options..
Author's Response: Or is he?
Date: Oct 18, 2014 09:04 pm Title: Where Am I?
I think he wanted her to make the call. Why would there just a phone laying around like that... so yeah I think he has outsmarted them. Why do I think a kidnapper Michael is so sexy? lol
Author's Response:
I like your thinking and don't worry I think he sexy too it a shame he the bad guy ;p
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2014 09:01 pm Title: New Week New Trouble
Uh oh... Michael is crazy in this! I wonder what his story is! I'm so interetsed!
Author's Response:
He will get crazier I promise that you will find out his story as the story go on
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2014 11:56 am Title: New Week New Trouble
that escalated quite quickly..great job!
Author's Response:
i know right and thank you so much