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Reviewer: BabyGirl25135 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2014 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1

This made me cry. I'm so sad that baby died *sniffing*

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2014 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so sad and heart breaking. Please don't let this does be one chapter.

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2014 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey!! It's me again, ThrillerGal from wattpad!

Wow. This was so sad. Poor Natalie and Michael! This story reminded me of "Small Bump" by Ed Sheeran. If you haven't heard the song you should listen to it. It's beautiful(well, anything by Ed Sheeran is beautiful!) You really captured the sadness and the feeling of loosing a child. And I love the part where you added Michael's quote "If you come into this world knowing you are loved and leave knowing the same, everything inbetween can be dealt with". That's my favorite quote of Michael's. It's so powerful It's been so relevant in my life. This was an excellent one shot and I hope to see more writings of yours!

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