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Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2015 09:00 pm Title: Sore Egos and Nighttime Plans

I'm giving you the same eye that Michael just gave Bryan, for ending like that. I want to know what's up.

I like that Michael's jealousy is already coming out. He's not over her, and I'd rather have him chase her than go hit on random chicks. Any booty calls on his end, and I'm out. I've got no patience for dudes who chase after one, but do another.

 



Author's Response:

I'm terrible! And I haven't updated in almost a week (this applies to all of my stories...) I'll try to update tomorrow and not leave ya'll hanging. And yeah, Michael's pretty much above booty calls at this point. He's had the greatest he's ever gonna have nothing else is going to measure up. 

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2015 08:35 pm Title: Sore Egos and Nighttime Plans

Hey babe.. You should do anotha chapter.... tonight, yeah tonight. Im verrrrrryyyyyyyy impatient!

Author's Response:

I'll try for tomorrow. lol <3 Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2015 01:06 pm Title: Impendin' Doom

Nelly and Tyra lol! 

WHY?! Did Chivonn fall in the tone of his voice and attitude! She should've told him straight up! Michael was just scared of what she was going to say! WHY?! Aw man. Ain't nobody gunna keep Michael together like her. :( they were total opposites but they evened each other out. :((



Author's Response:

LOL!! and that gif made Tyra look dumb as hell. That's how I picture Camilla. 

Right, now that Michael's off Chivonn's tight leash who knows what kind of shenanigans he's going to get himself into. And without Michael to balance her out, Chivonn's just going to go back to that boring career woman lifestyle. That's kind of why Risa is her best friend, she helps balance that out and bring fun into her life. 

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2015 09:27 am Title: Impendin' Doom

ummm what the hell just happened ? !!!  They done jsut like that ? Wow.. I jsut dont know what to say...  Chivoon needs her own apartment.. She doesn't need to be living with Risa.. What a mess...



Author's Response:

Chev told him that if he went to South County they were through. He knows she doesn't play around so he figured why even try and gave up. Chivonn might be better off in her own apartment

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2015 03:21 am Title: Impendin' Doom

Oh MAI Gawd!! I had a lump in my throat the whole time. *TEARS!!!!!!* I can't believe he didn't even fight after all the chasing and shit he did. I understand he thought she was done but I think if he had shown he gave a fuck she would have crumbled and taken him back. The idea of her leaving him and moving in with that hatin ass Risa leaves a sour taste in my mouth. Ugh!!! Watch Risa try and get back with him on the low. I see that coming especially after his music starts popping and he blows up.

I'm sad now! :((((((

More soon don't leave us on this cliff!!! <333

P.S. The second to last chapter of Inked is up. It's almost goodbye :(



Author's Response:

In his mind, the battle was lost when he jumped in the car with Joseph. Chivonn told him straight up if he got involved she WILL leave him. So instead of risking a outright dumping he ruined everything himself. But right, Chivonn isn't as touch as he thinks she is if he had tried, he could have kept her. Risa... I don't want to spoil the story, but her hate for Michael (and keeping a little secret from Chev) has turned alot of readers against her, but I never intended on making her one of the 'bad guys' We'll see what happens though...

PS I don't know how I missed that update but I was so glad to get this review and notice it had been updated!!! <3<3<3 that storry!!! I will never say goodbye!!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2015 09:28 pm Title: Impendin' Doom

Cynthia is a fool if she keeps seeing Bryan. ffs.

Michael really screwed up. I wonder how he is going to fix this....and how much he is going to screw up before that happens. I love chapters that don't so much add drama as they do add more vitality to the already present plot twists. One of my favorites even if it is a sad one :)



Author's Response:

Any woman who dates Bryan is a fool. Especially by this point he's really shown who he is.

Michael did screw up. He could have handled things completely different, but as crazy as he is about Chivonn... that Jackson pride is standing in the way. Subconciously he knew he couldn't handle the outright rejection that he knew was coming as it was promised if he got involved so he sabatogued it all in spite of everything. I don't think this story can handle too much new drama.

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 10:38 am Title: It's Going Down

"If you let that ho come between you and yo brotha, I'll kill you myself. "  

Yeah, that's Joseph all right. So damn disrespectful. I have no idea why Katherine is with him. Michael should decked his ass for calling Chivon out of her name.. Like seriously?  This whole situation right here is just crazy on so many levels. Michael is clearly not thinking. Risa needs to mind her fucking business.  

I cannot say anything else because I just cannot go there right now..  i am just side eyeing this travesty.

 

No, I am not even to take a drink..  lol  am just going to wait for the next chapter. lol

 



Author's Response:

Michael just knows challenging Joseph is not a good idea. Let someone else call Chivonn a ho and they would be done! Over. 

LOL!! I'm going to have to take a drink just because you mentioned it lol

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2015 10:33 am Title: It's Going Down

Oh that Michael..*groans* he's gonna get himself killed or locked up? whatever happened to pressing charges and making sure the person responsible rots in prison??



Author's Response:

That would be too easy... lol 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2015 08:03 pm Title: It's Going Down

Michael reverts to a scared little boy around Joseph. That's a damn shame. He's never going to be able to leave the lifestyle behind until he stands up to his father. And letting Joseph call her a ho? Unacceptable. 

I hate to say I kinda agree with what Risa is saying. Well at least the last part...Risa is 100% wrong about Mike's motivations but irregardless, if he is going to be driving around the city killing people he doesn't deserve Chivonn's tears. Fuck if I was in her place, I would be done. She is a good woman and deserves an equally good man.  



Author's Response:

Joseph's pretty intimidating... He could have made an attempted to stand up for Chivonn but that probably wouldn't have ended well.

Risa is FOR SURE right about Bryan. Chivonn can't keep givin up her life to take care of him. Michael... its harder to say.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2015 07:30 pm Title: It's Going Down

Swing low sweet chariot comin for to carry me home!! Swing loooowwwwwwww sweet.. Girl you get where I'm coming from. Good god I'm in my feels with this. Michael why you so damned hard headed!! Risa you on Dhade level right now. I can't stand her hatin ass. I can't wait for Chiv to not leave Michael and Michael blowuptuaites then swerve her ass back in her damn lane. On he real though I don't even know what to do with myself right now. Lmao. 

All these BOMB updates have my blood pressure UP!!!

more soon! <333



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!! Your reviews never fail to make me laugh <3

Hey at least Risa and Sean aren't conspiring lol

Reviewer: jazii Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2015 05:17 pm Title: It's Going Down

Wow so this is the first time we meet Joseph and the first time we really get to see where Michael is coming from. Damn girl its a lit, no wonder he been going through so much, boy has been through the wire and is still caught up. I just wish for the best with him and Chivonn. And I hope that Jackie is okay. :( Peace

Update soon!

Author's Response:

It is! Joseph finally makes his debut and has caught Michael back up in the lifestyle he's done well to stay out of. Hopefully it doesn't ruin his chances at fame.

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2015 04:12 pm Title: It's Going Down

I don't know how to feel about Risa sometimes. She still rubs me the wrong way. Yes Michael is a 'roughneck' but you wanted him too! Honestly the only person Chivonn needs to listen to is herself!

Joseph's old ass get on my damn nerves! Damn and Michael cant do anything? I understand thats his brother. Family over everything...but...Does he wanna be in that damn hospital in the bed like Jackie????

 



Author's Response:

Right! Risa stays chasin' dudes just like Michael (CJ) she's just sour.

Joseph wasn't giving him an option. He could have stood up to his dad, but Joseph is more powerful than we know at this point.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2015 02:44 pm Title: It's Going Down

Michael's made his priorities clear. He can argue that he's doing this to protect Chivonn all that he wants, but frankly, there are better and easier ways to do that. smh. I'm loving your updates today!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! And you're right NOW he has the excuse he wanted to protect Chivonn, but if he knew what was coming instead of bolting to that closet to get his gun, he should have hauled ass back across town safe with his woman.

Reviewer: GreeneyesforMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2015 02:23 pm Title: Can he stay for a couple days... maybe a week?

Please let that heffa Risa know when it's time to shut up, homegirl is like an annoying chihuahua barking in that Chivonn's ear when she talk about mike. Damn put a muzzle on that bitch! Lmao



Author's Response:

LOL Risa can't STAND to see Chivonn with Michael. It's eating her alive!! lol 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2015 08:45 pm Title: Thinkin' Bout Missin' You

Oh My God. It was all peaches and cream....now it just got sour

damn! Not my mans Jackie! Michael about to act a fool



Author's Response:

Nooo not Jackie! We'll see if he'll make it or not. Michael is sure to act a fool either way. 

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