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Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2015 06:12 am Title: A Complete Missunderstandin'

Woah, Chivonn moved on from that pretty quickly. I mean "You know how I get when you don't let me speak" isn't exactly comforting. It's a cop-out. I mean, he also gave her an ultimatum and tried blaming her if he got arrested. Yet, one look and she forgives him? Not only that, but Chivonn didn't even stand up to his argument about Joseph....it doesn't matter if he didn't have a gun on him, if he's on parole then it's just as bad to be an accessory. Hell, most criminals know to keep their hands off if you are on parole.... And Bryan sure didn't hesitate long with Michael, despite having been guarding Chivonn and Risa for so many hours.

In other words - I'm watching you, Michael. smh.

It's funny - Michael and Risa bump heads a lot, but neither is clearly in the right. Both need to check themselves.



Author's Response:

Chivonn had a weak moment overcome with relief that Michael didn't end up doing anything to get himself locked up. Regardless of how wrong  he was she loves the guy. Michael's NOT off Josephs radar playing the middle man between Joseph and passing his jobs off to CJ, he's still in the mix and don't think Chivonn won't find out...

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2015 05:10 am Title: A Complete Missunderstandin'

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe...I should add some more Ws to that 'awe'. That was so easy. Lmao. They both have it BAD!!! I'm so happy they're back together and I know Michael would have given her the best 7 minutes of her life had she let him. Lmaoooooooo.  I now his whole insides is bubbling over with happiness. Now they just have to get rid of Joe's ass out of their life...Michael got to blow up and I want both Risa and Shade to SEETHE!!!!!!!  And things will smoother than a fresh jar of skippy. 

Got me quoting Bruno Mars. But I love it!! Is the story ending soon? I smell the end coming. 

More soon! <333 Sending you some of the ole creepy Internet Love!!!!



Author's Response:

It was TOO easy. Chivonn just got caught up in the moment feeling relieved that Michael didn't go off the deep end. He's still got some more dirt to come to light like this new "business" proposition he's got set up with CJ. The story is ending on chapter 50 BUT I do have future plans for it. Maybe like a short story sequel 

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2015 08:54 pm Title: A Complete Missunderstandin'

I loved this chapter. Im so glad they got everything squared away. Chevy is gonna have to be patient with michael, he had a hard life and she got to deal with who he is. She cant leave him every time he makes a mistake. He needs someone stable in his life for motivation and she is it. She also needs to put her friend In her place. Risa might not like mike but she got to respect him as chevys boyfriend. Im glad to see mike is controlling his anger more. He also needs to understand that chevys not use to the thug life and he has got to learn not to pop off when his actions take her by surprise and disappoint her. I see so much love and potential in this couple and this chapter just made it stronger. Next stop......babies lol.



Author's Response:

Chev is really hard on Michael and forgets that that life is all he knew. Michael's next session of anger management and he is trying hard not to let his anger get the best of him anymore. I'm proud of this couple! As far as babies... they got their hands full with Bryan's right now. 

Reviewer: HisEgyptianQueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2015 08:02 pm Title: A Complete Missunderstandin'

In all honesty Risa seems more like she's jealous of of Chivon and Michael's relationship.

Author's Response:

She is but Michaels actions only help her argument sometimes 

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2015 07:59 pm Title: A Complete Missunderstandin'

Yea..They are back together!!!

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2015 01:26 pm Title: Shuttin' it Down or Gettin' Shut Down

oh boy...

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2015 09:36 pm Title: Shuttin' it Down or Gettin' Shut Down

Sorry, but I think chevy kinda overreacted. I knew he wasnt gonna hurt her so she should have known that as well. Mike should just tell her about his fear of joseph and tell her that he had no choice but to leave with him or Joseph would come after her. All he tried to do was save her life. Maybe he would have told her that if she would have talked to him. I don't like risa at all Lol.



Author's Response:

They ALL overreacted. Everyone was expecting the worse out of Michael and really all he wanted was to talk to her. His temper flares when he doesn't get his way... and you're right. He did what he did to keep Chivonn off Joseph's radar. Nobody likes Risa lol But one things clear she HATES Michael. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2015 08:14 pm Title: Shuttin' it Down or Gettin' Shut Down

1. I'm glad Michael went after Chivonn

2. I'm glad Chivonn laid down a line and stuck with it.

3. I like how you kept Michael in his developed character, torn between the impulse and his developing sense of control.

4. I need an update 20 minutes ago. Okay? Thanks.



Author's Response:

I'll try to update soon like tomorrow soon (I know I say that all the time.) But yeah Chivonn is definitely no push over and Michael, though he's come a long way thus far, bad Michael is still in there somewhere trying to take over. 

 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2015 08:12 pm Title: Shuttin' it Down or Gettin' Shut Down

My heart was in my throat at one point. Lmao. I'm not so sure Michael was really going to hit Risa. Everybody's panties all in a bunch and Michael passed out somewhere. Still not feeling Risa at all. Girl Betta clean her house for she come to Chiv's house asking why she got dirty dishes. Hmph. Michael fucked up big time. Why he had to go cast threats. Old habits die hard but I'm glad he got drunk instead of stupid. Throw up is easier to clean than blood. 

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

You're exactly right about Michael hitting Risa. He could have been just rearing back to scare her. Which is still wrong on his part but not nearly as bad as everyone was makin' it out to be. Same thing with the threat he may not have meant it exactly how it sounded. 

Thanks as always for your internet love and support! <3

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 08:49 pm Title: Sore Egos and Nighttime Plans

omg!! i finished this story in like a day lol! its a love hate relationship with michaels character. like why cant he just get it together? cant wait for next chapter!! poor chivonn is in for a surprise :o



Author's Response:

LOL thanks for reviewing and yes Chivonn did get her surprise alright. 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2015 09:50 am Title: Sore Egos and Nighttime Plans

CJ is worse than Michael, Risa is pretty damn hypocritical giving Chivonn advice to ditch Mike when she's dating that guy.

Michael needs to drop the front already, and stop trying to act all tough. I see through you Boo and I'm hoping the minute you show your green-eyed mug at that club Chivonn will too. I hope he doesn't get into any fights, cause I think all it will take at this point is for Chivonn to dance with another guy. Or look at another guy. Or wear something skimpy. Or for Risa to mouth off. Lol.  Mike is setting himself up to be a ticking time bomb. 

 



Author's Response:

Risa don't even have a clue half of the stuff CJ does. Just because his record is clean she thinks he's good. 

At this point lol all it would take is someone lookin' at him cross eyed LOL he's about to BLOW. 

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 07:16 am Title: Sore Egos and Nighttime Plans

Side Eye: Here comes the ratchedness. Some ratchedness is about to go down.  Girl that's all I have to say about this chapter lol However, please continue.....



Author's Response:

LOL Some ratchedness may occur beware. But don't expect a full blown ratchedfest. 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 06:16 am Title: Sore Egos and Nighttime Plans

tsk, tsk..I hope that dream in the beginning don't come true..I mean no woman is worth losing honor over, same goes for women in regards to men..



Author's Response:

Exactly. It's really not worth it, but emotions can do crazy things to people. Hopefully Michael can keep his in check. 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 04:58 am Title: Impendin' Doom

Girl I know I have catching up to do..sorry about that..but I haven't been on nearly as much and was concentrating on one of my other favorite fandoms but I thought I would take a small break so I can read your stuff..anyway..That bit about Michael and his brothers pretending the pillow was Joseph when they were little and beating it, no surprise at all..considering how when he and Janet were little they would fantasize about Joseph being dead and how it would make them feel..and the breakup went calmer than I expected to..had expected lots of yelling..although it's understandable why they didn't because they would wake up the children..I wonder where Michael will go from here. 



Author's Response:

Lol that's ok. That's where I came up with that bit from!! I read all about the stuff he said on those tapes. Even in my most OOC type stories I try to through in bits and pieces of realistic parts of Michael's life. So that's it's not too far detached. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2015 10:05 pm Title: Sore Egos and Nighttime Plans

Laaaaawwwwwwddddddd! Sweet baby Jesus this chapter got me twisted up in the game. Michael's back to being an ass but that jealousy seeped in real quick. 

Shit I really can't take Risa's ass at all. My gut tells me that her concern about this break up has less to do with Chiv and more with just being a hatin ass. Ugh. Her boyfriend out there thuggin actively and she on Michael for what he USED to do. Chick get your shit togeva and make sure that mote ain't in your eye.

Michael finna tear that damn club down. Well maybe he'll keep it classy. Hmmm we'll see.

More soon!!<333 

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