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Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2022 12:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine

Awwwh..

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2022 12:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Can only imagine Sveta's reaction when she finds out the truth.

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2022 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

O.O biting her thigh?? That's different..

Enjoyed him showing Sveta a good time, though.

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2022 12:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Six

Oooo..eager to see it..now onto the next chapter.

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2022 12:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

That part where Mike hypnotized the waitress made me do a double take for a second..made me think of a Sailor Moon episode where Berthier hypnotized this woman so she wouldn't have to register for the chest tournament..

 

Anyway it was a sweet chapter. 

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2022 11:51 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

So so cute..just loved it when Sveta played with Mike's hair. 

Reviewer: zezinha Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2017 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Forty

I read this whole thing in under two days! It's fantastic. I went thru a whole vampire stage during the 'Twilight' hype. This is even better. Have you abandoned this story? I hope not.

Author's Response:

The last couple chapters were deleted (my fault for not saving them) so it's like I don't even know where I left off. I think I may reVAMP this story in a different light soon after I finish my others.

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2016 04:31 am Title: Chapter Forty

Hey , when will you continue with the story?

Author's Response:

I don't know... it's missing chapters, I may just have to revamp the whole story.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2016 02:01 pm Title: Part 2 Prologue

The story it awesome! You deserved the win. Congrats!

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2016 02:00 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine

Yikes! I'm sure they'll work it how somehow. But in the meantime, I wonder how long they're going to be a part.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2016 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Uh-oh! Looks like the Men in Black for vampires have arrived. Lana better play it cool.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2016 01:43 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Whow! Michael totally lost it there in the end lmao! And they were doing so well too. Sorry for the delayed review. I'm finally getting back into the swing of things.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2016 06:43 am Title: Chapter Forty

Aweee man. Their reunion was quite casual. I'm surprised she was so willing to let Michael into her space. I fully expected her to exploded angrily. That goes to show just how much she's still in love with him. I know he's still in love with her. 

Now for Kari. Damn she's going to either get killed or Sam is going to get seriously hurt. You are back with a vengeance with this story!!

More soon!! <333 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2016 06:30 am Title: Part 2 Prologue

2 UPDATES?!?!?!? I'm LATE. Don't kill me my creepy internet love!!!! 😩😭

Short but sweet. I'm so disappointed Michael didn't make more of an effort to make a clean honest break. I think that and the trauma of her father resurfacing has sent Lana into a tailspin and I highly doubt it's even remotely began. 

On to the next one! <333

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2016 12:29 pm Title: Chapter Forty

After looking at the amazing banner for your story for a hundred times, I think I finally recognized the photo in the background. That's Castle Miranda in Belgium, right? On another note, great chapter. Please update soon!

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