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Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2014 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 32

That was adorable! A sweet, petite cute little romance!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews 

I really loved writing this story (never thought I would have more than 10 chapters but I got till 32 chapters) 

 

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 30

They are such a cute family!!! You're doing a great job. Please continue.



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Thank you 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:41 am Title: Chapter 27

Wow!!! Those eyes! Angel has amazingly beautiful eyes? Especially with her skin and hair!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes shes a really pretty baby (I heard there are very few people on the planet with a combination of those eyes and skin I think it's beautiful) 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 25

Yes!



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:) 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 05:25 am Title: Chapter 24

So close to getting caught! That could've been so much more embarrassing!



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Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 11:35 am Title: Chapter 21

The argument was funny at the end!!! Never piss off a pregnant woman.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 09:20 am Title: Chapter 22

Damn why all these psychos in their lives now?!



Author's Response:

Pshycho nr 1 (Christina) is in jail 

And the other 2 are media/press 

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 08:01 am Title: Chapter 20

aww they gonna have twins poor michael about fainted over that lol great chapter 



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Thank you 

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 07:52 am Title: Chapter 19

aww so sweet this chapter is just beautiful



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 04:02 am Title: Chapter 21

That living room has Michael all over it, you can imagine him laying there, bored outta his brain, while he waits for Disney channel to come on!



Author's Response:

Yes so true 

I thought in my story they live in a penthouse but I wanted to put the original style from Neverland in it that's why I choose that picture 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 12:11 am Title: Chapter 20

Ok! I'll review! Wow! Psychotic slut much? She was totally gonna rape him! What a hoe!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you yes very 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2014 04:33 am Title: Chapter 19

They gettin married! I hear wedding bells! ... And unfortunately I have a sensation that psychotic slut will be back...



Author's Response:

Hmm we will see 

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2014 02:57 am Title: Chapter 17

christina will rot in jail great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2014 02:10 am Title: Chapter 13

man christina is creepy obsessed 



Author's Response:

Yes she is 

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2014 12:32 am Title: Chapter 18

I love this story. Please continue!!!



Author's Response:

I will thank you for reviewing

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