Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2020 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 29--Closing Doors

*Pleeeeease MJ fiction Gods let the next chapter be the one in which thy cherry is popped...Amen 🙏*
On a serious note...
Full tits, big ass and what??? Ahahaha!!!
Initially I had every intention of an angry review for making us wait soooooo long for an update but now you are forgiven, these two are just ooooooooo love their magnetic pull to each other, she will defo be forgiven for having her cake and eating it too. Hey what about that other chick that had babies by two of Michael's brothers...hehe! She wipl survive the blow back.
Love how she is known as Angel to security too, now wondering how much of MJ and Keisha's interactions are caught on camera...big brother is watching kind of creepy. Make a choice Keisha...I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: MJlegacy14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2020 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 29--Closing Doors

A few sporadic thoughts here. I'll apologize later. Judge me not when I say that when you mentioned his boots clacking across the ground, on his way to the butterfly garden, I pictured the boots from BAD. Secondly. When you say he smells likes Thanksgiving, the only thing I could smell was macaroni. Hahah. And lastly...teach me how to love by musiq soulchild. That's the song that comes to mind. 

 

On a very serious note, I agree with Michael when he says she needs to choose. She can't keep stringing them both along. Regardless of all of that, she's going to end up hurting someone in the process. Might as well do it cold turkey style. 

Author's Response:

I mean Thanksgiving like Pumpkin pie and all spice and sweet potatoes!  LMAO!!  Can you imagine Michael Jackson smelling like Mac & Cheese?  Gross!!! LOL

 

Teach me How to Love was what I was going for ha ha.

Reviewer: coolkat123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2020 11:34 am Title: Chapter 29--Closing Doors

I wonder what the real reason is for keisha holding back so much. She does the same thing with Taj as well. Maybe exploring new feelings makes her uneasy and unsure which is something she dislikes. It seems like keisha really hates when she feels she isn't in control of her emotions and when she is around Michael, she experiences new feelings that she doesn't know how to control and that scares her. Idk this is just my little quick analysis of Keisha. I'm super anxious just imagining how she will react. With all that being said, I am so happy you updated and am itching for another chapter 

Author's Response:

I like your analysis.  You're on the right track LOL

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2020 08:04 am Title: Chapter 28--Fly Me to the Moon

Oh. My. Goodness!!! Gurl!!! I hope Keisha comes back or something. When he's ready, she's not and when she's ready, she's not. Waiting for next update :)

Reviewer: coolkat123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2020 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 28--Fly Me to the Moon

Nooooo this cliffhanger is torture😭. This a lot for Keisha to process. I just hope she doesn't overthink this and drive herself crazy. She is such a meticulous person but sometimes you gotta let go and allow your heart to guide you. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm hooked !

Reviewer: coolkat123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2020 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 28--Fly Me to the Moon

Nooooo this cliffhanger is torture😭. This a lot for Keisha to process. I just hope she doesn't overthink this and drive herself crazy. She is such a meticulous person but sometimes you gotta let go and allow your heart to guide you. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm hooked !

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2020 11:56 am Title: Chapter 28--Fly Me to the Moon

“Yes ma’am,” Zafir gushed enthusiastically, as he turned to the side in the mirror and admired his rear end, “And then I’ma get up and have more dick for breakfast.”

Zafir is THAT guy! XD 
I really like Quinton. He's using Kenny's spot to be Michael's common sense, which Michael needs until he gets his life together. 
Damn, Keisha can ruin a mood. But... I can't blame her. I would be intimidated and confused too.

Author's Response:

Zafir is worse than Roxy, and I mean that. LOL.

 

Keisha's just overwhelmed.  She MAY get it together. ha ha.