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Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2014 01:51 am Title: My Love Of The Night

okay sorry...... i wasnt completely sure the previous time..... forget that plot, here's a new one......... Name: Clamar Age: 25 Description: 5 ft 6' tall, spanish accent, brown eyes, wavy brown hair, slim Personality:smart mouth, tomboy... insane and funny.. volupturous Plot: she goes out on a summer vacation to Miami with her friend, Jade (+ jade's boyfriend Beck) she stays on a beautiful beachhouse(owned by her uncle,William Levy) right next to Michael's( Dangerous era).. spot each other the first time, at each other's balconies that night then the next night at the beach( since Clamar couldnt stand hearing the moans of her friends fucking so she headed out for a night walk to the beach) . Things get out of hand between Clamar and Michael(they fuck,and make love till daybreak, and when she leaves, she cant forget him and neither can he

Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2014 01:13 am Title: Request

Name: Mardee.............. Age: 18.......... Description: 5 ft 6' tall, brown eyes, wavy shoulder length brown hair, chocolate caramel skin............... Personality: Quiet,solo girl,smartmouth when mad..... short tempered.... make funny comments..... shy at first, but bold and fiery when agitated.... very bioblar....... Plot: Just visited aunt in Illinois,Chicago from Puerto Rico, cousins Neyana and Clark bonded..... meeting Michael(bad era) a friend of Clark(20)..... had erotic fun with Michael..... Clark develops feelings for his cousin making Michael his competition..... both have fun with her..... till when she leaves, and cant decide who she wants..... neyana has a thing for michael..... and janet,michael's kid sister( neyana's BFF) is crushing Clark

Reviewer: Mjlover378 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2014 07:58 pm Title: Magic Mike (Part 1)

Hi, I love your writing! Will you be updating soon? :)

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 11:48 am Title: My Love Of The Night

Name: Fatima
Age: 21
Description: 5/7 light skin, full lips, long red hair, brown eyes, full C cup breasts, beautiful smile, curvy, sweet, and shy.
Plot: Michael takes one of his nightly walks through the streets lookin for a friend to talk to and meets me. I'm sitting on a bench in a park by myself just gazing at the stars and he comes over and speaks to me. Just a passionate love scene then he asks me to be his girl. :-)
Thriller Era

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 07:04 pm Title: My Love Of The Night

Name: Danielle Rivera

Age:22

Description: Very pretty,full lips, pretty dark brown eyes,dark brown hair,medium breast(not too big and not to small),thick but skinny, has a big sexy round ass that girls would die for, very curvy,pretty smile

Personality: sweet,friendly,funny,good hearted and loyal.She also love to sing,draw or hang out with her best friend Michael Jackson

Plot: Danielle has a huge crush on michael(he has a huge crush on her too) and wants to hang out with him this friday night to watch a movie at his house. So on friday, she goes over to his house to watch a movie. But  then when the sex scene comes on, things start to get very, very, very steamy with them in bed.

Michael will be in the Off The Wall Era and is also 22 years old

(He is not famous)

 

Danielle        

Danielle Rivera

 

Michael  

Michael Jackson

 

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 04:30 pm Title: My Love Of The Night

Are you still taking request?

Author's Response:

Yes I am

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 04:08 pm Title: My Love Of The Night

Aww, this was so romantic, sweet and hot all at once! 

One more, then it's my turn! YAY!! ^_^



Author's Response:

Yep

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 04:07 pm Title: My Love Of The Night

Oh my God!! *squeals* That was so sweet! I loved it!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you, Sapphire!! I love you, girl! I owe you a story, now! <3<3



Author's Response:

You're very welcome anything for you ^_^  and thank you

Reviewer: Nat5682 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2014 09:34 pm Title: Request

Name: Collette

Age: 21

Description: Long wavy platinum blond hair, fair porcelain skin, crystal blue eyes, curvy body.

Era: dangerous

Plot: Collete is a princess in somekind of kingdom. Her mother, the queen suddenly fell ill in a rare disease. Michael came as a duke providing the medicine but in exchange of the princess's body in any way he likes (bdsm, embarassing sexual punishment..ect ;) get wicked ) Princess Collette kept rejecting at first but she had to accept for her mother....and slowly starts to love the affair...



Author's Response:

I can do you that no problem ;) >:)

Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2014 04:09 pm Title: Magic Mike (Part 1)

That my love is one hell of a story! I loveeeeeeed it!! Thank u so much chicka! 



Author's Response:

You're very welcome and I'm glad you loved it

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2014 02:38 pm Title: One Hell Of A Night

Hot story, girl! ;)

The way Michael looked in the Smooth Criminal film....*drool* That man could wear the hell out of a suit! 



Author's Response:

Yep and I would too lol ;)

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2014 12:00 pm Title: One Hell Of A Night

oh wow that was hot



Author's Response:

I make it lol I know I died when I made that story

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2014 11:35 am Title: One Hell Of A Night

Damn!!!



Author's Response:

Lol you know it ;)

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2014 03:06 am Title: Request

Ooh! Yay!

name: Randi

age: 22

discription: burgundy hair with black streaks, brown eyes, Caucasian with tanned complexion, petite, 34D, 5'3"

personality: spunky, outspoken, kind, not shy, cute, fun, devoted, artistic, passionate

era: Dangerous/HIStory

plot: Michael and I haven't spoken for weeks. We're married, but after the day we ended up in a car crash after a date night, we haven't been the same. I'm upset and feel guilty (I had been driving that night) and try repeatedly to get michael to acknowledge me, talk to me, anything, but the most I get is a scattered word or phrase here and there. Not even eye contact. 

Eventually, I discover he has a bouquet of flowers ordered and he goes out to our "spot" (where we had our first date, first kiss, etc), not even inviting me but I follow him anyways. I become upset, thinking he's seeing somebody else, having the nerve to meet at our special place. It doesn't make it better when he has the good grace to shed a tear, but he keeps going. 

When he finally arrives at our place - me demanding the whole way that he at least LOOK AT ME and say goodbye to my face, but I stop and realize there's a headstone in front of him - with my name on it. 

The accident comes rushing back to me: me driving us home on a rainy night After a great anniversary, something happens to make us flip and tumble off the road, Michael pulls us both out, I have a major injury and Michael has to carry me, trying to stop me from going to sleep. I try, but sadly I give in to the fatigue that I can't shake.

I'll leave it up to you how it ends. I hope I wasn't so specific that I've made it difficult. It doesn't have  to be EXACTLY how I described, but I would like something along those lines. Fell free to wander off into any direction your muse takes you! :) Pretty please? I can't wait to see what you come up with! Xoxox



Author's Response:

Of course and I love the plot by the way and I'll do my best of making that happen

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 04:12 pm Title: Magic Mike (Part 1)

thank youuuuuuuu



Author's Response:

Welcome

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