Date: Oct 26, 2016 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1. Another Lonely Night
Awesome first chapter! I'll definitely check out the others :)
Date: Jun 04, 2016 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 3.
A good start for a first fanfiction. Wish the chapters were longer but it shows promise :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2016 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1. Another Lonely Night
aww sad
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2015 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 3.
Wow... it was a good thing Michael showed up when he did and saved Cara from her abusive uncle the way he did... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I actually wasn't completely done with the chapter it's still missing some parts but I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2015 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 2. Mad World
Oh, wow…! Very awesome so far, as well as very well-written, too. I like it. :)
Plus, I hope that Cara’s uncle Fred will get the punishment he deserves, such as prison. If he goes there, he will learn how Cara must have felt when the prison inmates hear about what he tried to do to her, and would probably call out things like “Give him to us!”, for it is said that people like child abusers, pedophiles and child molesters are not very popular in prison.
Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)
Date: Jun 24, 2015 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 2. Mad World
More! I love it so far! (:
Date: Jan 23, 2014 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1. Another Lonely Night
That was really good cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! The next chapter is already up.