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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2016 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 17: Critical Condition

What a story!



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Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!! ^_^ 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2016 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 16: Eagle Eye

Wow! What a terrible thing jealousy is...

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2016 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 13: A Room with a View

I like how well they get along and are getting to know each other.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2016 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 12: Cruel Intentions

Lucky for him!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2016 08:41 am Title: Chapter 11: Memory Lane

That was a good suggestion.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2016 12:49 am Title: Chapter 10: Zookeeper

Mike really wanted to get to know Joe...

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2016 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 9: "Love, Bonehead"

She shouldn't appear too anxious.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2016 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: Explain Yourself

I enjoy reading and re-reading your story.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2015 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 17: Critical Condition

I'm so glad your back. I hope everything has gotten better for you now.

I was getting extra extra nervous reading this chapter. I thought she was gonna slip away forever but Michael is so loving just to never leave her side and make sure she gets the help that she needs speaks tons of volumes on his part. 

I'm just so happy that they revived her and she's back alive maybe not well but she's fought through and came back.

Not sureif you condone in bad language but I pray to God they catch that bitch and Michael fire that blond headed skeezer as well.

 

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2015 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 17: Critical Condition

Excellent story!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 15: Doubt

I had totally skipped this chapter, lol. Smh!!!! I didn't even see it. 

But uhh.... Eden, is really trying to dig up some dirt on homegirl tho when the story Celese told her isn't even true. She just trying to paint Joe out as the bad person when really Joe is the victim. Eden needs to stay in her freaking lane before she is kicked off which I hope and pray it does happen. She is causing too much unnecessary drama and whatnot. 

As for Michael, you don't go off and believe something from a secondary sourse who really don't know what happened themselves just because they were told by someone. Michael should know better. Joe came as a woman who was opened about her life to him, unlike Eden who just wanted some damn 'D'.

And for him to go as low as to say she could have been lying about her father just to earn his trust.... really??? Mike??? Why would she lie about her dad being killed in a hate crime?? His head is really gone now. He is full of doubt when he shouldn't be. If she was being/keeping it 100 with you from day one, what makes you think she wouldn't continue it?

More soon love. <3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 16: Eagle Eye

Omg, you're back. Love the chapter you've updated. I hope they catch that witch Celeste. And Eden needs to really stay in her lane. Smh.

And about your dad, I'm so sorry to hear about your loss. I couldn't even imagine how that would feel to lose your father. My condolences to you and your family. Be strong bbg:) <33

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your well-wishes <3.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story! 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 15: Doubt

You're back! I missed this story.

Mike had better fix it. He should know better than to believe anything Eden says or does. Its normal for someone in his position to be cautious but he needs to apply that caution to everyone especially Eden. There is also a way for him to approach the whole thing without being accusatory. He should have just shown Joe the note and let her explain, rather than implying he believed it from jump. 

He had better drag his narrow ass over to Joe and apologize. 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2015 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 14: Who Knew?

Enjoyed reading and rereading your story. Please add more chapters.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2014 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 14: Who Knew?

This is my first time reviewing for this story and i must say, you're doing hell of a good job writing this. I so love Joe and Michael and the chemistry that they share. I hope they get together soon too. And Eden needs to get the fuck on somewhere like foreal. She really is that desperate. Smdh. And she has some nerve to try and get info about Joe ad call up some chick Celeste to figure out what happen and ruin Joe's relationship or whatever it is with Mike. Fucking bitch. If something does pop off, I hope Mike doesn't ruin what he has with Joe all because of some desperate ass bitch named Eden. Cause if he do I'll be TOTALLY furious. It'll break Joe's heart including mine cause i love them together. They make a very cute couple.

Keep up the great work and please update more chapters really soon. Your story is phenomenal. Im addicted! :)

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