[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 01:17 am Title: Chapter 2
O_o This chspter makes my brain go all "Just watched Inception. Mind permanantly messed up" -y. Mike's part was so very confusing, especially the old man and the voodoo lady o_O I was throughly puzzled. And for the pov change, I had bo clue the pov was changing, I though MJ had became a female during his crazy transformation. O_O But I get it now, lol sorta. Its a re face off, cept one doesn't quite remeber the time (xD See what I did there? Lol) Mindboggling but awesome chapter! More? Please? Lol
Author's Response: Im trying my hardest to help you guys understand but its a hard concept to grasp I suppose. Maybe I will just create a very thorough summary. There will definitely be more. Thank you for reviewing
Date: Jan 16, 2014 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
So chapter 1 had me confused as all hell, but now This is getting mighty interesting. Bring on chapter 3 and then some! :)
Author's Response:
lmao i was hoping that no one would be confused. It's a complicated concept but im trying my hardest to explain it. I'll be posting soon thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2014 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! Please continue lol. I its unusual but interesting. You have my under most attention. I am just wondering what is he? A genie? Or something? Idk. But the girl wanted to die and he did it. I am sort of confused but I like where you started the story from :)
Author's Response: Yea its going to be confusing in the beginning lol but it will start making since at some point
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2014 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is fuckin' awesome!!! I love this Michael. Yes... continue... YOU MUST!!!! LOL! :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you and I will continue
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2014 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gurlaaaa dis iz da bomb moe! Giuurl I gots ta read da nex chapta! Yo feelz me bob!
Author's Response: No.....just no! You aren't from DC your accent is horrid!
Date: Jan 11, 2014 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
You should its good
Author's Response:
I will and thank you
Date: Jan 11, 2014 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is good , I like the fact that your always coming up with great new story ideas for the site :) please update soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I really do try to keep the wheels turning and to create new stuff. I really am trying to progress though I want each story to sort of show my improvement. Anywho thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2014 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far, can't wait for more. Btw can you update Strictly Professional please? Thanks. ;)
Author's Response:
Lol I have alot of updating to do but I will definitely try to get around to it. Thanks for reviewing I'm glad you like it.
Date: Jan 11, 2014 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I've seen all the season its very good then they got a new one called Once Upon A Time In Wonderland
Author's Response:
Yea my sister told me about it. I'm definitely gonna watch it next.
Date: Jan 11, 2014 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Yea have you watch the alice in the wonderland version
Author's Response:
Not yet. M sister introduced it to me not too long ago so I'm only on the second season right now but I'm absolutely in love with it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2014 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1
This is very...wow! I've never read something like this! Or seen something like this! This is amazing!!!! I'm really interested in this, grossed out as well, but still interested! Shoot, MJ jumped out a window, hoping he either learns to fly or his ex canniabalistic girlfriend comes to the rescue(Which'll probably be a blessing and a curse) PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm gonna continue right now. I'm very excited about this story and I'm really really glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2014 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it and you watch Once Upon Time?
Author's Response:
Of course lol