Reviews For Devil's Kiss
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Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 04:09 pm Title: CHAPTER 8

The anxiousness I feel with every chapter I read is almost unbearable. You have really taken these characters and made them real. It's like I can feel everything Jael feels. It's crazy good. You're such a brilliant writer. I wanna jump out on a limb and ask you to help me make my story writing better. I don't know if you've read any of my work yet, but if you could tell what to improve on. I feel like many people on this site could learn a great deal from your skills. I give this chapter A++++++ wow! Amazing. 

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2014 03:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 7

Wooooooooooowww update soon! Golly Jael, tell the truth honey. This story is beyo------nd amazing 

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2014 03:58 am Title: CHAPTER 6

i love this story

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2014 08:25 pm Title: CHAPTER 6

God Michael is such an enigma. Jael you go girl! Way to protect yourself. I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is my jam tho. 

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2014 04:40 pm Title: CHAPTER 6

Michael need to admit that he into her. Treating her bad cuz he like her. I see you Michael, you ain't slick. 

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2014 04:38 pm Title: CHAPTER 6

So happy to see this updated one of my favorites can't wait for more. :-)

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2014 06:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 5

i hope michael gets a reality check! he is so mean to her 

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2014 02:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 5

I missed this story glad to see you updatex it can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2014 01:34 pm Title: CHAPTER 4

Wow that Michael is something else. Totally amazing writing if I do say so myself.

"Next to her I'd look like a thumb... The sore kind, too! I'm such a humpty dumpty. Nothing desirable. It's not that I'm fat, just not exactly mannequin material like those walking stilts over there." 

That was hilarious.XD I almost died of laughter.

this is one of my favorite stories and you my lady are a favorite author of mine. Update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. 

 

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2014 05:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 4

i like where this story is headed! i really feel sorry for michaels character. i hope you update soon 

Reviewer: Mjfan43va Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2014 09:49 pm Title: CHAPTER 4

This story is awesome! I can't wait to see what Michael is gonna pick for her to wear.

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2014 05:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 4

Hey I was wondering what happen to you glad to see you back I love this story can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad to be back! I'm determined to finish this story, even if it takes forever, since life's really been kicking my butt these days XD

Stay tuned! x

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2013 01:45 pm Title: CHAPTER 3

i think he likes her

Reviewer: Michaellivesforever Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2013 05:17 am Title: CHAPTER 3

I love this right more please!!!!!! d84;a039;

Reviewer: AishaLuv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2013 02:24 am Title: CHAPTER 3

X'D See, I knew there'd be a dark side to him....man I hate how the press started treatin him soon as he became #1 

How do these people sleep at nigth? smh. well anyway, Michael didn't take it very well XD Poor baby,,and poor Jael for what he did to her,, though I LOVE me some angry,sexy Michael lol

Ohh I just love your writin girl, keep going!! I kinda hooked on this story already! Thnx,

Ash ;^)

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