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Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2014 11:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 6

You have me so mad at Michael for not going after her. Who turns on the tv right after that moment?! Ugh.

Both need to learn to talk to eachother. SMH

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2014 11:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 5

One question: why does he keep calling her "ms"? Where's her random nickname?

Hmm. Taking the biggest singer out, undisguised, to a nightclub. Where paps can easily catch a shot of him wasted...and drugged up. Frank is going to need medical attention.  In the meantime, this Michael needs to man up and take some responsibility sometime.

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Date: Jul 20, 2014 11:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 4

The fighting-flirting is too cute. I love it.

The bathroom scene: thank god she has no boundaries and broke into his room. What a shocking scene. I think I spent their entire conversation looking like confused.

The post suicide-intervention cup of cocoa (lol) was a welcome respite. I want to hear more about his sketch...and what he picks out for her.

^my commentary looks rather twisted. I guess I should take that as a sign that you are doing a good job of balancing the drama with the romance? Either way, I hope this story is looong.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2014 10:14 pm Title: CHAPTER 3

MJ is dark in this one! I'm rather intrigued. I want to know more about this dark version of MJ. I can't believe he grabbed her arm that roughly! And then blaming her for it? I mean...well, I can get that she really overstepped. REALLY overstepped.

Random: I love how you painted each scene. I instantly had a rich visual of each. Usually I have to ask myself where someone is or how something happened. I have yet to need to do that when reading your stories...including my favorite unfinished one *not so subtle nudge*

You just made cream soda sigh worthy. Congrats :)

 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2014 10:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 2

That was seriously cringeworthy. Priority #1 is always washing off the face mask. Always.

Two Jacksons in one night. Hmmm. I hope Michael keeps needing her phone.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2014 09:53 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

"It doesn't help that the great Michael Jackson is really just a bipolar, two-faced, controlling and manipulative diva with a temper behind closed doors, neither..." damn

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2014 04:37 pm Title: CHAPTER 11

This was really sweet.

Reviewer: oblivion Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2014 03:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 10

she keeps blaming hersle for michael being messed up and assulting her? and then she just let him back in her room????? ._. does she have marbles missing? lol

Reviewer: noelle1216 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2014 12:22 am Title: CHAPTER 9

That is DEEP. Great job! Can't wait for another update:)

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 04:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 9

I understand he's got some issues and alot of frustration inside him but that doesn't excuse what he did to her that was unacceptable and she didn't deserve that.

Author's Response:

Yes, I absolutely agree with you on that. It was unacceptable, and she didn't deserve it one bit. Nobody does. Unfortunately, strong emotions can really get the best of a person and make them do things they'd never usually do and will regret later... It was painful for me to have to write such a thing. That's why I tried to keep it short and focus primarily on Jael's thoughts rather than providing a very graphic description.

Hope you'll stay tuned.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 08:04 am Title: CHAPTER 9

I seriously can't believe he just raped her. I'm so mind boggled. This is SO CRAZY! Jesus. This guy needs serious, SERIOUS help.



Author's Response:

Hey girl. I know it's looking really bad right now but perhaps it might help to read the chapter again and really try to understand Michael's perspective of things. That's what Jael did. Besides, rape is a really strong word, isn't it? It wasn't something she wanted but I'm really hoping these next few chapters will set a few things straight on Michael's behalf. I'll try to update before next weekend but again, I can't promise anything... Thanks for reading :)


Reviewer: oblivion Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2014 11:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 9

oh my god!! wtf michael? he is really more messed up than i thought...their friendship has to be ruined now o_o

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2014 09:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 9

Oh my god. :O I just... 

I can't even process...

 

Wow.

next chapter please.

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2014 07:28 pm Title: CHAPTER 9

So happy to see an update! This is one of my favorite stories on this site and love your writing style and imagination. Can't wait for more! :)

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 06:59 pm Title: CHAPTER 8

Oh by the way, I would like to thank you for the shout out. I appreciate it, just as I appreciate your marvelous story. It's upsetting you don't get more views and reads. You're story is so original and so brilliantly put together. I don't understand what's going on around here that it feels like I'm the only one responding to this great work. *shugs* girl keep doing what you're doing cuz your writing is magical. You do an awesome job! 



Author's Response:

No girl, thank yoù! If it weren't for your reviews I probably would continue to write the story, but doubt I'd keep posting it online. I don't wanna pressure anyone into leaving reviews though; I want them to do it from their hearts. The last thing I'd want is for you to read and comment on every chapter because you feel obligated to. But I'll admit it's a little upsetting... Sometimes I think it's because I haven't always updated as frequently as I try to do now with this story. I am rather busy, as I'm sure lots of people are, and that's exactly why I haven't been able to catch up on any other stories myself... I really would love to read your work sometime. I have no doubt that your own writing is nothing short of wonderful :)

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