Date: Jul 15, 2020 12:08 pm Title: CHAPTER 6
These last two chapters (5 and 6) had some hilarious moments, but also some sweet moments where Jael and Michael seemed to connect, even if it was for a short while. It was nice to see Jael starting to understand him on a deeper level, but letting her guard down with Michael will surely bring her some trouble. Michael has both light and dark in this story (more dark, so far, I would say), but it seems that he has started to gain trust in Jael, loosen up a bit, and stop stressing about his superstar status and start being himself more when he is with her:)
Date: Jul 12, 2020 01:47 pm Title: CHAPTER 4
Already 4 chapters into this story, and I feel compelled to leave a review, because it is written so well, you are one of the most talented writers I have found in fanfction.
The character of Jael is very relatable, while Michael remains a mystery. He definitely is a piece of work, and he is so unpredictable, that I cannot help but feel a little anxious whenever he interacts with Jael, because he is full of surprises, lol. I love how you made him so intriguing (not that he wasn't also in reality, by all accounts). You also did a great job at capturing his sadness and self-destructive behavior.
Jael is such a great character, I love that she is not putting up with any of Michael's (or his brothers') games.
Looking forward to seeing how the relationship between Jael and Michael will unfold, as well as Michael's relationship with his brothers.