[Report This]Date: May 01, 2014 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 6- The Mini-Revolution
Cindi don turned Michael into a thug, spraying bullets into all the guards of Metropplis carrying guns and shooting people. All for the sake of freedom, so I guess its okay. For some reason Morphine and Revolution - The Beatles were playing in my head while reading this chapter. Poor Mikey got shot, and Cindi is about to run out of battery. Great chapter Ziggy !!!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2014 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 5- Upsurge
Nothing better happen to Isis or I will legit cry! D;
I loved the update, Michael was so understanding and accepting... There need to be more people like him in the world! :3
Can't wait for more gurl this is the best. XD
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2014 10:10 am Title: Chapter 5- Upsurge
Awww look at Michael and Cindi, bout to start a revolution !
good update Ziggy :)
Date: Feb 14, 2014 09:20 am Title: Chapter 5- Upsurge
Story is off to a great start! Send in the next chapter ASAP. This is a great love story.
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2014 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 5- Upsurge
YAS. YAS. YAS.
*EXCITEMENT INTENCIFIES*
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2013 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 4- Sir Jackson
MICHAEL IN THAT OUTFIT THOUGH
He's beyond handsome and everything beautiful. , <33
I just LOVE his character in this story!
I hope Cindi tells him sooner rather than later otherwise I think he may not be able to trust her.
Date: Dec 09, 2013 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 4- Sir Jackson
i love it write more
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2013 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 4- Sir Jackson
love it, it's coming along very well
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2013 10:08 am Title: Chapter 3- Cybertronic Purgatory
love it!
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2013 06:53 am Title: Chapter 3- Cybertronic Purgatory
And so they meet YAY! Both Michael and Cindi were quickly captured by each other, yes instant attraction. XD Michael's so cute, blushing at her compliment lol
Its horrible how the Humans treat the Androids D: It seems both Michael and Cindi long for the same thing, however because of the actions of the other Humans, Cindi has already generalised Michael despite what she feels. :( Still, she's kept his card which so something tells me she's still interested lol
Can't wait for more Girl! :D , <33
Author's Response:
I would say that although they want the same things, Cindi is a bit more aggressive and Michael is more of a hippie when it comes to how to solve the problem lol. Still, you'll see how they both get what they want in the end!
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2013 06:47 am Title: Chapter 2- Infatuation at First Sight
Haha I love Cindi's adventure craving. Lord, I know she looked the coolest chick there. She's too gorgeous, I loved the visuals.
"Oh god, not this guy again..." Anthony mumbled. "He thinks he's so cool." -------------- Irrevelent Anthony, I can feel your jealousy from all the way over here.
Oooh Sir Jacksons caught her eye. ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2013 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1- A Backwards Society
Well written futuristic type of story starring Janelle Monae and Michael Jackson?
Ziggy you KNOW I'm sticking around for this XD
Author's Response:
LMAO I had to write a story about my two favorite people, it had to be done xD
Date: Nov 15, 2013 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1- A Backwards Society
I like this soncept! Two of my favorite people---MJ and Janelle Monae (Cindi Mayweather). I can't wait to see how this story goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am a bit nervous about this story because I usually don't write science fiction, but I've bene wanting to write this story for a very long time and I couldn't take it anymore haha!! I appreciate your feedback :)
Date: Nov 15, 2013 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 2- Infatuation at First Sight
this was so good, can't wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2013 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1- A Backwards Society
This is gonna be interesting; I can just feel it. Great chapter, and great concept for a story!
Author's Response:
Dude I always wanted to tell you that I think your stories are amazing!! Haha, but thank you, I hope you like it!!