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Reviewer: MissJacksonFanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2014 04:55 pm Title: Feelings of inadequacy.

Oh yes, I know that feeling. That explains why I haven't posted any stories of my own..lol. It's just the thought that my writing isn't or may not be good enough, or their isn't enough vivid detail, etc. I feel as if I posted a story it would get overlooked or wouldn't be as appealing as the other stories on here. But thats just how I feel. Then again I realize that everyone's writing style is different, and thats okay. I think you're an awesome writer by the way, I've checked so many times for updates of your stories, honestly. You should definitely continue writing :)

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2014 08:59 pm Title: Injured

ooowww

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2014 11:58 am Title: Writers block!

I hate writers block it gives me a headache

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2014 06:17 am Title: Feelings of inadequacy.

I think most authors feel that way. My suggestion is to keep reading and keep writing. Look at the writing you enjoy and try to isolate what about it you like. This can help you enhance your writing.

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2014 06:15 am Title: Reviews

I agree about great stories without reviews. That being said, I stop reviewing if the author gets her back up or is rude in her response to my review. I am NOT someone who tries to troll stories or be a PITA, and if an author complains about people stopping reviewing, I will explain why I stopped.

That being said, I've started to read a lot more stories than I've reviewed. If my take will be largely critical, then I won't review. Just because I'm not a fan, doesn't mean that the author's writing should be discouraged. 9 times out of 10, the story or writing isn't poor...it's more likely that I'm unable to get past some aspect of it.  As such, I'd rather keep my silence.

I also don't read/review stories with chapters that avg under 1000 words, so I can't speak to the quality of those stories/the lack of reviews vs reads.

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2014 06:08 am Title: R-r-role play!

So, what kind of role playing do you think boosts the creative juices? Are there limits to what you'd consider "okay" in RP-ing?



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting firstly. I had to reread this chapter as I had actually written it more than a year ago. I don't really roleplay myself anymore but I can still answer your questions. 

you asked what kind of roleplaying do I think boosts creative juices, for me it is it to do with what 'kind', let me explain myself a little. I was referring to inspiring character and plot development. I played Michael exclusively and I was able to take his character to different places and create back stories and so on. It also requires a great amount of detail to be included which I believe is necessary for writing stories also. If you would like to elaborate of what you mean by 'what kind' then I'm happy to give another stab at my answer. 

What are the limits to what I think is ok? I think as long as you are within the limits of the individuals comfort zone than that is ok. Obviously sexual roleplaying should not be done with those under the age of consent and saying this not all roleplay is sexual in nature! The issues I was having with the roleplaying on this site is that it was in your face and anyone could read what really should have been private. My last point regarding the limits of Rp has to do with portraying Michael in a respectable light. I have read and I know people enjoy these OOC stories of Michael being a thug or beating woman and in some cases raping woman but I could not and would not Rp him in such a way. I Try to stay respectful. Thanks again for your comment. 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2014 05:04 am Title: Feelings of inadequacy.

Just keep practicing..you'll get there..

Reviewer: imightbee Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2014 11:56 am Title: Injured

Oh my, you got injured too? Lord have mercy we're all getting hurt. I fell off the balance beam during gymnastics practice and broke my ankle. :/ can't move for 8 weeks. I hope you're feeling better! <3



Author's Response:

Ouch! I hope you heal and get well soon hun xxx

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2014 09:42 am Title: Injured

RIA!!!!!!!!

Im Finna cry IM finna cry hard as hell. Get well babe take all the time you need.



Author's Response:

Don't cry T x 

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2014 06:35 am Title: Injured

Girl you better go somewhere and allow yourself to be spoiled!!! Don't go tryna update when you just got hurt, updating can wait! Relax, watch television, listen to music, do nothing at all, but above all, focus on recovering! 



Author's Response:

Thank you darling xxx Just got my laptop back today and I'm feeling a lot better! Update for BOTDF coming soon x

Reviewer: xosweetseducingsighsxo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2014 04:33 pm Title: Just little ol' me!

One More Chance!! Pwease! It'll make me the happiest Hispanic girl ever!



Author's Response:

Aaaaawwwwwwwww!!!! I'm so pleased someone asked for OMC, that story was my first here and it's my baby. I shall update just for you darling!

x mwah x

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2014 01:20 pm Title: Just little ol' me!

lol UPDATE EM ALL!! XDXD You already know which ones I want updated though. Love! Muah! :-*



Author's Response:

Hahahahahaaaaaa you're so sweet babe! You've always stuck by me, thank you so much! BOTDF coming right up! XD it would be funny if suddenly I updated them all at one go...

x mwah x

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 07:31 am Title: Plagiarism ....again!

Omg I'm just like you. I got suspicious yesterday reading a fanfic because out of the blue; 2 Asian names came up and I was like "what" because it had no mention of them except there.

So I googled the sentence and it had been stolen from an asianfanfic site! ;O 

And also I know which other one you're talking about; The Strips by mikejunior right? I don't care that I said there name; they shouldnt be copying lol.

If they don't remove it I think you should notify admin. Its simply not fair on the people who actually write the stories to have this happen to them, and they don't even know its going on.

Thanks for mentioning this as a topic Ria. :))



Author's Response:

Hey hun, I actually do go to admin if these stories are not taken down but I'm not so sure if they do anything or are even active here since I have not once received a reply. Thankfully both stories by MikeJunior disappeared after a few days. I don't know if they are still active or not.

Thanks for your comments sweet, let me know if you spot any other instances. x mwah x

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 05:16 am Title: Plagiarism ....again!

Thanks a lot for this Ria. You're really kind. Yeah I heard about that, and commented on Wattpad too. I honestly despise plagarism. I mean, what gives them the right to take the hard work and time other people put in???? How dare they?!?! I know a lot of the writers on here, or writers in general, agonize over just writing a chapter, because they give it their all. But plagarism? I just look at it like "Seriously?" That is the epitome of petty. That's why I get annoyed by people who are lik "Why are you guys ganging up on them?" Like, excuse me? We're defending eachother. We're all close on here so when something goesdown, we're ready and willing to help out. Thats what makes the MJ Fam a Fam, cux we're close like that.

I'll make sure to keep my eye out, nobody better try to steal your story or I will hunt them down and pulvarize them XDXD in the most professional way possible of course. Love to love you Ria! :-))))

Reviewer: imightbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 03:54 am Title: Plagiarism ....again!

Plagiarism has never been cool to me. I'm like, if you can take a story that someone worked hard on and say it's yours, then you lose respect points (from me anyway). It's happened to me three times (at school though) and I always vowed that no matter who kept doing it to me, I'd never do it. I've heard of the drama on here through a friend of mine that used to come on here, but so far all I've really seen is mellow behavior so I'm good :) and teamwork makes dreams work. (Lmfao I got that from my brother!)

 

-Brynn

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