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Reviewer: Felicia11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2020 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 3: Having a talk... Havenhurst

What a beautiful story the truth gives me a little sadness for MJ's children for not having enjoyed their father for a longer time very good story

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2016 03:56 am Title: Chapter 50 Welcome To HIStory

I really really like your story. I just want to read more.

Please don't drop this. What you've done is very amazing.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2014 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 50 Welcome To HIStory

Man it took me forever but I've finally caught up with this story , ivengot to say I'm very impress with the way you made this, this story is truly uderrated and I think many others should read this story cause its just that good.it really kept me on  toes with the drama that's been hppening and I can't wait to read more : )

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 48:The Oprah Interview Part 2

It was so unnecessary to destroy the house.

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2014 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 47: The Oprah Interview Part 1

Oh I've been reading your fic and I just love it. From crying, laughing, being pissed to crying again the story is TERRFIC!

Please keeping updating.

Reviewer: Dreamgirl4Michael Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2014 02:23 pm Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

Hey again,
Even though I haven't hread through most of this chapter, what really kind of turns me off about this story is that your sentinces run on a lot. Not so much when each character is speaking, but more in the discriptions. Please, please, please, redo these chapters again, or get a bata reader. Sorry, I didn't spell that right so I hope you know what I mean.

Reviewer: April J Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2013 01:05 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

*Sorry I meant chapter 34..*

Reviewer: April J Jackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2013 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 35:Award shows, interviews and Curruption OH MY

Anyway for ch 35, I just wish Shana would listen and hear Michael out even though she's understanderbly upset when she thinks her boyfriend "cheated". Also I Prince & Paris are still going to be born somehow...Awesome job with the chapters! :)

Reviewer: April J Jackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2013 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 34: Superbowl... there is Hope

Hi! :) I just restarted reading from chapter 35, as I haven't been on MJfiction in awhile and I'm hoping to catch on all the chapters. Also from what you posted in ch 35, I just wanted to say thanks. I'm happy that I'm able to give you the encouragement to keep on writing even when views are low. You're a fantastic writer with great abilities at writing and I love how you came up with the idea for this as it's different and also because I love stories with MJ & his kids, though there aren't many..

Reviewer: lewisshan13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2013 08:00 am Title: Chapter 49:Aftermath... Cross Roads You'll Never Put Your Hands on me Again

   Tatiana is finally having a change of heart. I hope Mariah can get the note safely to Mike! Jack is a very determined man but his evilness shall not prosper. This is finna get sooo good!

Reviewer: lewisshan13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2013 07:59 am Title: Chapter 49:Aftermath... Cross Roads You'll Never Put Your Hands on me Again

   Tatiana is finally having a change of heart. I hope Mariah can get the note safely to Mike! Jack is a very determined man but his evilness shall not prosper. This is finna get sooo good!

Reviewer: Juniorlady Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2013 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 48:The Oprah Interview Part 2

I've been reading this story from the beginning and I must say that you are a great writer! It's about time Tatiana did something right.



Author's Response:

yeah though I made her a bitch shes Not one deep down inside even she has her limits sh wouldn't care if he hated her for the rest of his life but she knows when to much  too much and hen something is to far... she does cre for him and she never Ment for it to get this far out of hand deep down she loves him and she knows thy were not ment to be as a gesture of absolution and forgivness she wans to make it right in the coming chapters you will see that

there is more to come if my computer is actting right today I may post a update tomorrow 

Reviewer: MissA1485 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2013 03:39 pm Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

Hi, I saw your story and got curious to see what type of story you have created and then read the story notes. I'm flattered that my story has sparked an idea in your head and I'm curious to know where you are planning to take this. I love the topic of time traveling, my friend and I always talk about it. Who wouldn't love to go back in time? I'm glad you made it different though and not had a girl go back and meet him.

I'm confused to how the kids are going to travel through each era without alerting anyone but anyway, good luck with your story. 



Author's Response:

WOW I'm very shocked and aw struck you decided to read one of my stories, so in return to your fltery I'm hmbld you decided to read tis I LOVE waitting for you and can't wait for the next chapter of that

yes tim travler did inspire my story though I don't have DOC on my stoy I do have the kids make pop culture referances to the Movie back to the future and I tink time cop (FAV time traveler Move, I loved e some Joh Claud Van Dame) I digress

yeah well I have taken it quit far my point was to change history BUT as you know with back to the future rules applying chane the past you more thenlikely will screw somethng else up so check it out and find out what trouble our Trio can et themselves into

 

yes i had o make it different see, Not to rag on you I actually put your story at the TOP of the time travel stories for quielty of writting and well thought out plot, not just anoter "let me go back in time and warn michael that he was going to die and see if I can screw him while i'm at it stories"

sorry but that is the pot of ALL the other stories they don't even have te substance yours has they don' even work that HARD on developent some or just to fst paced like they are only writting the first few chapters to shw a story line in ordr to get to the good of screwng around with him and him falling in love with him THEY make it chesy you don't

when it comes down to them traveling thought time they have to gain alias but they don't decover that until  few chapters in not only to hel themselves but to help him also but you got to rad to find out how it goes down, please to check it out CAN't wait to hear what you think

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2013 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 47: The Oprah Interview Part 1

Excellent!! Please update!!!

Author's Response:

just did my computers have been actiiing ultra slow so I'm just getting back to posting aftr major self mantaince of every kind of antivirus malwar to get them back to a usable state i have been on a writing break but I think i'm back and I think I got another story Idea brewing be on the look out

Reviewer: April J Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2013 03:05 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

Awesome, well I'm excited for the History era. but just do your best as there's no rush. :)

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