Date: Jun 01, 2013 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow thats harsh... :(
omg i lmaoed when kerli hugged bill again and michaels like theyre getting married someday! XD BOYS! what are they like?! :P
girl, this is turning out to be one hell of a story!
Date: May 30, 2013 08:49 am Title: Chapter 7
Poor Tom, the treatment he had was really tough and bad. And Bill who was obliged to watch, he can be traumatized for sure.
They decided to kill Renee sooner, wow poor girl. I thinl Mrs Stein maybe said a way to save her to Kerli...Maybe a way to delay her execution.
I'm waiting the next chapter to see what's going to happen to Renee.
Date: May 13, 2013 09:59 am Title: Chapter 6
i want to know!!!! :D
lol i love how mike not only let them get in shit so soon, but then, as u said, threw them under a bus when questioned by the officer! Bravo mike! BRAVO! XD
hahaha, lethal weapon perhaps, but id prefer to call u a Perfect Weapon.... ;)
Date: May 13, 2013 09:10 am Title: Chapter 6
Poor Tom and Bill. I feel kinda like Michael for them. Tom went really out off line and didn't the rules but I think it's maybe too much. I hope they will be more careful now.
Like Michael, I really want to know what happened to them in the unit.
Congratulations for your black belt sweetie :). And now I know one things, don't annoy Kourteny lol
Date: May 04, 2013 02:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Even if I really like Tom and his little superiority speech in real life, I really think he's annoying and stupid here lol.
I wanted to kick his ass lol. Poor Michael, to have to be around them all the time. I'm really afraid of what could happen in those 80 units...
To be honest, I've never done this kind of things...I was an angel lol.
Author's Response: Haha! Agreed! In real life its funny and cute in a way; here its just a major inconvenience... Oh yes, they'll be reintroduced throughout the story :P
Date: May 03, 2013 10:51 am Title: Chapter 5
Ohhh unit 82 sounds scary :/
is unit 84 like the book 1984 And the thought police are there? ;)
hmm... One time a teacher really pissed me off and i knew she had a thing about her stationary being perfect and orgasnised.
so when everyone left i went over to her stationary and threw her pencils off a desk (badass right?) so the leads would break on the inside and i took apart her pens then took out the springs and put them back together so that they didnt work but looked normal... I didnt get caught but the next day she was livid xD
hehehe me so evil! :P
Author's Response: Unit 82 is nothing compared to some of the higher ones :P Haha I've never read that book so I'll assume no :P haha! Oooh you threw the pencils off the desk!! REBEL!!! ;) Haha no but actually thats pretty funny XD In grade 4 I remember some kids put salt in the sub's tea and a tack on her chair... :/ They got in huge shit.
Date: May 02, 2013 11:56 am Title: Chapter 5
Ugh how much crap can a kid cause in like 2 days!? Geez I just want him to leave holy crap. Thanks for the update :D
Author's Response: Haha! Makes you kind of wonder if he's trying to piss everyone off or if that's just his personality ;) Thank you! Glad you liked it despite Tom getting them all in trouble :P
Date: May 02, 2013 07:30 am Title: Chapter 5
Even if I love the real Tom and Bill, someone kill them, like now 😭😂 they got mikey in trouble. Bad boys!
Great chapter, darling. :)
The worst thing I have done that could have gotten my in trouble?
I was the one who told my favorite teacher about the girls in my class smoking at such a young age...ofc the teacher didn't use my name, but I know I'd be a loner if my classmates knew :/
Author's Response: Haha I love them in real life too! :P But in this story... not so much... :/ Whoa, I wish I had the guts to do what you did. I was in elementary school when people started smoking. I never understood why it was so cool...
Date: Apr 21, 2013 12:29 am Title: Chapter 4
This story is really starting open out... Me likey :)
Haha! Hopefully it'll keep getting better :P
Haha! I'll trry but I've been SUPER busy lately! I e-mailed you about it :P Ugh, so much stuff to do! omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Apr 18, 2013 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like your honest responses and how your being mature about it. Unlike others up here. Half them can't even take what i say.
There so spoild from getting to many good reviews fo probably something that's not all that great. I'm not here to down anyone i can't believe these authors up here are getting offended at me.
I don't wanna lie to people on here. If i like it i like it. If I don't i don't. I will be straight up about it and tell you how i feel and what i think you should do to approve.
Is that a crime? If i come off as a little tough doesn't mean that im being mean or judgemental about it. I never thought the truth would get you in some mess. I thought the truth she'll set you free. Looks like don't........
I've been on ther site leaving comments and they don't get upset and dramatic about like the way these authors does's on here.
Can you tell me something that idk about this site please? This is most sensetive one i been barely wanna accept my constructive criticsisim.
Idk how anyone will make it in the world like that?
I get judged but i don't take it the wrong way i just better my self and learn from it that's all it takes.
Btw i like you yanagirl i actually feel more free talking to you about this.
Thank you for your humbled and honesty to.
I wish I could give you a solid reason as to why authors on this site are more sensitive, but I don't know for sure although I do know that this has been brought up in the past and a lot of people agree with you. I think it's because a lot of authors on this site are teenagers (Hell, I'm a teenager myself) and as a teenager we tend to take things a bit more personally than an adult would. I used to take things SO offensively when I was like 14, but now I'm over that stage. Some people aren't, and some people are just more sensitive than others.
I agree, you shouldn't have to lie just make sure that you're being polite about it (which in my opinion you are, but make sure to keep it up).
Everyone gets judged at some point; some people just handle it differently than others. I like to laugh and make a joke about it :P Some people ignore it. Some people put it into consideration and try to fix it. Some people cry about it. Some people get mad... It all depends on who you are really, and what you've been through, and how you've been raised...
Don't take it to heart if someone gets offended though, everyone on this site is really kind and nice I can assure you, they just react differently to criticism and it may come off a bit as rude.
Yay! Haha! I like you too! You're honest and some people need a wake-up call! But trust me, a lot of people on this site like honest people, ShellApple for instance, is CRAZY honest and a lot of people appreciate that about her :)
Thanks for talking to me! I enjoy having an honest and intelligent conversation every once in awhile :P
Date: Apr 18, 2013 09:27 am Title: Chapter 4
Tom really pissed me off. I really like him in real life but here, he just so I don't know but I want to kick his ass lol.
Poor Renee, it's sad what's happening to her.She seems to be a nice girl if we don't get on her nerves.
You were at Disneyland Paris, girl you're so lucky. It's been a while I didn't go and I'm not living very far. Around 1 hour...Hope you're enjoying your stay in France and don't depress, you'll come back ;)
Hahaha! Tom... :P
It'll only get worse from here for Renee :'(
Haha! I felt lucky! I've enjoyed it very much! You're so lucky you live there it's a beautiful country!! And I guess that's a good point, I'll DEFINITELY be coming back!! :D
Date: Apr 18, 2013 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad you accepted what i said.
Because some authors won't handle my honesty. If they wanna be so real and serious about there fics the why not give them serious and honest reviews?
It's only fair. I'm not gonna sit up here pretend that everyone is great on here. I've read many stories with great writers and they still mess up in there own ways. No writer is perfect all will flop once in a while.
I may be the only truthful on here on the site. I also read other fics that's not Mj's and i give honest reviews.
I respect you for accepting my review your pretty strong i see. Lol You and two other authors handled my reviews well.
As for the others umm there a bit sensetive about it. One erased mines while the other got offended.
I'm not trying to hurt no one's feelings here. I'm just being honest that's all. Everyone is great authors on here i just wanna be real with people's mistakes in my opinions though.
And thank you so much for responding to this. Your really friendly! And don't worry you'll be amazing soon!
I got the feeling that you gave honest reviews when I read your Penname ;) haha!
It's constructive criticism, and there's nothing wrong with that at all! Even I'm aware that some of my stories are better than others. Hell, there are a bunch I'm not that proud of, but whatever, it's not my job to write amazing fanfics, I just choose to write fanfics (whether they turn out amazing or not depends).
You should be real with the mistakes, otherwise they'll never get fixed! And please don't ever feel intimidated to review on one of my stories even if it's not a review saying; OMG BETS STORY EVER!!! Because I actually appreciate the constructive criticism and honesty very much! I promise you I won't get offended by it at all!
Haha I wouldn't say my reaction makes me strong since I didn't get offended in the first place ;)
And no problem! I respond to all of my reviews so it would be a bit unfair to leave one out :P
Date: Apr 17, 2013 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
I read it all and it's alright.
Cool! Thanks for reading it! Maybe someday it'll be better than alright lol! ;)
Date: Apr 17, 2013 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Tom is or of those kids that I would love to kick in their face and have no consequences. I would actually pay for that *rolleyes* Oohh that lil noob just stand still and get what's coming to ya. Anyways great chapter! :D
Lol! He'll get what's coming to him in due time... they all will...
Date: Apr 06, 2013 09:27 am Title: Chapter 3
This is so awesome! :D
i took the test and omg, the first time i realised i had answered 2 wrong but continued and decided to go back and do it all again. So the first time i got Normal. And after changing the 2 answers (which were imo MINOR adjustments) i got Class A!!!
lol i have said it before and will say it again, i am a strange child! :P
Omg... we found our 1/30... lol!
Shoulda known you'd get it ;)
Can't say I'm not surprised though lol! :P
Are you sure they were MINOR adjustments? Just sayin, Normal - CLASS A isn't exactly "minor" haha!! :P
Sorry it took me FOREVER to reply! I tried replying earlier but every time I tried it would close my browser and I tried like 5 times and got the same result so I was like "Fuck that, I'll reply later" so here I am! Lol! :P