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Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2014 01:54 am Title: Chapter 16

Oh dramas and troubles ahead, I love it lol.

Poor Logan, he's facing the same troubles and the same violence than Michael even more.

I don't know how everyone will be safe again after that. Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you!! :) 

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2014 02:34 am Title: Chapter 16

Holy shit! Trouble just keeps finding poor Michael! I wonder what's going to happen to Logan and Tom? Hell, what's going to happen to Michael???

btw, crazy, freaky story about your MMA class.

Author's Response:

Haha its a rough life for those three right now 


Yeah!! I mean if it was at an actual gym I would be less surprised, but in a high school PE course it was pretty shocking! Haha guys will be guys though ;P

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2014 09:25 am Title: Chapter 15

So first your writing is still great. Don't say it shifted away :)

This chapter was pretty intense and I love how you develop Logan's personality : his fear, his concern for his brother. I hope the relationship that Michael created with Tom won't be a problem between him and Logan.

Can't wait to see how Michael will deal with his return at home.

Author's Response:

Haha you're too kind ;P 

Haha I guess we'll hafta wait and see how this all plays out :)

Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2014 01:05 am Title: Chapter 15

Aaaaaah no more romantic pick up truck chapters?? 

So Tommy is jealous of logan, Logan is jealous of Michael now. This is becoming a triangle... O__o 

Nice intense chapter girl, can't wait to find out what Michael wil do next. ;)

Author's Response:

Hahaha not for the time being ;P 

Ooh yeah the cliché 'triangle' makes yet another appearance B) 

Haha thank you!! :) 

Reviewer: m3chanicalan1mals Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2014 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Guess we both are bored with the Manson fics we're writing lol. Honestly, I'm not that big on the new Tokio Hotel album since i only like a few songs while Humanoid is like my favorite Tokio Hotel album ever since it's one of those albums I can entirely sit through. I love the new Manson sdng, his vocals have improved so much that it sorta reminds me of his vocals in Deformography in a way.

Are we like long lost twins or something?

Author's Response:

OKay I'm with you on the TH thing. There are some songs I don't mind on their album but its all really autotuned :/ and its SUPER obvious!! 

ya!! Even though he's like, an old man lol he's still got it!! I hope he comes on tour again :P 

Hahaha xD I wouldn't doubt it ;D 

Reviewer: m3chanicalan1mals Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2014 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah!, I'm also a Manson fan! Mechanical Animals is like one of my fave albums ever tbh. I even wrote a Manson/Michael fic but I haven't updated it since like May due to lack of muse for it. I think this is the first time we're actually talking. I'm also a fan of Tokio Hotel! c:

Author's Response:

OMG I DID TOO!!! But it wasn't a romantic fic between the two of them haha, Marilyn was just kinda chillin B) lol I haven't finished mine either, I left before I could, I might finish it later :P Maybe. probably not. but maybe xD haha

WHAT! omg yeah B) what do you think of their new album? and what do you think of Manson's new song 'Third Day of a Seven Day Binge'? Im hooked. lol

girl we're like one in the same damn ;D I know I'm gunna like you already hahahah xD 

Reviewer: m3chanicalan1mals Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2014 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I was wondering when you were going to come back to update this! So much shit went down in one chapter that Michael's pretty much fucked. Can't wait to see what happens next! I do love me some good slash as well. 

Author's Response:

Hahaha yeah it's been awhile xD Lol ! Glad to be back for a bit :) and this time focusing on just one story at a time, so it should be better quality (hopefully lol)

Slash is da bomb B)


Couldn't help but notice your penname ;P haha

I love Marilyn Manson too :') 

Have we ever talked before this moment? Because I feel like I've had a discussion before with someone about Marilyn Manson, but that was over a year ago so I kind of forget who it was lol xD

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2014 02:00 am Title: Chapter 14

The things turned bad very quickly during the dinner. Michael is totally fucked up and I really wonder what will happen to Tom and even Logan.

I think Michale's parents will on his back a lot and this ciuld be very hard for his relationship with Logan.

Good and fast update girl, thanks! By the way, I don't know if you saw it but I ended "Only professionnal" some weeks ago. I'm working on a saquel right now ;)

Author's Response:

Ooh you did!! I'm gunna hafta pick up where I left off and get back into that story!! It was so good! Glad you're doing a sequel :) :D Do you know when you think you'll be ready to post the sequel? :P

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2014 01:38 am Title: Chapter 14

What...the...helllllllllll!!!!!!!!! Oh, crap Michael's in for it! Dammit, Tom, you sure got a sense of bad timing!!! And poor Logan. Well, since that cats out of the bag, is Joseph gonna bar Michael from seeing him again?? And has Tom ruined everything?? Can't wait to find out!

Author's Response:

Hahaha xD Tom definitely knows how to stir the pot ;P wether he means to or not haha :P

Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2014 01:00 am Title: Chapter 14

Michael is fucked. 

If I were Joseph or Katherine I'd be furious too. 

During the whole dinner scene and especially the end, I could only think: that escalated quickly. And when you think it can't get worse, there's Tom... 

Haha I knew Mike wouldn't forgive Logan so easily for the egg. I wonder what Logan is gonna do now. 

Quick update, very good. I should do that too. (Takes me at least two weeks XD)

Can't wait for your next update! ;)

Author's Response:

Hahaha goddammit Tom xD 


LOL omg I can relate!! I remember before I left my updates would take like weeks! Lol xD Its only quick now because I'm only doing the one story and its the weekend :P haha 


Reviewer: Mjfan43va Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2014 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 14

All I could think about near the end was "shit shit shit shit shit" I love this story so much. Please keep going.

Author's Response:

Hahaha xD An appropriate reaction ;P haha 

Glad you're lovin it! :D

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2014 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1



lol well you've got me hooked :) I just love a good slash story! (For one thing, they're a lot more creative than the typical "Michael-meets-girl-they-fall-in-love-etc-etc" - which is a good chunk of them, I've discovered! I'm sure they're good stories, but it's basically the same thing over and over. Slash tends to have a lot more leeway and room for variety!) my favorite stories on here are slash and I tend to find them quite a bit more believable and interesting. I know you don't mean any harm to Michael by writing these - besides, love is love and if Mike can be happy with a man just as much as he might a woman, more power to him! Lol I'd love to see where you're taking this story and even moreso that you've started it up again! :) As long as you keep posting, I'll keep reading and leaving feedback. I WONT LET YOU DOWN, EITHER, YANAgirl07! 

Good luck, Hun!

Author's Response:

I can tell I'm gunna like you a lot already ;D haha 

I totally agree with you!! I LOVE slash stories!! Andrew writes really good slash stories from my memory and jacksonfan's story Only Professional is also AMAZING!! I dunno if you've read any of those or not but they're great!!

Haha thanks girl ;) <3

Reviewer: Mjfan43va Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2014 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this story. The last chapter I remember reading was when Michael found out Tom was Logan's brother. I love this story and i still go. This is a exact copy of the review did on this story.
"Reviewer: Mjfan43va Signed [Report This] Date: Mar 01, 2013 06:48 am Title: Chapter 3


Oooooooh!!!! That's the guy off Facebook!!"


Author's Response:

OH EM GEE I remember you! I remember that review!! Haha glad to see you're still around :D Thanks for taking the time to read and review :)

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2014 02:49 am Title: Chapter 13

Hey! I just started reading, but I'm all for it! Do continue! <3

Author's Response:


To be honest I was worried about whether people would actually read this story or not because I wasn't sure if the original readers were still around or even interested and I didn't know if knew readers would have the motivation to read it through and catch up haha but I'm glad to see someone took the shot to read it :P haha


Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2014 01:55 am Title: Chapter 13

Girl! i'm so happy to see you around again. I missed you and your stories. I was kind of worried you know lol.

Anyway, welcome back :) . Michael and Logan finally came closer and in a very romantic way. I never thought that Logan could have this side on him.

It's a good story, you're right to keep it going.

Author's Response:

Hahaha I missed you too!! Next time I leave like that I'll be sure to leave a letter ;) haha xD

Logan's just full of surprises :) ;)

Haha thank you so much :) Nice to see you again :P 

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