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Reviewer: yourburgersarethebest Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2020 05:34 pm Title: A Moment In The Rain

great job. i think you should space out the lines a bit more so that it's easier to read, but this is nice. we don't get much darryl stories.

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2013 10:24 am Title: A Moment In The Rain

beautiful story

Reviewer: kaity6494 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2011 05:03 pm Title: A Moment In The Rain

I really loved it. Just a helpful hint though - you shouldn't use so many commas, it breaks up the sentences. Great story though and otherwise really well written :)

Reviewer: my lullaby Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2011 11:13 pm Title: A Moment In The Rain

It's a really cute short story! You should write more. I would love to read more of your stories.



Author's Response:

thanks!:)

i got another story,on here. its called,"I'll Be There":)

 

Reviewer: liberiangirl45 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2011 11:37 am Title: A Moment In The Rain

Good Job!!!! I loved it :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2011 01:29 am Title: A Moment In The Rain

Aww Lovly story :) i really liked this! Great job :D

Author's Response:

thank you!

i appreciate it!:)

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