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Reviewer: moonwalkertanzee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2013 07:21 am Title: please try

Update soon please. I LOVE this!!!!!



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Awww thank you!!!! 

Reviewer: aj102503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2013 02:24 am Title: O.M.G.M

I also like to have a necklace...Michael cooks...luv it!



Author's Response:

Lol wouldn't we all?!! And lol ikr !! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 05:12 pm Title: please try

& also natasharose she is a good author & barely gets support for her stuff but she keeps going. It's frustrating for her to just like it is for us. So yeah never feel like your alone in this cause me & a few others like you feels the exact way to it's a pressure cooker trying to appease the readers up & trying to get recognition we deserve. At the end of the day all we could do is just try and that's it.... I wish there were something we could do about it but all we could do is just support eachother. <3

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 04:57 pm Title: please try

I absoloutly understand it does hurt to know that you get ton's of views but no reviews. Not barely reviews. Like i said before that's another reason why i don't rush with updates cause this site is so picky about plots i just sometimes dnt feel free to put my idea's on here like I always they just not good enough for this site. Yes delivery guy is popular that's only one of mines that's really popular 4 some reason :/ if it wasn't for my co author starting it off it wouldn't of been popular so i owe her the credit for that. I'm not the type to drawl a lot of reviews im just not like the other's on here I know it looks like I do. But mostly the ppl that reviews my stories r the one's i know off the site mostly. I only get lucky when a earn a new reader once in awhile & that's a shame to that it has to be that way. Ppl I know off the site supports my work it's pretty sad that a lot off ppl on this site won't support my work that's why I always wanna quit they make me feel belitted as an author on here.like I understand ppl r busy like you said we all r busy but still I take time out to remind the person that i gotta catch up soon no matter how late i am reading there stuff. I aventually catches up but i see a lot of readers reviews the most popular stuff so they taking there busy time out on the hottest stuff on here that's how it looks to me. It is like a cliques on here like they only will read on a certain authors story & won't give the underated a chance not even the favorite popular authors does. I will tell this Atmjshouse & Michealfan90 are great supporters & Sabrinamjlove she's another great supporter up here even Annie is whenever she can. Mrsmj2011 was an awesome supporter to. That's about it those were my only favorite authors that supported my stuff sadly & u r a deffo a supporter. That's a about it idk about the other they just feel they just to good & bigger then me to ever check my stuff out. I won't say no names but I'm sure you've ran across there popular stories with all the attention & reviews. Ok that's all I'm gonna say so i dnt start anything. Lol I like talking to you southrin_cutie you understand where I'm coming from. :)



Author's Response:

Yea and I only update nowadays about once a week. And I personally love pretty much everything that you write! And although Syour cowriter did start it, I think that you really were the one to put the meat on the story's bone!! And I understand about you not getting new reviewers. I get them but it seems like people take turns with my reviews like they choose what two people will review for this chapter and blah blah blah lol. Sounds weird but that is what goes on in my head!!! And I do get those users to review also and they are good supporters too!! So all I can do is live laugh love and pray!!! :) so ttyl

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 10:18 am Title: please try

There might not be a million of us but im gonna let you know right now that you are a great author, and your story is excellent. Please update soon...pooh lol.



Author's Response:

lol i may not  be that good but thanks pooh!!! 

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 09:42 am Title: please try

I'm the kind of person that thinks reviews aren't everything, yeah they are nice but I understand that people have other things to do than review all the time. Like me, I work so sometimes, all I have time to do is read. Ain't that supporting as well? The read count matters also. I dont understand this whole clique talk. This is a Michael Jackson fan fiction site. You write stories and fantasies. You write how you would love michael to be. Does it matter if you dont hardly get reviews? YOU are what matter, cause these stories are coming from you. And in my opinion, your stories are great, your mind is very brilliant.  Think of this, Michael jackson himself wanted a lot of record sales for bad so he could top thriller, but he didnt get as many sales as he wanted, but he didnt give up. He didnt say to his fans, " if I don't get the amount of sales I want, then I won't make another album" isn't he the reason why we are all here? Im not downing your decision sweety but im just sayin to have an open mind for us who are busy. I can't even finish a story sometimes, cause im super busy but believe me there are so many stories I want to review to. This story included. I can't even update my own half the time. Im off work today so I can review. Im not speaking for everybody, but i am speaking for the busy people. Please update your story, I like that younick named her pooh. Thats my nickname and I got it the same way she did lol winnie the pooh rocks. When I was born, as soon as my eyes opened it went to the tv, not my mom, not my doctors,  but pooh lol



Author's Response:

i really understand where your coming from and i like the Michael reference you used but Michael did still have millions of fans to tell him how great he was! and i nicknamed her that because that is actually still my nickname!!! lol but yea i do understand you!!! 

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2013 03:42 am Title: please try

Gurl you know I'll always support you! You've always supported my work u even like my corny stuff that not many reads. I've also enjoyed the last two chapter sorry i haven't gotten a chance to review i intend to fall behind a lot but dnt mean to even if i do fall behind i let the author know that i still didn't 4get them. I'm very considerate to others. I do know how you feel & it is like cliques up here & I dnt like that either it's all stupid & it's highschool idk why there always this way on this site. Half the time my favorite authors dnt even support me back maybe like 2 or 3 of them do but that's not even half of them a lot of them won't give me a time or day on my stories & these r the popular authors. I'm no way popular I struggle with all my stories & ima tell ya it's frustrating cause i feel like what I write isn't good enough like the Verge all i mostly get is 2 reviews 4 that now when it firs started out it did good & now barely no one supports it but i keep writing cause i love that story that was my first break out story all my others use to barely get support & i still have some that don't get much support maybe like 3 stories of mines gets a certain amount of support even tho it's not much but it's something. But i still know how you feel your not the only one here that doesn't get a lot of support for your great work ppl like natasharose me or other great underated authors knows how you feel we all want support for our hard work but we just have to keep going if we love doing this for fun cause if not then will always be misrable thinking about reviews & this site is tough as steel when it comes to reviews. I sometimes myself just wanna give up but i keep going idk why but i just do even with little support i still keep going.... I've asked certain ppl on this site to checkout my stories & did they? No & a lot of them was m favorite authors... tough luck for me right? I give major support to a lot of authors & gets nothing back from then. It's all one sided & messed up if ya ask me. But i still keep going :S ....... I do always wish for the verge to have more reviews but I never get it anymore & i find it so disapointing I guess that's why I barely update that or any of my old stories i have cause they barely get the support they deserve I had al my fun & energy put into it but I want ppl to have fun with me to. Review free your mind I like reading reviews just as much as you do or anyone else to. This is a cold site we dealing with not everyone gonna support our stuff on here & sadly we gotta live with it. Not even our favorite authors will always support us it's messed but what can we do? This site is messed up but what can we do? The only thing we could do is just keep our heads up & think about michael & our love for writing I know it's hard tho cause writing is hard work & we do deserve our fair share of support to. Anything in life we need some form of support even if it's an mjfic. But anyway i'll always be here for you & your stories I'm always a fan of your I've been here since your very first chapter & you've done such a good job on this story you do deserve more regconition for this. Well i hope this helped you & i hope you stay cause if you stay I'll stay then cause i sometimes try my hardest not give up on here & i made it this far it's crazy but I did. Lol talk to you soon! :) <3



Author's Response:

I love your loyalty towards me and trust that I will always stay loyal to you in return! And I do understand what you are saying about how you have a one sided relationship with your favorites because I do feel that way too! And to be honest, it is frustrating as hell! And I don't care how corney your writing gets, I will always review!!! And I do understand that people do get busy so I shouldn't get too worked up over my reviews! It's like being in and interview and the person ask you to tell any story you wish about your fantasies and you tell them but then they move on to the next question, showing no emotion or feeling towards it. Basically talking to a brick wall! And you did help me too so thank you for that, it's just been troubling to see that many view but get not even a quarter of that many reviews in return! I know about your struggle to stay on this site and I appreciate that you reconsidered your decision of leaving, it's just that this is the same reason why I left the site that this story was originally posted on. There was only one person to ask me to stay and so I made a deal with her only because that was my first site and I really did love that site. So the deal was that I was going to post some recent chapters on there and wait about 1 week and see if I get any reviews. Well I only received hers and then she asked me to stay still and I just felt kind of worthless to only get that one review so I told her that I would be only posting here . And now that I'm getting some of the same things happening I just feel hurt and have that same worthless feeling. But anyways thank you and talk to you soon! :)

Reviewer: MikeMakesThisNookiePop Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2013 04:59 pm Title: please try

Baby Let Me Tell You.....I Use To Be The Same Exact Way! And Imma Tell You Now Some Of These Hoes Just Lazy Ands Then Others Just In A Clique And Others Too Busy I Guess

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DON'T LET NOBODY DISCOURAGE YOU!!

 

 

And I ain't one Of them people Who tell you "It ain't about the reviews... you shouldn't worry about it"

 

 

Naw!  Cause To Be Real The Shit Is Aggravating And It Ain't Real! It hurts your feelings cause you come here to be


Be supported, share your personal feelings and thoughts and for Michael. But you ddon't get That support and the fact That They ain't doing That hurts us cause we let Our guard down. Those people will soon pop up When you talk about quitting but hang in there and I promise I'll cheer every chapter. I just come on here to update now cause I can't find no good stories but I WILL BE READING THIS ONE AND REVIEWING! KEEP YOUR HEAD UP BABY GIRL!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Real!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Omg thank you for this! I woulndt know how to even thank you for your words of encouragement and also the fact that you would review!!! It makes me really happy when I see authors supporting one another on there like you are doing! And I understand exactly what you are saying, it does hurt when we expose ourselves to others just to not hear anything back! It's like giving your love to someone who will never say 'I love you' back! And I do see where some of these cliques have started too and I just don't feel like there should be any kind of drama where we all came for one sole purpose! Even though they do still do it in high school! So before I bore you with my unusually long talking I will just leave you with this... Thank you from the bottom of my heart (and a little bit of my kidney) for supporting me!!!

Reviewer: HandsInMichaelsCurls Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2013 09:22 pm Title: Christmas...... yay!.....pt 2

lolol I actually had a good laugh at this.

Love it :)

Update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you did!!!! thanks!!!

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2013 08:44 pm Title: Christmas...... yay!.....pt 2

It's great to see an update and i loved it!

Can't wait for more and GO GO GO!

Author's Response:

thanks I just had to stop being so lazy and write!!!!

Reviewer: moonwalkertanzee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 02:12 am Title: Christmas...... yay!.....

I LOVE THIS STORY! Update soon x)



Author's Response:

thank you so much and I will!!!

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 12:03 am Title: Christmas...... yay!.....

Aww this was so sweet & love the pics to. Lol continue soon! ^_^

Author's Response:

thank you! and I will!

Reviewer: Michaell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2013 03:45 am Title: Merry Sexmas Eve

That was really hot. Haha, I don't know why but I always laugh while reading chapters like this. My imagination goes wild!

Anyway, great chapter dear!



Author's Response:

lol, I understand!!!!!! I feel like that too sometimes when I read others!!!!! And thank you!!!!

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2013 11:18 pm Title: Merry Sexmas Eve

That was soooo hottt! Mike is so naughty! LOL
Continue

Author's Response:

lol thank you!!!! and I will!!!

Reviewer: Michaell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2013 03:21 pm Title: Comfort

Yay, finally read all the chapters as promised. I loved it! I was caught up in the story from the beginning. 

Haha, naughty ending for this chapter. Can't wait for the next update!

Bless you!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much for reviewing!!! I really appreciate what you are doing because I had this story up on another site as well and the point that I didn't receive any comments on there was the reason why I quite posting on there. so you won't believe how muchit means for you to be doing this!!!! And bless you too!!!

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