Reviews For Don't Jump
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Reviewer: Megs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2012 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, don't worry dear! ^_^

You're very welcome!!

When talking about Tokio Hotel, I wasn't referring to their style... but to their behaviour and "passion" they show in music. They (the twins at least, because Georg and Gustav might be dead - that's how much infos we get about them everyday) seem to be not interested that much in their music career, the album they're supposingly recording is taking sooo long... and all they do is going to parties and posting random things on their iPhone/Android App (because yes, they couldn't, like EVERY other celebrity, create a Twitter account and let ALL their fans know what they're doing, no, instead you have to PAY) Short: they're not those sweet, kind, innocent and passionate lil' kids with "The Dream" in their eyes anymore... I miss them, and I will always love their first albums because they were my adolescence. But now, no... it doesn't work like this baby... sorry, I wrote all this stuff and it was just like I was talking to myself mostly. I hope I didn't bother you, even though I think I somewhat answered your question... we just have to wait and hope their new album will be at least decent


Much LOVE to you. After all, I have my MJFam to turn to <3

Author's Response:

Ooooooh I know what you're talking about now, and YES! What you're sayign makes perfect sense! Wow, they're making their fans pay to get an app to let them know what they're up to (which sounds to me like pretty much nothing)?!?!? What a rip off! >:(

Yeah, they were so cute as kids! I've been watching their videos and I just melt! They seem so sweet, and so... driven to make more music, but like you just said, it seems like they don't care.

Honestly, I didn't even know that they were working on another album! I thought their record label dropped them or something, or maybe they broke up... And yeah, Georg and Gustav never got the same amount of spotlight as the two twins :(

No! No, no, no, no, no! You didn't bother me AT ALL! I asked you this question remember? Haha, if anything I'm so THANKFUL that you actually replied! Some people tend to not notice when authors reply to their reviews and I'm kinda just left their... hanging.. lol! Thanks for this! I've been curious about ti for awhile! :)

<3 Much love!

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow you are talented!! This was a very well written story


**Evening Star**

Author's Response:

XD Thank you! I'm glad you think so! So happy that you liked it! :D Thanks for the review! I appreciate it a ton!

Reviewer: MjScream7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1

wow.. very sad story. i cant believe that michael jumped, and i cant help but think that bill wont forgive himself for what michael did either. i mean if i were him, i probably would feel even worse than before cos he only died for me! horrible though, for anyone i think... :*( 

but it was so nicely written though! fantastic! 5 stars xx

Author's Response:

Yeah, if I watched my bestfriend commit suicide to try and get me to not do so, I'd be devestated! I'd probably end up jumping right after him :(

Thank you! I'm glad you thought so! I've been trying to write some really sad, emotionally powerful stories lately, just to test it out :) I like trying new stuff with my writting. :D

Reviewer: alishawasnthere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 01:19 am Title: Chapter 3

OMG I was PRAYING it didn't end like the song does!! It always makes me cry! Now I'm tearing up. ugh. lol.

I loved it! You wrote it so nicely, it was like giving a back story to the song. Really creative.

Great Job! :)

Author's Response:

Omj I know what you mean! The song makes me cry too! It's so sad! :'( The video too!

Thank you! I'm glad you think so! Yeah, the goal was to give the video a bit of a story, so I'm glad you mentioned that!:D

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 01:14 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh my god! I was afraid you'll really stick to the lyrics...

I was happy when Michael pull Bill off of the edge but when he pulled himself up, I understood what will happen...

The end was so sad but I found beautiful what Michael said at the end...

Good job on this story again girl!

Author's Response:

Hehe XD I knew that for everyone who knew the song, they'd probably be able to guess what was going to happen.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 12:17 am Title: Chapter 3

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!  Okay!

this is amazing and such a loyal friendship for Michael to do that! I know it's the end but I wonder how Bill would cope after that ... Hmmm, cos u couldn't exactly do another story about that (at least not on here) cos its not about MJ anymore really...

ANYWAY! I LOVED it, another classic courtesy of the YANA! Haha just thought of something... "YANA-MANIA!" Haha original right? :P


Author's Response:

Oh yeah, I know I'd have a tough time coping with that if I just watched my bestfriend commit suicide to try and stop me! :O Yeah, I couldn't do it here, but I have an account on a TokioHotel Fic site (except I haven't posted, I've only read), so there's an option there :D

Haha thank you! <3 And omj! YANA-Mania!! Haha! Love that! I should have a YANA-mania day on the 26th since that'll be the date that my account on MJFiction turns 1 XD lmao!

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

I totally think u should do a sequel 2 this or if u wnt u can still continue 2 pull out of the hat. I feel bad 4 my baby bill:/ why ppl never left him alone?? Being differen't don't make the person crazy. It reminds me of how ppl made fun of mj 2 I won't get started on that lolz but I'm still glad 2 see michael tryint to help his his friend & give him some type of care. I just loved how u made them best friends from childhood on up. & yes I would love 2 read more of your short stories. Keep them coming whenever u can. Much love!

Author's Response:

:) Prologue; a sequel will prove difficult...

I won't be pulling out of a hat. I was only going to do that if nobody put in their input, but people did so I won't have to do that :D Which is good!

I really wanted to focus this story on friendship, comfort, suicide, hurt, sadness... stuff like that, so I'm really glad that I'm getting the reactions that I'm getting from everyone! It's great!

Much love <3

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 11:50 am Title: Chapter 2

It's so sad! Poor Bill...To think all those things for years...

I really like how you write this story...I have the impression that you have the capacity to adapt your writing in accordance with the story you want to tell...Each story has its own style, it's good!

I think a prologue or short stories could be great but maybe more the prologue...Yeah it's great to see so much Tokio Hotel fans here :D

Author's Response:

The real sad part is the fact that there are tons of people who actually do go through that kind of abuse everyday. :( That was probably the main reason why I wanted to this story. And because I love Tokio Hotel... but we'll diregard that for a moment ;)

Thank you! That's a major compliment! I'm glad you think so!

Thanks for your input on the subject :)

Oh yeah for sure! I had no idea so many people liked Tokio Hotel because honestly, where I live, only a select fewof my friends have actually ever heard of Tokio Hotel before, so I found this really shocking! Shocking in a good way though, obviousy ;)

Reviewer: Megs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Touching story. I had to read it, because I used to be a Tokio Hotel fan since 2007... and had the biggest crush on Bill! They changed a lot, sadly...

It felt a little weird for me to have Michael and Bill in the same story xD You managed to put real emotion in it and perfectly captured the songs atmosphere. Good job!


Author's Response:

Thank you! Loooooooooooooooooooooooove Tokio Hotel *-*

OMG! I know! What happened to Bill's awesome black hair?!?!?!?!??! Why is he blonde now?!?!?! I have nothing against blondes (I am one), but he just looks sooooooooooooooooooooooo much better with his black hair! I liked his mohawk best ^-^ BTW do you know why they've stopped making music? It's sad that they aren't anymore. I miss them. :'(

Haha, it felt a little weird writing a story with them both! But I enjoyed it :)

Thank you! I'm glad you think so! Thanks for taking the time to review! :D


And sorry it took me so long to reply, I totally thought that I already replied to this, but I guess I was mistaken :/

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 12:00 am Title: Chapter 2

:( this is sad

Author's Response:

Good! That means I'm doing it right! :)

Thanks for taking the time to review! :)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2012 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved this chapter, between this and don't you remember ur stories are makin me sad :( (in a good way haha)

hmm, I think u should do option 1, the prologue :)


Author's Response:

XD Well I'm glad I'm succeeding at the sadness aspect of those stories! :)

Thanks for your inout! <3

Reviewer: alishawasnthere Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2012 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

you have no idea how much I LOVE that song!! Don't Jump Is the best song Tokio Hotel has ever made. It makes me cry almost every time. Just like how I feel like this story is about to make me cry!

I really love it so far. do whatever you want with it! it'll be great either way :)

Author's Response:

Amen! It's such an amazing song! It's so emotionally powerful!

:) Thank you! I appreciate that!

Okay, I really have to say this, but I had no idea that there were so many Tokio Hotel fans on here! It's great! I'm lovin' it! :D

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2012 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good story!!!! and I want to thank you for introducing me to new music. I have heard of Tokio  Hotel but never heard any of their songs untill now


Evening Star

Author's Response:

Oh no problem! Haha, I actually found out about Tokio Hotel when I was playing Guitar Hero, and I was playing their song 'Monsoon' and I instantly fell in love with it!

Their songs are really good. I really like Don't Jump (but thats kinda obvious), Scream, Humanoid, World Behind My Wall and Hey You. :)

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2012 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok I'm so happy you did a story with Michael Jackson and Bill Kaulitz. I was a very big fan of Tokio Hotel and Bill was my big crush for 3 years lol.

This story is really good as this song. I can picture the video when Bill ran into the stairs like Michael did in your story. When I saw an e-mail, telling me about this story, I was really excited to read it.

I hope Michael will join Bill before it'll be too late...

Author's Response:

:D Yay! Haha I know right?! Bill Kaulitz is amazing. He's so cute. Well, back when he had his black hair...

Yeah! The whole story is going to be kinda like the video, except I'm just planning on giving it more of a story. :)

Hope you like the rest! :D

Reviewer: Alerion Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2012 08:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Awwwww I wuv bill kaulitz!! Him and Tom are so fucking cute!
Anyway I love as usual.

Author's Response:

Oh geez, don't even get me started! They're adorable! Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally perverted, but cute. ;)

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