Date: Jul 04, 2014 07:03 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
Darn you for making me cry lol. I didnt want it to end!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2014 04:50 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
I don't want it to be over just yet... This story was so beautifully written and I cannot WAIT for Family Values.
Date: Jul 04, 2014 04:22 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
Yes, I will be there!! Can't wait til you post it.
Date: Jul 04, 2014 03:41 pm Title: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue
My God, I'm wiping tears from my eyes. I just feel every emotion. Every ounce of pain, anguish, regret.. They were supposed to grow old together and experience being grandparents together! Lawd I'm so sad. Just wow..
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoyed reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it! Your comments were/are always a hoot!! I hope you'll join me for Family Values.
Date: Jun 28, 2014 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 54--The Worst
No, no, non, nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!
Come back, girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You CAN't STOP here!!!!!!
Im' dying here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jun 28, 2014 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 54--The Worst
Dang I hope Michael's ok. Ugh and I don't even know what kind of logic Keisha is using with the whole ''he's not perfect anymore so i'm not going back.'' I hope this gives both of them a wake up call and I also hope Keisha doesn't get too worked up when she finds out, we all know her past with being pregnant and all.
Author's Response:
Ki's point was not about Michael being perfect. It's that she let his problem go on for so long because she didn't want to believe that the man that she loved SO much wasn't perfect. She's not going back because she doesn't want her children thrown into MORE chaos...but I guess that shiip has sailed, huh? LOL
Date: Jun 28, 2014 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 54--The Worst
Lord.. I can't. All I will say is that Kenny.. THANK YOU. If Michael isn't dead, this is literally his last chance. At life, at love, at everything. If this isn't a fucking wake up call. I don't know what is.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 10:39 am Title: Chapter 53--The Spy Who Loved Me
Lawd jeebus! This story is so good and I hate that it's ending soon *cries*
Michael just needs to come on down to NOLA and make things right because this is ridic. Everything is going south so quickly. Keisha bout to have this baby without him (I hope she ends up telling him) and Mike's mind is all messed up right now that he doesn't even realize he's about to lose his whole world all because of his doing. The allegations suck but you don't turn to drugs to cope especially when you have your supportive rock right there with you to help you. I don't even know if the knowledge of Keisha being pregnant will be enough for him to snap out of it because the kids he has now didn't do that and we all know he loves them to death. Maybe Keisha needs a Prince Naveen type to start romancing her and when Mike sees that he'll snap out of it. Idk.
Date: Jun 25, 2014 10:24 am Title: Chapter 52--The Moon Song
Wow, I'm loving the drama!! But damn, Keisha is really stuck between a rock and a hard place right now. Things were already a mess and now we find out she's been hiding a pregnancy. I just hope all the bullshit going on around her doesn't cause another miscarriage. I wonder when she'll tell him :(
Let me not get on Michael's ol' conniving ass though. I know he's not in his right mind right now but there is no excuse for stalking your wife after you told her to leave you smh. That negro done lost his mind and I really hate how he just gave up on everything. Why not actually talk to her to see what's up so y'all can start the healing process instead of having her followed? He's starting to give me those "if I can't have her, no one can" vibes. A mess.
Date: Jun 25, 2014 09:22 am Title: Chapter 53--The Spy Who Loved Me
LOL @ Mama Emeraude snatching Keisha by the wrist and asking when she's due. Keisha ought to know she can't hide nothin from her Mama. Mama knows, child.
This is getting so funky. Keisha found out she been getting spied on. Now she is even more ticked off with him. Why does he insists on digging himself into a deeper hole? He really needs to get help with his addiction because he actin like a fool from outer space. I still can't help but feel sorry for him because I know he NEEDS help...but you can't help someone who doesn't wanna help themselves.
During their last phone call...did he really say "what if I made a mistake?" At that point when she's angry he chooses to say that like its a sudden revelation? Get cho life Michael. He should have made that realization months before.
Keisha needs to tell Michael about the baby though regardless of what's happening in their relationship. Then Ima pray that wakes him up to go get help. Then he needs to win his family back. He needs to get on his hands and knees for Keisha, then proceed to send her chocolate, flowers, diamonds, cars, and the entire world.
Remarkable chapter! Please update soon :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 02:23 am Title: Chapter 53--The Spy Who Loved Me
Ok, what the shit balls??! Honestly, Michael is really pissing me off. First he sends them away talking about how she should go back to NOLA and that she should take HER kids with her as if he played no part in their creation but then sends people to spy on them. Then once Keisha gets on him about his bs, he actually has the balls to tell her that "it was never really over" between them. Like seriously??!! Make up your damn mind! He can't be playing tug of war with Keisha's feelings... don't push her away but then still keep tabs on what she is doing on the daily!
I really think this seperation is a waste of time for both of them. Clearly, Ki still loves him and him vice versa and with her being pregnant again... well this just changes everything. Ugh protection my ass. How can your protect someone but hurt them at the same time??
Ok enough ranting. Lmao. I just had to ask, are you from New Orleans since it seems like you know much about the culture. I don't know much but the knowledge you have incorporated into the characters seem so authentic. I've always been so fascinated with New Orleans and I'm hoping to enter a program there once I finish my bachelor's that I'm currently working on.
Author's Response:
I'm not from New Orleans, but I have a couple of family members who were born and raised there. When I was in college, there was this girl in my classes from New Orleans and I thought she, her accent, and the way she carried herself were very old world and interesting. I've been to New Orleans several times, and it's a spooky place that STILL feels like it hasn't caught up to 2014. I wanted an interesting and dynamic character, and I can't think of any place that's more interesting and dynamic than New Orleans! Go for it! You won't regret it!
Date: Jun 24, 2014 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 53--The Spy Who Loved Me
Excellent !!!!!! Too short, girl..for me!!!!!!! I'm dying for MORE:)
THANKS!
Author's Response:
Man...I just realized this story almost has as many comments as the original! Yay!!! There's only a couple of more chapters, and I'm trying to draw it out as long as I can. hahaha
Date: Jun 24, 2014 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 53--The Spy Who Loved Me
This is getting to be a real mess. I knew she would eventually find out Michael was having her watched. Can't say I'm surprised at her reaction either. I just wonder who's gonna spill the beans that she's pregnant. Cuz this will be a true and complete mess if Keisha Janae gives birth in New Orleans and Michael has no clue about it at all. At the same time though, it would damn near serve him right. Because she would be home and pregnant, and with their children right now if it weren't for him pushing her away. So this is all his doing! Now he's saying what if he made a mistake.. Niggrum please. You knew that shit was a mistake the second you referred to those babies as "HER children". Keisha is mad now. And we know what happens when a black woman gets angry. Michael has his work cut out for him. I don't know how he's gonna fix it, but he will definitely have a lot to do or he's going to lose Keisha for good. Don't let her get too comfortable without him, or he's in trouble!
And I absolutely love Mama Emeraude! Nothing gets past her. She is real, raw, and uncut honey. I love it.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2014 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 53--The Spy Who Loved Me
I'm torn. I understand and share Keisha's anger but I wish she would put it aside to try and help Michael get treatment. The fact that he's having her followed shows how skewed his thinking is right now. And if she calmed down a bit, she would realize that his asking her to leave is a direct result of what happened when she tried to take his drugs away, he hit her and can't deal with it so he foolishly thinks she is better off without him. But he loves her to death, I mean can she really doubt that after all these years? He is trying to "save" her. It makes no sense and is stupid irrational drug-addled thinking, but it doesn't negate the fact that he would throw himself in front of a truck for her. In effect, that's what he's doing right now just not literally. I wish she would see it. Now is not the time to be stubborn about things.
Date: Jun 21, 2014 11:30 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
Michael, Michael, Michael! I'm at a lost for words...he is definitely NOT himself. He just marched his saving grace right out the door. I soooo hope the news of the baby, whenever he gets it, will wake him out of this funk he's in. Those heinous allegations have a stronghold on his mind at the moment Smh... The fact that he told Keisha to take the kids and go to "NOLA" speaks volumes to what he's really feeling but not saying. That's the place where he wanted him and her to eventually live to escape the dramas his life. He loves her with everything but his judgement is clouded and he's showing his ass.
Kesha should have gone somewhere other than NOLA! That would have MESSED him up!!! You don't put me out and tell me where to go! lol!
Geminis_Gift, Sissy, whatever you decide I'm with you! I was really hoping you would finish I Was Made To Love Her, but once again whatever direction you take I know it will be an awesome read! Your stories are the reason I'm on this fanfic site! I didn't even have an interest in this site or any fanfics until a fellow MJ fan suggested I read your stories! You do MJ so much justice in your stories the good and the bad and I appreciate that about your writings! You now have a fan for life!
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Man, this means a lot. I WILL eventually finish I Was Made to Love Her, but that story spans SOOOOO long. It's my epic love "letter" to Michael and Keisha so it will probably never end. LOL. I'm going to do a quick and painless (relatively) fanfic Family Values next I think, and then work on I Was Made To Love Her slowly but surely. I'm so glad that aI can draw people to this wonderful site with all of the wonderful stories on here that REALLY do Michael justice.