Reviewer: jessdaniellemc Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2024 09:59 am Title: Chapter 16

Well damn???????????? didn’t expect this! It’s obvious that she wants him but she keep fighting it! like girl just call it off with John I don’t get it lmao

Reviewer: Anniaienharttt Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2021 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 75

Loved this story so much. I hope one day you finish it. It really was a great read.

Reviewer: Som_Som Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2021 09:38 am Title: Chapter 20

In fucking love

Reviewer: Som_Som Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2021 08:49 am Title: Chapter 15

I love your work

Reviewer: cat105 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2020 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I’m really impressed with how you capture Micheal’s feelings through the way you word his dialogue. Also, great conversation skills. I really felt like the conversation between Micheal and his mother flowed really well, and actually read like a real conversation. Good job!

Reviewer: nalwenda Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2019 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi there!

 

I don't know if you're active on MJFiction at all anmore, but I just wanted to let you know that this story, after allll these years and after reading sooooo many fanfics, this is definitely one of my very few favorite ones! The characters and the story is just described so realistic! Are you planning on continuing the story?

 

Either way, I just wanted to recommend you uploading this story on Wattpad, which is now THE place to be for MJ fanfic. I'm sure you will get a LOT of (new) readers on that platform, and even if you're not continuing the story, you should definitely upload what you have here on there! I'm sure sooooo many people will love and appreciate your story!

 

Take care xxx

Reviewer: LilyJean Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I remember reading this story many many years ago. I'm so happy I finally found it once again. I love this so much.