Date: Apr 10, 2013 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 24
This story omfg.
I just spent a good evening catching up with this and GOD... What an emotional rollercoaster!
EVERYTHING about this story... MY FEELS OMG.
The way you thoroughly go through each thing was so well described, the plot was unpredictable leading to twists and turns that I couldnt even handle and I actually cried when I read the suicide part!
And YAS, the ending was perfect since it was realistic. I'm happy she realised high school isnt forever. This story had a moral which is even awesomer. :D
Seriously like you should write a book with your talents.
I'm doing you no justice with my words, but let me tell you this is one of the best fics I've read. XD
Thankyou for sharing it with us pyt. :3
Oh and I see you've started a sequel. *Rushes to read*
Much LOVE , <33
Thank you so much! Wow! I'm totally overwhelmed by this review!!
Trust me, this does more than enough justice ;) Wow..
Yes! There wasn't originally going to be a sequel but ThrillerEraSlave convinced me :P Thank her! Haha!
Thank you very much again <3 :D
Date: Mar 23, 2013 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Kourtney, girl..omg, I found a song PERFECT for this story, it's called Porcelain by Helen Jane Long. I swear I heard this song on Pandora and it fits the story perfectly for me lol
I didn't get your email by the way, I just wanted to discuss something kind of like a sequel for Porcelain.
Emai me here: firstname.lastname@example.org
Dont ask about the email x)
P.S: Dont worry bout Ours, I'm working on a fucked up chapter that I'm gonna post later on lol. But yeah, I'll update on other stories I never even bothered continuing.
But listen to that song and you'll notice the connection..by the name too dur lmao but yeah, try to contact me about the sequel. It's like 3 in the morning here so it's all good cx
Date: Mar 12, 2013 11:56 am Title: Chapter 24
I agree, i was kinda sad but i guess its realistic...even if it is michael...yumyum! XD jks!
i know im weird but i had to laugh at “Don’t think of it as a bribe given to you so you’d take me back, thing of it more as an I’m-sorry-that-you-almost-committed-suicide-because-of-what-I-did gift"
xD! Now, they should totally have cards and presents for that particular occasion!
Like an annual event where anyone who nearly killed themselves because of u gets a card or present! Best. Idea. EVAR! GENIUS KOURTS!
i know, im sick. I need help. But u know thats just me and i think u love me for it ;P
fucking LOOOOOVEEEE this story! Thanks for sharing, u really went deep on this one....thats what she s....
Sorry. Lmao! XD
Lol it ain't easy to deny Michael, but she managed to :P
Lmao you laugh at the weirdest stuff XD
Haha ikr?! Why don't they! This is just another reason why kids are messed up these days... next to Salad Fingers ;)
Haha! Well it wasn't MY idea! YOU'RE the genius one here!!!! !
Oh of course ;) <3
Lol that would have been a nice little moment there if you hadn't added that last bit ;) lmao! I don't blame you though, I was thinking it too :PP
Lmao! Another reason why I love you :3
Date: Mar 12, 2013 12:34 am Title: Chapter 24
Damn it! Damn it Damn it!!! Dani should of forgave him anyway. Why can't we all as people forgive & forget??? I know i couldn't stand Michael's dumbass for what he did but did finally open his eye's and heart and realised what he's done to her and he regretted... poor Michael i actully feel for the dude right now.
As much as i couldn't stand that asshole i grew to like him better since he learned his lesson and saved Dani to bad she didn't realise that. I guess she is moved on now to her new love. Not that im not happy for her cause really i am it's whatever that makes her happy but it still would of been nice to see her and Michael back together again and starting over brand new and leaving there terrible past behind.
They could of married and had 12 children wahhh wahhh it's so hard to say goodbye to the both of them as a couple. It could of been possibe but that's just to bad.
I loved the ending and everything thank you for sharing such a wonderful masterpeace with us your a great author Miss Yana! ;)
Haha oh I knew some people would feel that way ;)
As nice as it would have been to forgive and forget I know I for one wouldn't be able to forgive someone who nearly made me commit suicide that quickly; despite the flowers. :P
Hahaha! They could have been the next Cheaper By The Dozen! They could have had their own movie!!! :'( Damn, maybe I should change it... ;) haha!
Thank you so much! Haha I'm not that great :P It's only one story!!
Date: Mar 11, 2013 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 24
I had a feeling they weren't gonna end up together cause he did put her through so much hell so why would she go back to someone who put her through all of that?
I give it to him for saving her though that was real big of him. Oh well he owed her anyway so I'm glad she moved on from him and now they go there seperate ways.
Thee end. Lol
Good job Yanagirl!
Yeah exactly. So even though they didn't get back together it's still a happy ending; Michael's changed and nobody's commited suicide. The problems are resolved. It's not really a tradgic ending; I'd say it's pretty happy :D
Lol! Yes, the end indeed XD
Thank you so much!
Date: Mar 11, 2013 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 24
Nur..NUR!! Diz cunnut beh dah end. Yez I am tulking in BERKZ!
Lmao, literally THIS cannot be the ending!!
Omfg...I have a veird Idea xD if you can, email me :o it's gonna a good idea!
HAHAHA! That monkey thing is pretty cute <3 :D
Haha it's the end! :P
Okay! I'll try and contact you through MJFiction in like, 10 mins :P Idk if it'll work because I remember last time I tried it kept saying "ERROR" but since they 'revamped' the place, hopefully it'll work :D
Date: Mar 11, 2013 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 24
Omg...you have given me life with this story and I looove that it is realistic....omg.....I'm fangirling over here. Thank you for a great story with true substance. You are a phenomenal writer.
Hahaha XD Thank you so much! I appreciate what you said a lot! :D Thank you thank you thank you!!!
Date: Mar 11, 2013 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 24
Wow the first story i ever read on here when Michael doesn't end up with his love interest in the end. I enjoyed an thanks for sharing hope to read more stuff from you.
Haha well not every relationship can work out :P
Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it! :D
Date: Mar 11, 2013 11:11 am Title: Chapter 24
OMHG, it was such a great story and you're absolutely right; this is the RIGHT end. Like if Danielle would have fall again for Michael I would have been so mad at her for being so stupid! I'm glad he is finally letting her go; he is wrong and will always been for eveything he did to her. Even thought she did not die, even though she is ok now, she will never be able to forget what Michael made her go through...
I hope she will have a cute lovestory with Theo because he seems like a nice guy unlike Michael... And Michael... Well, I don't care about him anymore LOL
This story is so beautiful, I'm deffo reading this again and again because you write so weel, the plot is captivating, the characters unique and everything was just WOW I'm so glad I witnessed the progressing of the sotry (if that even makes sense LOL) and I hope you will come back soon with another great story like this. WOW, amazing.
Much love YANAgirl07 :)
Exactly, that's how I felt too. Although a happy ending where they get together would be nice, I think this is also a happy ending because now she's not going to get hurt or betrayed by him again. And it just really wouldn't be realistic; it wouldn't have sat well with me at all.
Lol! Poor Mikey :'( Gettin' no love; but he doesn't really deserve it does he?
Haha wow thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear that! That's so amazing! Honestly, to get all of the lovely feedback is awesome! I can't believe people liked it so much! I thought the suicide thing might erk a few people because I can see it being a touchy topic.
Haha me too :P We'll see what happens though I guess
Thank you again so much!
Date: Mar 11, 2013 11:06 am Title: Chapter 24
I loved it...god im still crying. It's so sad, though. :'[ I loved the whole story, ending, everything. You really know how to make people feel the emotion of a character. As I always say, only a few very talented people can do that. I'm glad she didn't do suicide though, that would have had me dyin' here, cause its do sad.
Thank you for writing this amazing story.
Zainy Shines xx
P.S I hardly ever use my first name o.o
:) I'm so glad you liked it so much! And thank you thank you THANK YOU for the lovely compliments, I aappreciate them so much! It feels fantastic to hear that! I was worried that I was losing the emotion halfway through the story, but I'm glad to hear otherwise! :D
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :D
Well, I feel honoured to have your first name in a review on my story ;)
Date: Mar 11, 2013 10:16 am Title: Chapter 24
"Love is patient and kind. Love is not jealous or boastful or proud 5or rude. It does not demand its own way. It is not irritable, and it keeps no record of being wronged. 6It does not rejoice about injustice but rejoices whenever the truth wins out. 7Love never gives up, never loses faith, is always hopeful, and endures through every circumstance.
8Prophecy and speaking in unknown languagesb and special knowledge will become useless. But love will last forever!"
I believe that love is capable of forgiving everything but not everyone has that ability to know and feel that kind of love which forgives everything and everyone.
I'd like to see them together.Too bad...
"We all have to forgive hurt at some point. And when I say forgive, it does not mean what they did was okay. It means that you are done hurting and are ready to move on."
I dont think Dani is ready...
Thank you very much!Great story!You're amazing!
I like the quote to support your opinion; very well put. But like you did say, as a teenager are you really likely to forgive that easily? I know that I keep grudges (oops) but I'm sure (hoping) I'll get over them when I'm older lol!
If there were to be a sequel it would probably be about that forgiving process :P
Loved the fact that you actually shared your opinion; it's way better when people actually say their TRUE thoughts like if they actually thought that the conclusion was what they wanted/expected.
Thanks for reviewing and giving your opinion! I appreciate it alot! And thank you for the flattery ;)
Date: Mar 11, 2013 10:10 am Title: Chapter 24
It is very realistic. Very right. Very sad, but I believe I would have done the exact same thing. I think their end was fitting, and I'm glad you did it this way. Really, an amazing story, and I'll remember it long after this ending.
YANAgirl, you've done it again. :)
Yeah, I thought about putting them back together but I really couldn't see it happening. I mean I get the saying "True love will prevail" but is that REALLY love? I don't think so. And their relationship reminds me of that of Chris Brown/ Rihanna, and I know A LOT of people who were upset thatRihanna got back with him after what he did to her so I just couldn't... but think of it this way; she met Theo and she's not going to get hurt by Michael again :D
Haha I wouldn't say again but thank you, I do appreciate it!
Date: Mar 01, 2013 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 23
Idk what to think...
i mean, obviously Dani and Michael should be together...right?
and i wonder if Theo is as nice as he seems or...idk!
But im expecting something big! (Thats what she said...i mean, arent we all?)
They SHOULD be, but will they?? *dramatic suspense initiates*
Haha Theo is a nice guy, but it's not entirely relevant since the story will be ending anyway XP
Haha! Omg... you bring the dirty humor I love^-^
Date: Mar 01, 2013 07:09 am Title: Chapter 23
Waaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! I feel so emotional now dammit it's too early in the morning for heart wrenching chapters! (sniffles) but oh how I love it! The bittesweetness of this chapter, this story... I don't want it to end!!
I don't want it to end either, but it has to somewhere and since Michael has changed there wouldn't be much of a point in continuing from there, but trust me I'm sad too :(
Date: Mar 01, 2013 05:12 am Title: Chapter 23
Oooo, somebody is jealouuuus..or hurt :/ Aww, poor Mikey <3
No!!No Dani! Go with Michael! I know he's been a such a dick, and a fucker but go with him! It's the best choice, it is the Best Choice...plus he's got a little extra in his ya know c; lol!
GO ON! <333
Hahaha! I laughed at the last part there XD He has more than a 'little extra' ;D
I'll post the last chapter up soon<3:*