[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2013 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Oh, What a Night....
WOW. I WAS SCREAMING THE WHOLE TIME!!! That was amazing. Michael in the late seventies is a serious favorite of mine, so reading this just made me go completely bonkers lol!! Good job :) Off The Wall is my favorite era, so I guess it's time to really lose it this time xD
Author's Response:
lol thank you. Michael was something alshaglhasg in the 70s eh? I tend to have my fangirling moments for that era a lot lately too so I know how you feel. Thanks for reading and reviewing and we hope that you enjoy the rest of the short stories *_* ~Shy
Date: Jul 07, 2013 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Is It Scary?
ah! that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Shy and I are happy that you have enjoyed it :) - Drea
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2013 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Is It Scary?
“The Chapters = Mind Blowing”. This is an absolutely wonderful piece of written fiction here. The authors MissA1485 and giveintothefire transports and paints emotions with their vivid words. They made me think as I read so there is more to this book than many other romance titles written here. There is steamy sex, lots of desire, and internal conflict. Michael was painted in different era’s and I cannot seem to choose which era I want to pick. I could not find a story all together told in a beautiful language that makes me laugh, smile, and cry at unexpected turns. Sometimes within sentences of one another. I am very impressed . It's fictional literary at it’s best, it's rough, it's blisteringly poignant. I will miss every single era brilliantly written.
I cannot recommend this book enough.
Rating: 10 stars plus flowers for the authors. Brava, you two have made magic out of the extraordinary ordinary. Brava.
Author's Response:
Wow. I don't even know how to respond to this review because it's just too kind. All that I can say is thank you on both my and Drea's behalf. Our aim is to please our readers with realistic characters who deal with real life situations so the fact that you can actually see the pictures that we're painting as we write makes us happy. Thank you so much for the wonderful review again and thank you for reading <3
Author's Response:
Wow. I don't even know how to respond to this review because it's just too kind. All that I can say is thank you on both my and Drea's behalf. Our aim is to please our readers with realistic characters who deal with real life situations so the fact that you can actually see the pictures that we're painting as we write makes us happy. Thank you so much for the wonderful review again and thank you for reading <3 ~Shy
Date: Jul 05, 2013 09:56 am Title: Chapter 15 - Is It Scary?
Omg I love it!!!! He was so damn sexy in Ghosts, and this is just the perfect story to accompany that. I love it.
Author's Response:
YESSSS !!! I agree!!!! He was so fine in it. *__* I loved his curly, loose, messy hair!!! Shy and I are happy you have enjoyed it. Thanks for reading! :) - Drea
Date: Jul 03, 2013 01:57 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Girl is Bad, The Girl is DANGEROUS
omg x-x
Author's Response:
I take this as a good sign? lol Either way thanks for reading!~Shy
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2013 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 13 - All The Injustice....
It is so true what you said in your notes. Wade's lies do not deserve any recognition whatsoever.
Now as for my review: Again, you two have amazed me. Another hit. You two should changed the title to this story as "Shy and Drea's Greatest Hits" lol because so far every story I read just gets better and better with each era and you don't give us the same story or topic which is always good, keeps us entertained.
This story started so sad, I pictured Michael in jail, going over what happened to him and to the woman he loved. I wouldn't wish that on no one. But the ending was very sweet and funny. Alannah was a soldier. She truly did everything in her power to save him.
I personally loved how he ran out to "borrow" condoms from the neighbor. Some people borrow sugar from their neighbors but not Michael Jackson. LOL
My feelings I can't even put into words because as you can tell I am History Era lover and the sex was just out of this world and that short hair gives me goosebumps. Ok, I'm done rambling. Off to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Wade is an idiot. Point Blank!
"Now as for my review: Again, you two have amazed me. Another hit. You two should changed the title to this story as "Shy and Drea's Greatest Hits" <----- LMAOOOO Aww well, thank you *__* Shy and I work really hard to give you ladies and gentlemen (if there are any here lol) a good to story to read.
The story did have it's ups and downs. But at the end Michael had justice and he found someone who will not make him forget his wife but will help him go on in the future.
LOL The condom scene was hilarious. Glad you enjoyed it. "Some people borrow sugar from their neighbors but not Michael Jackson. LOL" <--- LMAOOOO
Michael was sexy in the history era so whooo !!! go ahead girl, rave about your history era lol. Thanks for reading - Drea
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2013 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Just Say It and I'll Do
I never expected Michael to have a drinking problem. I love how you girls know how to mix around with each story and give us something new. But the part when Michael entered the church and shouted out his love for Chanel only to realize that he was in the wrong wedding, I laughed so loud. That part was hilarious!
But the ending, the way they made love and the way he proposed. I would have said yes just like Chanel did in a heart beat.
great job, ladies!!
Author's Response:
Always expect the unexpect with the stories that Drea and I write tsk tsk. We like to spice things up to make it interesting for our readers so that no story is the same. The church scene never fails to keep me laughing too. Michael embarrassed himself badly on that one. He did make it all right in the end by getting the love of his life back ^_^ Thank you for reading/reviewing!~Shy
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2013 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Girl is Bad, The Girl is DANGEROUS
Michael in the strip club!!!!! Yes!!!!
Michael had it bad Valentina. She was bad, she was dangerous for sure. My favorite part besides the sex of course was when she picked up the phone and told his ex they were about to do it. OMG, I died!
Loved it!! Loved It!!!!
Author's Response:
LMAOOO Yes Valentina had courage to do such a thing. His ex missed out tho and Valentina knew it. She wanted Michael bad and now she had him. And Valentina always get what she wants. That's what makes her dangerous. Thanks for reading :) Drea
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2013 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Love is the Answer...
This was cute. Kinda like a Mr. and Mrs. Smith but without the action killing lol
It was so sad to hear that the reason their marrriage was failing was because she couldn't have babies. But I'm so glad they talked and worked it out. They still loved each other, it would have been a shame to let it go and omg yes, I am so glad they will be adopting a child. The sex was too die for by the way and IJCSLY is one of my faves. I'm glad you used the song. I saw him sing it live in the Dangerous Tour in Munich. Believe it or not, my grandma and mom took me. My grandparents are from there and they used to live there before they passed away and I would often visit them though I live in Chicago now with my husband and the emotion you felt in Michael's singing was very similar to how you ladies wrote Michael and Kim's emotions in their despearte need to save their marriage. Again, great job. You two are very talented writers! Big Fan!!
Author's Response:
Thanks and really? I never saw Mr. and Mrs. Smith before but I'm assuming that it's a great movie lol. It is a pretty sad thing to know that you can't have children :/ But they loved each other too much to let their marriage fall apart because of it.
"I saw him sing it live in the Dangerous Tour in Munich. Believe it or not, my grandma and mom took me. My grandparents are from there and they used to live there before they passed away and I would often visit them though I live in Chicago now with my husband and the emotion you felt in Michael's singing was very similar to how you ladies wrote Michael and Kim's emotions in their despearte need to save their marriage."<--aww. I wish I had gotten the chance to meet him or see him perform live *sigh* Sorry to hear about your grandparents :/ I know that must have been an interesting experience visiting them in Munich. And thank you for the compliement. Drea and I always aim to make our stories as realistic as possible so the fact that you could read out the emotions from the song incorporated with the story lets us know that we did a good job. *_* Thank you again and we're honored that you're a fan!
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2013 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Speed Demon....
This was different! WOW! I loved this.
Poor Elena. She had a traumatic experience but Michael was so sweet to actually help her and whooo!!! what a way to lose your virginity and to the sexiest man in the planet.
I'm glad at the end, she took Michael's advice and decided to go to the police. At least her future looks brighter already.
Great story!
Author's Response:
Elena did have a traumatic experience. But at the end she had a happy ending. LOL, losing your virginity to Michael is always gonna be a thriller. ;) Thanks for reading :D - Drea
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2013 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 8 - You Never Know What You've Got Until It's Gone (...But I'm Gonna Get It)...
I'm back. I lost my password so I couldn't log in. But here I am now, ready to review your wonderful short stories.
"Get it" was my jam!! I'm so happy you ladies have included it in this chapter. Michael in the Thrad era was so sexy. Now as for the story, Stephanie was a fool to let him go and she thought she was going to get someone better but the man she ended up with was a total ass.
I can't believe after the way she treated Michael that he actually helped her and decided to start things with her again. Though Michael has always been too nice. But at the end, I am glad Stephanie realized her mistake and hopefully now they could start over. Great story!! Enjoyed it much!!
Author's Response:
Yay you're baaack. I know it must have been frustrating trying to remember your password. That used to happen to me all of the time so I just started using the same password for almost everything lol.
'Get It' is one of my all time faves! We just had to add that song in there. And you're right the Thrad Era is slahgalhg lol.
Stephanie learned her lesson fast. She was missing out of what she had and realized it after he was gone smh. Michael is so kindhearted that he couldn't help but to treat her with respect even after she dogged him out. But they made it right! ^_^
We're happy that you enjoyed it and thank you for reading/reveiwing!~Shy
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2013 07:47 am Title: Chapter 14 - Abandoned in my Fame
Yes!! I was hoping for a Stranger in Moscow theme! :D
when Yelena put her hand in Michael's pants out of nowhere i was just like :O "YES! GET IT GIRL!" XD loved it!!
OMG! Blood on the Dancefloor? Cannot wait!!
he was ridiculously hot in that BOTD video... Those red leather pants! O_O and have you seen the alternative version of the video? Even hotter!
and Ghosts! *_* i love me some Blood on the Dancefloor :D
<3
Author's Response:
Yes, SIM is one of my faves too. And Yelena was a grown woman, she had no time to play games. She wanted Michael so she went for it lol
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS BOTDF Era, Michael in those red leather pants. And yes, haha I have. So hot!!....But my weakness for that era is....One word: GHOSTS!!! *squeals* can't wait!!
Thanks for reading :))) - Drea xoxo
Date: Jun 06, 2013 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Abandoned in my Fame
One of my favorite short films of his! I love it. This was so cute! Perfect ending to a sexy, sexy era.. But then again, we're talking about Michael. All his eras are sexy. Lol. Stranger in Moscow is seriously one of my favorites though. Beautiful song.
Author's Response:
Same here!! and thank you! The HISotyr era is just unf anyway. But of course Michael was just a fine piece of speciman anyway. The man was just attractive all of his life lol. But Stranger in Moscow always gives me life. It's so relaxing. We're glad you enjoyed it.~Shy
Date: May 21, 2013 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 13 - All The Injustice....
Wow...speechless. this was sad but amazing. Defiently the ending lol. You guys missed an era. The baderous era lol
Author's Response:
yeah it started out sad but MJ did get happy ending and some sex as well lol. Thanks for reading and lol!!! "BADEROUS" Maybe Shy and I will make one story for baderous. Maybe we will call it "he's bigger, he's bad, he's baderous" XD - Drea
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2013 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 13 - All The Injustice....
It was nice, different. He wasn't the famous enterainer in this one. Sad that they killed his wife :'( He went a little crazy when she was gonna leave. That rough sex wooo nice touch..
WOOO BOTDF era coming up.. can't wait
Author's Response:
Yea we had to switch it up a bit to give you all something different. Glad that you enjoyed it! It was sad what happened to his wife but justice was served. MJ got his life back and got to get it in too lol ^_^ BOTDF is coming!! Woot!~Shy