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Date: Jul 11, 2018 10:59 am Title: Remember, Remember the 11th of September

I really liked your story) it is great

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2013 01:00 pm Title: Remember, Remember the 11th of September

wow very very well written. I will never forget that day. The day that happened i was just starting high school and my bus ran early in the morning so i was on the bus to the highschool oblivious to what happened cuz i dont want tv when i first get up in the morning and i finally got to the highschool  went to my locker grabbed my book and walked to my first class and waited seeing myh bus was the first one there early in the morning. My teacher who is always in her class room when i get there wasnt there but the class room light was on so i knew she was there so i went in and sat down and i heard the tv on in the class room and that when i first heard about it, little by little more students walked into the room and finally the teacher walked in and told us that everyone is to go to the gym for first and seconds class periods and they talked about what happened and everything

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2012 02:25 pm Title: Remember, Remember the 11th of September

♥♥ Wow this was so different! But I really like the way you wrote it. 9/11 was a day that shall never be forgotten. I was born, raised, and live in New York City, and being a resident and product of Manhattan, that day was the scariest day of my life. It was hard, traumatizing, and on top of it all it was my birthday. I lost friends that day, but I'm so glad to just be alive.

I'm also so glad that Michael was so sensitive, and loving, and compassionate about it all. I've heard the story several times that Michael overslept and missed his meeting, and I'm so glad that he did!

Thank you so much for writing this!



Author's Response:

I know  year late and dollar short But I felt imspired to right this story becuae our guy really was suspose to e there that day and I just wanted people to know that this is how i think he would have handled it and how close we came to loosing him to Not to say that if he went in that bulding that day he would have died but I can't say he would have survied and it is just a good thing all together he DIDn'T go in there at all

Michael is always senstive and I think if he went in that building that day and didn't survive the reson would be that he would have been trying to save someone else from dying that day because to m he was like that

 

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2012 09:48 pm Title: Remember, Remember the 11th of September

Wow this was a very nice story. When 9-11-01 happend i was 6 almost 7 years old and my elementry school's front office was crazy parents were trying to get their kids and my mom was one of those parents trying to get me. And i cant believe its been 11 years and although its been 11 years People Were Lost On That Day Fatefull Day But They Will Never Be Forgotten. Thank You for posting this. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

Thank you ... When 9/11 happen I was 14 in my first year of high school I always rember that day because i was in 4th period when they made the anouncement to us that they were shutting down school for the rest of the day and i remember though they were shutting down our parents weren't able to actaully get us out till near the end of the day.... my schoool was near the Harbor world traide senter building here in baltimore and they were afriad thet we were posibly going to be hit next so they shut us down but i don't think that we got out till like 6th period

it's been 12 years and they only just finshed that mermorial and alot of people lost there lives that day i think some of the charcters i named where actual people that died that day and some that made it out I think the girl michael was comforting actually died that day

and your welcome

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2012 06:30 pm Title: Remember, Remember the 11th of September

I know that this was only a one shot story but I had 2 add it 2 my favorites this was good dedication. And I like how michael comforted that girl that was so scared I bet he would do that to he would try to help if he was really there. I know he'd be scare to and everything but he would try 2 save as many ppl as he could oh and I understood it even tho it was eye pleasing yet lolz.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks you for being such a dedicated reader to all my stories I want to make this as realistic as possible because to me I wouldn't think Michael to be as wihimpy as they make him out to be in real life in the media Michael in a situation like this would not be afraid to get his hands dirty he would have been about let me roll up my sleeves and help as many people as i can even if i have to die trying to save someone else 

he would want to get out for his own family and own kids sake but if Michael were to go out I think he would rather have went out A HERO trying to save as many people as he could then how he actually did or shall i say how he has been perptrated in the media to have died 

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2012 10:04 pm Title: Remember, Remember the 11th of September

Wow this is differen't and I like this to and he was there to witness this but I'm glad him and the few survived also. That was a sweet dedication to. Can't never forget that day 11years ago now.

Author's Response:

thinks i just got finished editing it so it would be more pleasing to the eye

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