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Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 08:08 am Title: End

The end of another gemreat YANA tale :)

i really liked this story!

but i agree with you, everything was just a bit too perfect...at least, for one of YOUR stories! Haha :P but i enjoyed it all the same :D

A happy ever after?!?! *GASP!* 

well, it will be a long time before we see another one of those from you again! XD

drama, drama, DRAMA!

love u for it though :)

<3



Author's Response:

Exactly, it's like... ugh... I can't believe I wrote it in such a perfect life, like that's just so not me! Lol!

Hahaha! Damn straight, I'll have to make one of my stories just end with a massive slaughter :P

<33

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2013 12:23 pm Title: Please Wake Up

Poor Anthony and Michael. Theyre REALLY tore up. 

I liked the bit Anthony said about in hospitals people are dying and terrible things but then sometimes babies are being born and things like that. :)

cmon....we need to see Roxanne awake please?? :p

<3



Author's Response:

:P Haha soon for sure

<3

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2013 10:43 am Title: Blame

Whooooooooaaa!!

that was one HELL of a fight!!!

i think even Pewds would be shocked at this display of barrelness! 

It was epic though; really well done girl :)

ohhhh i cant wait to see whats gonna go down when they see Roxanne!!

<3



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHA! Pewds would probably be just as shocked as I was when I saw his version of the Harlem Shake :P **disturbing...**

Thank you ^-^

<33

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2013 02:01 am Title: Blame

Dang, Michael and Anthony are at their throats.

Update soon, you know how good your stories are :)

BTW, how are you lately?



Author's Response:

XD omg thank you! That means a lot! I love checking my review and reading that thank you very much<3

I'm absolutely fantastic thank you :) I was in the Alpes last week which was amazing, and today I'm going to a party, and then tomorrow an overnight party, and then I have Friday, Saturday, and Sunday to do homework :/ And then school starts up again... :( Spring break in France is in February, which I thought was really weird, but whatever. lol! XD Hopefully you're feeling just as fantastic as I am<33

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2013 11:23 am Title: Merde

Lol!!! Michaels cute mistakes ;)

i love how since you are in france this story has loads of the language in it. (I know its set in paris but still lol)

ohhhh shit this wont go well...

Forget boss fight, this is a barrel fight :O xD

<3



Author's Response:

Haha! XD

Lol! When I was typing it I was like "It's so convenient that I chose the city to be Paris..." lmao!

Hahahahaha! THERE'S the barrel comment that I love <33

Reviewer: karamarinas Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2013 06:20 pm Title: Fault

Update soon...please! Thanks!



Author's Response: I'll try my best :)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2013 02:23 pm Title: Fault

What a situation!!

Now Anthony...I'm sure Michael will be a good boy! XD

hahaha! He hopes his plane crashes!

...omg....wait! What...what if it does?!?! O.O

Thatd be one major plot twist!!

im scared now lol :P

 

<3



Author's Response:

Omg! Definitely a plot twist! Two lovers suddenly now in the hospital :O

 

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2013 09:37 pm Title: Now

I love michaels dedicstion; as soon as he finds out about Roxanne "im going to paris." Just as casual as ever lol

haha, sauli returns as the little messenger boy ;)

<3



Author's Response:

Lmao! It's LooooooooooOOOooooOOoooOOOOOve! <33

Haha, Sauli! XD After I wrote it I was like "Wtf, this is just so sudden..." lol! He just APPEARS for one chapter after beign absent for about 10! lmao!

Whatever. He's still sexy.

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2013 07:50 am Title: The Runway

Yes!!!

anthony is no longer a barrel!!

oh my days, all kinds of shits about to get serious!!

whats michael gona do? And will anthony ask for his help?

hmmm....

<3



Author's Response:

Well it won't be easy for Michael to help out because she's all the way across the ocean.. :(

<33

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2013 04:21 pm Title: The Runway

Oh no!!! I hope she's ok she has to stop before she kills herself :( great update 



Author's Response:

Thankfully Michael's always watching out for her, but if he wants to get to her he's going to have to go through a lot of trouble... And imagine how Anthony feels...

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2013 11:15 pm Title: Trust

Ohhhhhhohohohoho!!!! (Im not santa, dont worry, thats just how i feel xD)

Barrels will hit the fan on this trip. I KNOW IT!!!

i have ideas abt what might happen but idk...u always manage to do the unexpected!

<3



Author's Response:

Hahaha! Aww... I was really excited; I thoguht Santa Claus reviewed on my story! :( lol!

You're better than Santa though XD

Honestly I think this story is less unexpected then my other ones, but I dunno; we'll see what happens.. ;)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2013 10:09 pm Title: Fix Her

I was suprised how dismissive anthony was with michael, i thought tey got along :(

Anthonyyyyyy!!! Denial!! U are in denial Anthony! U....barrel.....

yay at least michael hasnt given up hope and is going to help her 

<3



Author's Response:

They were okay, but Anthony can't (and won't) grasp the fact that his 'perfect' sister does drugs.

Hahaha! There are so many barrels in my stories :P I'm surprised Pewds hasn't come and kicked my ass already for working with them XD

<33

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2013 07:16 am Title: Lies

Well now he caught her! How sad I hope she can get help and stop :(



Author's Response:

Hopefully he'll be able to get her some help and make her quit before the consequences of her actiosn come back to haunt her...

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 12:26 am Title: Lies

Ohh ROXANNE girl!! Lovely girl but a mess. I know mike can help her, somehow. I hope he isnt going to leave her with this 

<3



Author's Response:

He won't leave it :) He's a nice guy in this story, unlike Porcelain ;)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 12:54 am Title: Paper and Sticks

Whooooaaaa u did it again girl!

this is the first time ive read any sex scenes by u since chokehold....hehehe memories ;D

all may be well just now but i think some serious shit is abt to hit the fan ...

<3



Author's Response:

Haha! This one wasn't too good :P This one wasn't as dirty as my other ones considering they're teens and it's her first.

Ah... Chokehold... that one was fun to write! Lol! I think that was the most fun I've ever had writing a sex scene. Took forever though, sex scenes take way longer to write. I can typically write a chapter in 45mins but sex scenes take at least 1hr minimum!

Oh yeah, it's not going to be as pretty after this ;)

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