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Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2012 11:57 am Title: Chapter 16

Well she better think wise on this rather she wanna keep it or give up. They both have there careers and c the baby could be burden on them they better something out like plan B oh yeah plan B is giving it up 4 adoption but when that kid grows up they may be upset at there parents 4giving them especially it's vanity and mj lolz

But maybe all of this will teach them two lesson 2. Always use protection.

Good chapter!

Author's Response: She will think long and hard about what she wants do with the baby. Yeah, they both have rising careers and niether of them want to jeopardize that! A baby is hard work and they don't have time for that. Yeah so true!:) Thank you very much! Love ya'!

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2012 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 16

Gurl I'm going to surely start ranting on about you and your writing style cause SHIIIIT!!! I'm in total surprise of your choice of words! :D But anyway, spectacular chapter!!! And I can't believe Vanity's even thinking about terminating the baby! O.o How awful! But she's right, she isn't ready for a baby, and niether is Michael, but I hope she takes the option of giving him or her away at least if she decides she doesn't want to keep him or her. :( Beautiful chapter!!! Update soon! Really soon!!!!!!! 



Author's Response: LOL! Thanks! Again, thank you! Vanity is just exploring her options right now! She doesn't know what she might do, yet. Yeah, her and Michael are both too young to become parents. She'll make her decision soon. Thank you!;) I'll try to update as soon as I can!:)

Reviewer: Wshadow67 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2012 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Damn Vanity is prengant...lord this is a good story I tell ya



Author's Response: Yep!LOL! Thank you so much! Thanks for your review!:)

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2012 12:11 am Title: Chapter 15

Another update!!! Whoop! Whoop! Lol Greatly written chappie dear!! I can't wait for your next update!! On the edge of glory here! LOL! XD <3



Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, I'm getting them out of the way, since I don't have anything to do! Next chapter will be out later! Oh snap! Lady Gaga reference! I love my mother monster! LOL!;)

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2012 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh damn she's preggo's so she's with mike now I'm glad there together. But um what's prince gonna say 2 all of this? lolz I can't wait 4 more.

Author's Response: Yep! She's preggo! Vanity and Michael aren't together yet! We still have Prince in the picture! Prince will find out in shocking fashion! LOL! More will be out later!:)

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2012 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 14

OH. EMM...GEEEEEE!!!!! Okay first off, YAAAY YOU UPDATED!!! And second, WHAT DA FAWK!!!!?? PREGNANT?? YEEESSSS! *Does a happy dance* Finally! But of course the news will surely get Prince in a state where no one would want to be when he finds out; I'm positive he's going to find out. ;) Great, no scratch that shit, AMAZING CHAPTER GURL!!! You had me griping the sheets on my bed reading this!!!! You are a damn good writer, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise! 

Please update because i think I'm nearin to having a seizure!!!!!!!!! <3<3<3



Author's Response: LOL! I had to update, I missed the story! Yep, she's pregnant!LOL! Yeah, it's gonna get to Prince and it won't be pretty! Thank you! Wow! That's great to hear/read!LOL! Aww thank you so much, darling!:) Update coming out real soon! LOL!:)

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2012 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 13

I loved it! Prince or Michael????? I can't decide!!! I mean if I were Vanity I wouldn't choose Niether one because it's very hard to choose between two sweet guys! But I think we all know who she would most likely pick, lol. But great chapter bunny! I seriously enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3



Author's Response: Thanks! Who knows?! (Well, I do! LOL!) If it were me, it will be hard as well. They are both walking sex so...But anywho, thanks for the review! LOL!:)

Reviewer: MJSmile Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2012 04:22 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow things are getting intense! I really liked the last update a couple of chapters ago with Vanity and Prince on the beach together. That was really cute. So Prince wants to marry her and Michael just wants all of her to himself and no one else. It's good that Prince is being so sweet but I feel if he finds out about Michael all hell will break loose.

Michael and Brooke, they're good for handling that so quickly. JUst hope Michael isn't so upset he'll go do something wild. Wonderful update! :D



Author's Response: Yeah, they really did get intense! Thank you! Prince knows what he is doing and Michael knows what he wants! Michael and Brooke are best friends and I just had to keep that way! It just wouldn't feel right! You'll have to tune in to see what Michael does next! Thanks more updates are coming up soon!<3

Reviewer: winniepoogurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2012 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wow...

Author's Response: LOL! I see that someone is speechless! Thanks for the review!<3

Reviewer: KekeJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2012 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 12

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Thats all I gotta say. Hold up let me explain. WHAT THE (beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep)



Author's Response: LOL! Calm down! Breath in and breath out, slowly! LOL! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2012 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 12

OMJ!! OMJ!!!!! But Michael kinda did have a point there, but then again Vainty's reason was understandable. I could just imagine how hard it is to choose between two men that you've fallen in love with, but choosing is going to take some time and the wrong answer might lead to misunderstandings and someone possibly getting hurt and we don't need that. ;) Great chapter gurl! I loved EVERY bit of it! Please continue and update soon! ^_^



Author's Response: LOL! I think alot of people would totally understand, where Michael is coming from. He's been hurt before and doesn't want to go through that, again! Who ever Vanity chooses, that's a mystery, even for me! LOL! Thanks for reading!:)

Reviewer: ShellApple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2012 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 11

Poor poor Mike my man is having sexual dreams about Vanity and what makes it worse he's about dick down Brook imaging that she's vanity. He needs Vanities sexual healing instead of Brook's but well I guess it will do for him haha! I hope they hook up again though but anywho fab chappy wappy :D

Author's Response: LOL! Mike is gonna be okay, but I don't know about Brooke tho! He does need Vanity! LOL! Michael just have to improvise with Brooke! Thank you for your review! It makes me smile! <3

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2012 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

vanity just don't know what she wants lolz does she really love prince though like she thinks she does? and as for michael he's a hot mess to he can't even get van off his mind.  but prince has been awfully nice to van tho. can't ignore that either. i can't wait 4 more! :)



Author's Response: LOL! Vanity knows what she wants to do, she doesn't know how to do it! She thinks she loves Prince, but she also thinks she loves Michael, aswell! Michael is just a guy with a big heart and wants to share it with someone (AKA Vanity LOL!). Prince has been nice to Vanity, but the question you should be asking is 'Will it last?' LOL! More is on it's way!:)

Reviewer: MJSmile Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2012 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 9

I think you should turn a lil bit more attention to Vanity and P's relationship since technically he's the main man and Mikey is the guy on the side otherwise the story will be kind of one sided with everyone rooting for Michael. So far all Prince has done is sulk and have sex with vanity and as hot and entertaining as said things are, lol I think there should be more. Anyway, I've really come to enjoy this story and I'm glad ur feeling better. Liked the treat at the end by the way. ;)That's what I thought of automatically when I read the bathtub part.



Author's Response: I know, your right! I'm gonna focus on that (Prince and Vanity's relationship). Thank you for liking the story, it means alot to me! And thank you, being sick is annoying! LOL! Your welcome for the video, the chapter and song wouldn't be be complete without it! LOL! More will be out soon! :)

Reviewer: ThrillerPYT Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2012 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad you're all better now! And your chapter has still yet to fail to amaze me. ;) Great story/chapter! I'm loving every second of this! It gets better and better with every update and that's why it's soooooooo awesome! You're going the right way and that's exactly how your stories always go! Insane job gurl! Keep it up! And about Vaniy and Michael, I just want to give a shout-out to them. Let's get it onnnnn....LOL! XD



Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad I'm better too, being sick sucks! Thank you so much! Your reviews are so sweet. And with the Vanity and Michael shout out, they said Hi! LOL! JK! Love ya'! ;)

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