Date: Nov 01, 2014 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
Rain is as funny as hell with all dat dancing and singing and stuff....lol had me in tears..
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2013 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
DAMN YOU CLIFFHANGERING GAHHH SOMEFINNN OR OTHER... Lol im done
UPDATE AGAIN SOON pleeeeease??? I love this sooo much, and ya gotta be fair, that cliffie is not FAIR haha
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2013 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 17
I love this story aaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!! Update soon and i just caught up to this chapter............. i hate marlon btw
Author's Response:
join the club lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2013 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
I just sat here for the past hour reading this story for the first time until this last chapter and I have some ranting to do now.
Rayne who has manage to avoid not being raped by her stepfather gets raped by Marlon! What the actual fuck is going on! Seriously, that's some fucked up shit! I am mad beyond comprehension for Rayne! How could he do that to her, Michael and his family?! He's a fucking rapist! No better than her stepfather for abusing all these years! I don't know if Rayne was better off with her family or Michael's family! Michael promised to protect her and then accuses her of ruining his already fucked up family. I know he was angry but look at where his angry ended up leading Rayne? To being raped by fucking Marlon, smh. At the same time I wanna say that Michael did warn her to not trust him and not go out with him. Why she didn't listen to him is beyond my comprehension plus in the back of her mind she knew Marlon wanted to date her, his thirsty ass kept asking her out. I don't understand why this girl continues to see good in people out to hurt her. But where was she supposed to go? Her mom kicked her out, the Jackson family turned their backs on her because of a fucking photo and Michael thought it was her fault too. Now she thinks Michael raped her because her drunk ass was dreaming about before Marlon raped her, ugh... I can't.
This story got me so emotionally envolved that I had to drink a glass of wine while writing this review, lol. Which means that you two AtMJshouse and Michaelfan90 can write a damn good story! Please continue with the story cause I wanna know Michael's reaction to Rayne's accusation and if the Jackson family will hate her more when it comes out who really raped her. Like I said they already mad at her over a picture of their cheating ass son with his bother's girlfriend. In my mind Ednia and the family would have found out at some point but because they're angry they took it out on Rayne. Ok let me stop ranting but really this is good drama, keep writing!!!
Author's Response:
Lmfao I am very pleased that you needed a glass of wine after reading and your rant if very accurate my dear. Thank you very much for the review! We will continue...even if it takes a while
Date: Jun 21, 2013 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 17
Omggg... OMMMGGG! !!
Yay you're back! ( woth another awesome chapter :3) I thought this story wasn't going to get finished :D :D
Date: Jun 21, 2013 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 17
Omggg... OMMMGGG! !!
Yay you're back! ( woth another awesome chapter :3) I thought this story wasn't going to get finished :D :D
Author's Response:
it will. It's just gonna take a while lol
Date: Jun 21, 2013 09:25 am Title: Chapter 17
It's been quite a while since I've read this story. Rayne needs to quit being so hard on Michael. Michael's the innocent one here. Everybody knows it was Marlon.
Author's Response:
well everyone in real life but in the story....nobody knows who it is
Date: Jun 21, 2013 12:23 am Title: Chapter 17
Woah! Woah! Woah! Woah! Woah! Hold on a motherfucking minute...Michael did it?! This shit is crazy its literally blowing my damn mind. But if he did it wouldn't he know where she is? I think Marlon did it plus he was the one who wanted to fuck her so damn bad
I think i just been mind fucked...and i don't like that shit
Author's Response:
LMFAO Read the last chapter and try to piece it together i think you'll realize who did it then.
Date: Jun 21, 2013 12:22 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh no she thinks Michael did it don't she?! Ooh I HATE MARLON! Marlon's an ass and I hope she know Marlon was the one who raped her soon.
Author's Response:
Yeah I hope so too thanks for reviewing
Date: Mar 25, 2013 06:03 am Title: Chapter 16
I love this book! Please keep going! :(
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2013 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awwwww. :( save her Michael! I'm glad he didn't put up with Diana's foolishness.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 02:52 am Title: Chapter 8
Ugggghhh! They were.... It was...ugh. Why every time they finally make progress and amends someone comes and fucks it up. I'm so upset. I would've gave up by now. Rayne is crazy though choosing to jump out of bathroom windows than to tell him the truth. Her momma ain't shit and the sooner she realizes it the sooner she can truly live her life. I'm absolutely loving and hating this at the same time.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 02:41 am Title: Chapter 7
Damn. What a brat. That was such a cute moment they had too. Brooke needs to learn her place ASAP! Marlon is horrible. Here I thought they actually kissed foreal lol but Mike just saw wrong. Thought Marlon pounced on the eyelash thing but glad he didn't. Rayne is in deep now. The truth heals all I suppose.
And I knoooowww, Diana officially lost her mind if she thought it was okay to call up out of the blue after she made confetti with Michaels heart. Tsk tsk. Bravo on the dialogue. It sounded like how she would converse in real life.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 02:21 am Title: Chapter 6
Are you serious? Wow. What a witch. Poor Rayne. First she almost gets raped and now she has to deal with this girls bs. I would've snuck back in for my money and car keys though, not walking down the middle of the road admiring the sunrise. Drunks have to sleep sometime right? But to each their own.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 02:12 am Title: Chapter 5
He saiiiid (neck roll) that he finna bounce soon anyway! Marlon lucky that's all he got. Fucking the up the flow of things. I'm so upset Rayne heard him saying that to Brooke. Now she definitely thinks she doesn't stand a chance. (Sigh) :(