Date: May 08, 2013 10:09 am Title: A New Choice
Hello, my name is Savanah and it is very nice to meet you. I just wanted to let you know that I have been reading this story all this time, and Imhave to say, you are a very talented writer!! I love this Fanfiction so much!!! It is filled with adventure, action, and of course some drama to be exact :) hope you continue with greatness!! :)
Date: Nov 07, 2012 06:29 am Title: A New Choice
Omfg the world is ending *flips out* Those are the only choices? Come on! Oh gosh... Well... Dang... Why would be best for them? Going to the trigger happy north guy? But that would be closer to the king and just make it easier on him... Ugghh I wish they could talk I the group of guys before them... I'm so happy that the girls back home at least have a clue about where they are *yipee* But the question is will they be able to tell the others? I somehow doubt it but I hope that they'll at least be able I hint that they're not dead in a ditch somewhere. So sad for Jackie to miss his child's birth *cries* I wish he could've been there for that
Date: Oct 09, 2012 10:32 pm Title: The Bombs
I enjoyed this. I hope Jermaine will finally get over what's been eating him. Glad to see you back. Keep up the good work.
Thanks, I'm glad to be writing again. It's been so busy lately. Glad you like it!!
Date: Jul 05, 2012 06:24 pm Title: Tensions Are High Again
I am still here and still loving this. Cheers: Michael has a burgeoning love interest.
Jeers: Marlon and Jermaine. I will be so glad when they have their to squash their beef like Jackie and Tito did.
Again, I love your writing style and I am most definitely looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.
Thanks. I hate writing fight scenes, but it has to be done. Thanks for sticking around and reviewing!
Date: Jun 26, 2012 08:35 pm Title: All Aboard!
Awww Michael and Alice ! That's so cute. <3 I love how descriptive you are, this story is one of my favourites. :) Keep up the fabulous work. <3
Thanks for reviewing!! I'm glad you like it, I really enjoy writing for you guys!
Date: Jun 19, 2012 07:43 pm Title: A Strange Meeting and Camp Life
Goodness girl! You have a way with words, I tell ya. I love and always will love this story. It's so different, original...brilliant. Keep the updates coming and don't wory about being late, take your time because this is magic! Love it and love you. :) <3
Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it! I hope to keep this up and going, just put up a new chapter. Thanks for reviewing and thanks for the love!
Date: Jun 08, 2012 08:03 pm Title: Confessions
Again, this is another great chapter. I live that you put as much work into you supporting characters as you do you main characters. Soloman's story is rivetinh. I also love the Jackie and Tito's moment and the vulnerability displayed there.
It was also nice that people certain characters step out their "roles" if only for the few minutes. Jermaine lost his ire and displayed an emotion other than anger. Michael became protective,reassuring, and supportive despite him not being one of the older brothers by any means.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks so much for reviewing!! I think it's a nice change of pace too when people display other characteristics besides the main one's you give them, so I think I'll try to do that where it's appropriate for the rest of the story. Hope you'll continue reading, and again, thanks!