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Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2012 03:54 pm Title: Disneyland Paris

Simple. Sweet. Lovely. I like that, no drama, just a story about a proud father and his children.

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2012 03:53 pm Title: Disneyland Paris

This was really nice and...sentimental. I like the idea of inserting one of Michael's quotes once in a while.

Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 29, 2012 05:53 pm Title: Bella's Lullaby

:) Yay! Somebody contributed to the round robin! Yay!

This was awesome! I totally loved it! :))))))))) 5*****

Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 29, 2012 08:04 am Title: Bella's Lullaby

You!  Your short stories are WONDERFUL! :)

This one in particular, Bella's Lullaby, had me on the verge of tears. :')

I can't wait for more short stories!  L-O-V-E!

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Date: Feb 28, 2012 09:39 pm Title: You Are Not Alone

:') *speechless*

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Date: Feb 04, 2012 08:53 am Title: Break of Dawn

Lol! "Why did dawn break so soon?!"

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Date: Feb 04, 2012 08:47 am Title: Smooth Criminal

That was sad!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

:( I was sad too, but I knew it would make it a little more dramatic!

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Date: Feb 04, 2012 08:41 am Title: In The Closet

That was amazing. I love the end!!! 

Reviewer: sheba93 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2012 07:24 pm Title: Smooth Criminal

I thought he was suppose to be smooth! :)

Reviewer: THEMJFANTASIZER Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2012 07:21 pm Title: In The Closet

wow. That was nice and hot! I loved it! I actually do have short stories too, some sexy, some serious. I'll probably show them as well :) keep 'em up.



Author's Response:

Yeah! You totally should! I love your story 'Blue Gangsta' by the way! So I'd totally love to read some of the short stories that you've got!

Reviewer: sheba93 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2012 07:21 pm Title: In The Closet

Wow, this was really good!

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