Date: Mar 25, 2013 12:43 pm Title: In The Closet
omg wow she's lucky
Date: Mar 25, 2013 11:48 am Title: Mommy Michael
wow that was phenomenal
Author's Response:
Haha thank you :P
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 02:55 pm Title: Snow Globe
Wow it just goes to show you when you fight with the one you love you always think and find the right words when your alone and you go back running to your loved one and tell them how you feel like Michael did when he came back into his bedroom and told Ada what he feels and how he feels. Im so sorry if i didnt make any sense. But Thanks for posting this story. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
No, no, no! I understand you completely! And I agree 100%! XD
Thank you for this review and for the other ones you left! I appreciate them all!
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 02:39 pm Title: We'll Make It
Aww this was such a cuite story. It was funny when Michael nibbled on Michelle toung. And typical Michael paying for things he doesnt have to but he still does it anyways.Thanks for posting this story. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 02:22 pm Title: A Little Fall Of Rain
This is so sad im still crying. Poor Siempre she didnt diserve to go through the pure hell her so called parents put her through. It makes me so sick when poor little innocent souls die in the hands of abusers. But most of the abusers who are alive today they went through the same thing when they were young so they continue the cycle of abuse and sadly they are never treated by a trained therapst when they are taken from their homes or when they become adults and then they do the same to their own children. And its just sad. Illusion you really know how to tug at my heart strings lol. Thanks for posting this very sad story. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 01:56 pm Title: Morning
Lol this was so funny. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting this short story. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 01:45 pm Title: Silent
OMG This is such a sad story. I could never imagine losing a baby or anyone else losing a baby. I was crying so much when i was reading this story. Im just glad Michael was their for Aja although she is still shocked i know that hopefuly in due time she will heal. Thanks for posting this short story. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2012 11:23 am Title: We'll Make It
Your stories, not matter long or short,
bring sunshine to my day, I'm not joking! :D
These "fluff" stories of your's always put a smile on my face,
and I can't wait to see what short story comes next! (:
I can totally relate to your chapter end note here about
putting little ideas into full legnth stories...
That's why I keep them in my Facebook messages. ^_^
Seriously, I have a 3000 word prologue
from over the summer, and one incomplete chapter that goes with it
(that I think is a little over 2000 words long). XD
KEEP WRITING!! :D
Everyday, we're Michaelin'!! ;D
<3
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much! That means a lot to me! :)
Ugh, it's so frustrating sometimes. A few of these stories I've actually really thought about turning into a full length one but I just couldn't think of anything to accompany them, so I'm really glad I have this little area to post them instead of just letting them decay in the back of my mind ;)
Oh! I hope you post it soon! I love all of your stories!
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2012 10:26 pm Title: Silent
Omg this is soooooo sad but it's good writing! I like wanted to cry and the way you made like Micheal keep say she I dead I was so depressed like yes I think she knows she's dead you don't have to remind her! But it was still good lol
Author's Response:
Lmao! "the way you made like Micheal keep say she I dead I was so depressed like yes I think she knows she's dead you don't have to remind her!" <-- Funny stuff there.
Haha thanks, I was like, so proud of this I'm not even kidding. lol it was funny though cuz you were like;
"wait, so the baby said that?"
Lmao, yes, the baby, which has just been born, said that.
XD
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2012 10:16 pm Title: Mommy Michael
Oh my God that was soo amazing Khia!! I love how the two guys act totally like seriou but in like a joking way! Theirs just a hint of sexyness between Micheal and Freddie which makes it that much better! I like also how Freddie is By-sexual so he kinda seems like he is actually into Micheal like when he pushed him against the wall! ;) your a great writer keep up the good work! <3
Author's Response:
Ha! Thanks! :) Haha, well Freddie is bisexual is reality so yeah, I made him bisexual in the story :) Yay! You spelt my name right! :D Haha when he pushed him against the wall I was going to make the convo something along the lines of...
"Mike, you have to kiss me,"
"What the fuck?! No!"
"But you have to be my wife!"
"No!"
And then he pushed him against the wall and kisses him but I decided against it, haha I'd really be pushing it if I had done that. lmao!
<3
Marianas Trench! :DD
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2012 04:44 pm Title: Morning
Oh it was brownies? xDD Ha, I was reading that and cracked up.
At the end: GUUUURL. xD
You write some great stories, just sayin' (:
Author's Response:
Haha, I guess we know who's got the dirty mind ;)
Ha! XD
Oh God... THANK YOU! That means so much coming from you because you're seriously like, one of my favorite authors on this site I swear to God! Thank you so much!
But you seriously write the best, I loved the one you just posted! It was so sad :'( but it was SO GOOD!
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2012 05:33 am Title: Silent
*cries in the corner*
Author's Response:
*throws tissues so you can dry your tears*
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2012 10:09 am Title: Silent
YES, YOU SUCCEEDED ON A SAD STORY!!! D,:
This was so sad, I freaking cried!! <3
Author's Response:
Yay! Glad it was sad! That was the goal!
I appreciate you saying that since you're such an awesome writer at sad stories yourself, you write the best sad stories <3
Date: Aug 19, 2012 02:45 am Title: Mommy Michael
Congratulation, you just succeed make me laughing in tears. five stars for comedy, you're the queen *bows down*
Author's Response:
Haha! Thank you so much!
Is Michael my King?? ;)
And thank you that was a really nice thing to say, haha, I still kinda can't believe it. It's awesomer cause it came from you though because you're an amazing writer yourself :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2012 03:51 pm Title: Mommy Michael
This was so funny. This would make a great chapter if you wanted to do a long story. I could not stop laughing this was so funny. Its a pillow Freddie said
Author's Response:
XD Haha yayayayayay! Glad you thought it was funny! That was the goal <3
Stay tuned! I plan on adding another one tomorrow morning! :D