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Reviewer: skipper Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2013 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 65 - The End!

THANK YOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY .HUGS

Author's Response:

(((HUGS))) Thank YOU for taking the time to read it. Without you guys, these stories will still be in my computer somewhere getting old, collecting dust lol Much love! xoxo

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2013 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 65 - The End!

Oh my god. I almost cried! I can't believe it's already a over!! 



Author's Response:

I know, the time came to end this story. Thank you so much for reading it though. Much love!

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2013 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 65 - The End!

I absolutely adored this story. And it saddens me to see it come to an end. But it was a beautiful love story. And you arean amazing writer. Thx for the great entertaining story. This was really a thriller. Lol



Author's Response:

aww I did too but it had to be done. Thank you so much for your sweet compliment and for reading this story. lol, was it really a thriller? I guess I suceeded. Much love!

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2013 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 65 - The End!

Its so sad to see a good story end. :/ Although I wasn't one of the most ACTIVE readers, I defiantly had to say this was one of the few GOOD stories on here. All that's left is a bunch of bullshit. This was a great story and I hope you'll come with another one!!

Author's Response:

Aww that's very sweet of you to say. I am currently working on my two other open stories if you want to read them (Waiting for you and The time traveler) until something new of me sparks though that won't be any time soon. But either way I would like to thank you for at least taking the time to read this story. I appreciate the support on my writing. Much love!

Reviewer: Bootylicious_for_MJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2013 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 64 - It's a nice day for a White Wedding....

The picture of Schuyler on the bed, she looked so beautiful :') It was so sad to read Schuyler break down that way but she has kept that buried inside of her for too long. It was due to come out. I'm glad she was able to release the pain of her past and let it go. Michael is right, there's no more pain or worry in her future. She is going to be ok. The wedding was so beautiful and the gifs were perfection. Love the visuals you give us. Great job, Miss A!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Schuyler is one beautiful woman! Michael is lucky and you are right, those emotions were bound to come out sooner than later. She held on to the pain for far too long. And you are right, no more pain, just happiness ahead.  I'm a visual person so I'm happy you enjoy them too. I think they help the story, don't you think? and thanks for the review!! xoxo

Reviewer: Bootylicious_for_MJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2013 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 63 - I'll do anything for you....

WTF!! I was not expecting this Helena girl to appear out of nowhere especially so close to the ending. She needs to back off. The gif where Schuyler gets slapped,I cringed but then the one where Schuyler slaps Helena back, I was rooting for her lol.

I can't believe you are ending this story, it's my fave and I feel there's still so much you could write about. It doesn't feel like is coming to an end but thank you for writing it. You have created a very entertaining story.

By the way, You need to make Schuyler smack Tatum too. I agree with mjsstreetwalking baby. Tatum needs a good slap, it is way overdue!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Helena was a mess but as quickly as she came Schuyler threw her back out. lol I rooted for her too.

Awwww thank you so mych for your sweet compliment and yes, I'm sad that I have to end it but I really need to clear my head and take a rest from writing but don't count me out just yet. You never know I might come back. If I still have the support of ppl like you, chances are that I will write again. :)

LOL, I know everyone wants Tatum to be smacked. You'll see, that is all I will say. Thanks hun for the review. :))

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2013 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 63 - I'll do anything for you....

Damn! Something told me that Schuy had a sister.

 

I can't believe the story is gonna be over in 2 chapters. It feels like it just started 



Author's Response:

Really? I didn't even know she had a sister. lol! jk...funny turn of events, huh?

I know. It does feel like the story is just  starting but that's how I like it. I like to end it with a bang (no pun intended lol) rather than a boring, predictable conclusion. At least I try not to end it that way anyway.

Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: mjstreetwalkerbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2013 11:36 am Title: Chapter 63 - I'll do anything for you....

Tatum wtf girl ....... was michael's dick that good you still bitter bout not getting it in ? why would you try to sabotage the man's happiness ? That man ain't want you. Get over it.

Helena. Helena. Helena. get a job. make your own gaddamn money and don't try to mooch off of your half sister. 

MissA1485 ........ I really feel you and Shonda Rhimes share the same DNA. Please Please PLEASE. don't let any irreversible damage be done to Michael or Schuy or Ryne. My heart ain't gonna be able to take it. (Plus I'm gonna hunt you down and hurt you)

PLease girl.  I love this chapter. 

P.S. you shoulda made Schuy slap the thirst outta Tatum too though



Author's Response:

Funny that you should mention that about Tatum 'cause let me tell you that I wrote Tatum and Schuy *record scratch* and that is what  went down. LOL! I'm just kidding but I'll just say that this is not the end of Tatum. You'll see.

*sigh* Helena is just another gold digger, trying to get a glimpse of the better life. Schuy let her have it though.

Here you go again threatening my life.

eyes roll gif photo:  tumblr_kyvyd4belS1qappyz.gif LOL!! What am I going to do with you?

Me and Shonda Rimes sharing DNA? Well, I could believe that.

eyes roll gif photo:  tumblr_lcz35ogrtm1qdtfdbo1_250.gif LOL!

I will just say you will see. Maybe I am Shonda Rimes. *wink*

Shonda Rhimes photo: SHONDRA RHIMES Shonda-Rhimes.jpg bwaa hahaaa haaaa

Reviewer: streetwalking_diva Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2013 11:28 am Title: Chapter 62 - For All Time....

This was the sweetest chapter of them all. So sad you are ending this. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I know. It kills me to end the story but I've been so busy. I'm glad you enjoyed this. More to come and new chapter is up now. :) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Bootylicious_for_MJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2013 08:29 am Title: Chapter 62 - For All Time....

This was super sweet. I can't wait for the wedding!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. The wedding is now up :) Enjoy!

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2013 11:12 am Title: Chapter 62 - For All Time....

Awww this was so sweet I almost cried I mean I literally had tears in my eyes while reading this. Great chapter. :)

Author's Response:

hi honey. Awww...I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)))

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2013 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 62 - For All Time....

Omg!! Cliffhanger!! 

That was the sweetest chapter I had ever read!



Author's Response:

haha yes, cliffhanger but Schuyler's answer is not the surprise for the next chapter...that is all I will say. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)))

Reviewer: Bootylicious_for_MJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2013 11:34 am Title: Chapter 61 - Whispering Words of Wisdom, Let It Be...

This whole story was a mind game. i thought they were dead then they weren't but I loved it. Worderfully written. I'm curious to know how you are going to end it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, it really was. It was so hard to write it with out spoiling it. You will see soon. Thanks for reading, your compliment and for reviewing. :))

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2013 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 61 - Whispering Words of Wisdom, Let It Be...

This is one of my favorite chapters that was so cute Ryne helping his daddy I love watching michael as a father he's an incredible Dad. So sad this is coming to an end maybe whenevee you decide to write again we can get a part 2 to this like the captivating stranger that would be awesome.

Author's Response:

Mine too. I am so happy and relieved that the truth is finally out. lol It was hard to write and keep it inside without letting you guys know about it but sad that this story is nearly coming to an end. Me too. I love MJ clips as a dad. He was an amazing dad.

"So sad this is coming to an end maybe whenevee you decide to write again we can get a part 2 to this like the captivating stranger that would be awesome." <--- You never know *wink* ;) Never say Never because I truly love these characters but I definitely need a writing break. Thank you so much though for your loyal reviews and for reading the story. :)

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2013 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 61 - Whispering Words of Wisdom, Let It Be...

I'm so happy with this update. I cried when Ryne was helping Michael



Author's Response:

Yay!! I'm glad. I told you things will get better. Ryne is such a good boy. He loves his daddy very much. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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