[Report This]Date: May 05, 2016 07:32 pm Title: Introduction
I really hope they stay together through the the hard times... or at least always be there for eachother...
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2016 02:25 pm Title: Introduction
I'm so glad I came across this! Can't wait to read!
Author's Response:
Giiiiirrrrrlllll there are so many errors. I swear, I need at least a week to polish it up! Hahaha! Still, I hope you enjoy it!
Date: Oct 22, 2015 02:15 am Title: Chapter 24: Promise
A great way to spend the night with your best friend!!
Date: Oct 22, 2015 01:54 am Title: Chapter 23: Oxnard
Great celebration!!
Date: Oct 22, 2015 01:27 am Title: Chapter 22: Completion
Great plans!
Date: Oct 22, 2015 01:04 am Title: Chapter 21: 21 Guns
It's always good to have close friends..
Date: Oct 22, 2015 12:42 am Title: Chapter 20: The Morning After
She does not want to lose her friendship because of her best friend's brother.
Date: Oct 22, 2015 12:30 am Title: Chapter 19: Venice (Part II)
They are getting closer and closer!
Date: Oct 22, 2015 12:15 am Title: Chapter 18: Venice (Part I)
Happy birthday Raine!!:-)
Date: Oct 22, 2015 12:04 am Title: Chapter 17: Baby Be Mine
Raine realized that it's her... Good job!
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2015 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Girl Is Mine
It is not good to lie especially to, and when, you love someone. But, never the less, the writing is very good.:-)
Date: Oct 21, 2015 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 13: November 27th
A real love hate relationship.
Date: Oct 21, 2015 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprise
Good job! Mike gave her the necklace...
Date: Oct 19, 2015 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Encounter
A very good descriptive chapter! Mother is mad and jealous that father talks and is close to daughter! Sometime, same sex parents do act that way. At times people need help with feelings of jealousy. Hopefully she will get over it, and dad will come back.
Date: Oct 19, 2015 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: Rapper's Delight
Great descriptive writing!