Date: Mar 13, 2016 06:56 am Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. IV
Too cute, continue the story please
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I will! <3
Date: Mar 10, 2016 05:29 am Title: Get It Together
I love the story. Pls update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! And I'll be updating soon so be on the lookout!
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2016 04:03 pm Title: Get It Together
Loving the story so far, keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, honey! <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2016 01:39 am Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. IV
This chapter was soooo sweeet 😭😩 especially the beginning part with them just lounging together, you know how I love them scenes. Zaria is so committed to getting MJ to love himself, flaws and all. Good little wife lol. "Carefree Jackson" though bye 😂 I actually laughed out loud reading the massage part, especially with MJ mouthing "I will hurt him" 😂😂😂 boy bye. We got a taste of both jealous Michael and jealous Zaria at the same time me gustaaaa. Michael keeping his damn pants on though, I can't with him. I would've felt so awkward having someone try to massage my legs with my pants still on lol. Michael's excitement over a bridge killed me, Zaria really has 3 children to take care of with him around 😂😭 You wrote out the porky pig voice well too good job 😂 Okay so I imagined the lost bet photoshoot way differently oh my god looool I'm not even gonna write here what I was thinking 😭😭😭 This was obvs better though. Very classy and artistic. AND I KNEW YOU WERE GONNA USE THAT DAMN PIC OF MICHAEL. I was scrolling just waiting for it to pop up and sure enough it did smh. I can't stand you 😂 ANYWAY, I'm patiently waiting for Jackson baby #2, which I'm sure will be announced soon after this magic making week. Zaria needs a child that's obsessed with their mommy & not daddy loool Tiahna gave no fucks for Zaria's feelings during that chat. Poor thing. anywho, great chapter as alwayssss
Author's Response:
Well thank you, darling. Zaria is not playing games lol. She's on a mission to break him no matter what it takes.
"Carefree Jackson" though bye"<--you know you like that lol
"I actually laughed out loud reading the massage part, especially with MJ mouthing "I will hurt him"<--
Michael and Zaria jealous at the same time is a major plus, right *snickers*
"I would've felt so awkward having someone try to massage my legs with my pants still on lol."<--listen...I actually had that done before and it was...an interesting feeling lol but it still felt good at the same time
"Michael's excitement over a bridge killed me, Zaria really has 3 children to take care of with him around"<--lol she really does smh
The porky pig voice loooool the struggle was real.
"Okay so I imagined the lost bet photoshoot way differently oh my god looool I'm not even gonna write here what I was thinking.This was obvs better though. Very classy and artistic. AND I KNEW YOU WERE GONNA USE THAT DAMN PIC OF MICHAEL. I was scrolling just waiting for it to pop up and sure enough it did smh. I can't stand you"<--hey...it wasn't supposed to happen that way buuuuut...my writing flow said otherwise *cries* But thank yaaaaaa. I triiiiied. And you love me anyway so hush!
"ANYWAY, I'm patiently waiting for Jackson baby #2, which I'm sure will be announced soon after this magic making week."<--
Zaria does need a baby that's obsessed with her too though lol she can never win with Tiahna. Poor thing. But thank youuuuuuu <333
Date: Feb 21, 2016 04:14 pm Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. IV
Another cute yet amazing chapter of my favorite couple. Sighs. Have I mentioned how much I love all the details that's always included? The pics, the time stamps, the gifs and videos and of course the music! Yasssss @ the inclusions of the Queen in this chapter, and of course I'm referring to Janet. Zaria singing Nasty and then the song included from Damita Jo, I love me some Janet. But back to Zar and Mike, they're so damn cute. I was hating on them massages, lawd knows I need a spa day. And look at auntie Erin being all nice, we'll see how long that lasts lol. Anyway, this honeymoon has been super on point thus far. I'm just waiting til these two eventually make a freaky ass sex tape or something lmao. And that last pic of Mike included, can we get into them thighs? Chile he was serving all kinds of body! Lol Yasss Mike! Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Awww thank youuuuu and yes! lol but I greatly appreciate you showing love for it. It's good to know that you're enjoying the visuals as much as I do! <3333
"Yasssss @ the inclusions of the Queen in this chapter, and of course I'm referring to Janet."<--*Beyoncé's voice* 'cause she slay, she slay lol
Girl let me tell you, when I was writing out the massages, my back was hurting so bad that I was wishing for a massage lol I envied them!!!
Auntie Erin is stepping up to the plate...for now lol. Just kiddiiiiiing.
"Anyway, this honeymoon has been super on point thus far. I'm just waiting til these two eventually make a freaky ass sex tape or something lmao."<--
^^^ lol!!! Be careful what you wish fooooor
"And that last pic of Mike included, can we get into them thighs? Chile he was serving all kinds of body!"<--girl you are a mess!!! lol but he did that! Yes he did! I can't stand him.
And thank youuuuuuu <3333
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2016 03:11 pm Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. IV
Loved the chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, dear <3
Date: Jan 24, 2016 11:16 pm Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. III
Lawd Zaria is FINE! Michael is lucky and I'm glad he realizes that. They're so damn cute it would almost be irritating lol. And lawd Zaria done let him in the back doe! Their asses even managed to make THAT cute! Lol I can't with them. They are truly a beautiful couple, they're perfect for each other. I'm glad Michael didn't act pressed at her photo shoot seeing her in alll those bikinis and whatnot. lol he held it together pretty well. They're just adorable! As always the pics and videos make it so real and flow wonderfully.
Author's Response:
Yes INDEED!!! Michael knows he has it good!
"They're so damn cute it would almost be irritating lol"<--ikr?! They get on my nerves lol
Chileeee they took it up a notch...nasty asses lol
"Their asses even managed to make THAT cute! Lol I can't with them."<--
^^^ Michael and Zaria are something else lol they're meant to be.
Michael attending Zaria's shoot showed that he has the potential to act decent every once in a while. Let's just hope that he keeps it up tsk tsk.
"As always the pics and videos make it so real and flow wonderfully."<--and thank youuuuuuuu
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2016 07:37 pm Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. III
Wooow I'm actually proud of how Michael handled watching Zaria work, especially in those bikinis knowing men are gonna be salivating over her lol Can't wait til he goes again with her but this time has to model with other guys 👀😂 He's definitely not gonna be able to handle that well, I'm sure of it. Poor baby was out of his comfort zone though aw lol Zaria and MJ complement each other well though, she's outgoing and sociable even with new people but MJ is more reserved and timid. I like it lol. Those two playing on the beach was so cute. Topless Jackson though, I'm done with you 😂 He's gotta learn to flaunt what God gave himmm. Zaria's doin a good job continually reminding him how beautiful he is though. Kudos to her. Okay and that damn EXPERIMENTAL scene, I'm still laughing oh my god 😂😭 Michael was studying up and everything on it, I can't deal with him anymore 😭 I can't even comment more on that, I feel awkward loool. But anyway, can't believe it's been a year for them *sigh* now it's time for baby Jackson #2 😈
Author's Response:
Michael is slowly growing :) He's a big boy nooooow.
"Can't wait til he goes again with her but this time has to model with other guys. He's definitely not gonna be able to handle that well, I'm sure of it."<--
You shall soon find out lol
"Zaria and MJ complement each other well though, she's outgoing and sociable even with new people but MJ is more reserved and timid. I like it lol."<--yin and yang <3333 ya gotta love theeeem.
Don't act like you don't like "Topless Jackson" lol If you have it, flaunt iiiiit lol.
"Zaria's doin a good job continually reminding him how beautiful he is though. Kudos to her."<--she is on a mission! Gotta get Mike to break out of that shell.
" Okay and that damn EXPERIMENTAL scene...Michael was studying up and everything on it"<--
Listen....lol. I'm not about to talk about that either!
One year!!! And so much more to cooooome. Long live Mike and Zaria's marriage lol
"now it's time for baby Jackson #2"<--
Tsk tssssssk
Date: Jan 22, 2016 02:24 pm Title: Get It Together
Her having kari lol
Author's Response:
lol! *_*
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2016 09:37 pm Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. II
Guess what part was my favorite out of the whole chapter 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏
no not sexy time loool but the beginning with Zaria mocking MJ's philosophical ways and putting him in his place that not everything is magic and beautiful lmaooo I was legit laughing out loud during that, especially with the womp womp womp part lol I can't deal. Can't imagine how many times she's gotta hear him praise nature and every little thing around him 😂 It's cute though. The part at Chanel though what a fucking bitch, seriously. I'm glad Michael didn't just leave and not do anything about that. And she was fired on the spot yaaaaasss. She deserved it and so much more. Poor Michael having to deal with that on his honeymoon 😪 Smh. Okay but Zaria and her belly dancing lmaoooo I'm mad Michael was laughing during the beginning lol he needs to be respectful 😂 But she put work in lemme tell ya. I gotta see MJ take those pics from that bet lmao I can't with him making that deal lol. I don't think I gotta comment on that last scene, you know I loved it 😌 great chapterrrr, can't wait for moooore
Author's Response:
I knew you were gonna say the part with Zaria mocking him lol. She knew she wasn't right for that smh. The things one has to endure while being married to Michael lol. Poor Zar.
As for the employee at the Chanel store, she knew she was wrong for that. It was only right that Michael stood up for himself and any other future person who walked through those doors. The manager wasted no time firing her lol. But Michael, as precious as he is, stayed calmed the whole time. Ya gotta love 'em.
Listen, Zaria tried lol. Michael knew he wasn't right for laughing at her attempt though. Little troll.
"I gotta see MJ take those pics from that bet"<--
^^^ you would like that, wouldn't you? lol
Anyway, thank youuuuuuuuuuuu <3333
Date: Jan 05, 2016 04:19 pm Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. II
More cuteness!!!! I love these two so much. And chile yassssss I got my everlasting life at Michael clocking them tired ass people at Chanel! You betta do it Michael! Even though he was humble as a lamb, I get life when he stands on folks necks and pulls out the "bitch I'm Michael Jackson" card. Lmao life received every single time. Made that heffa lose her job chile, that's what her ass get. Anyway, Zaria is fine as hell!! I love her lil dance she did for him and that outfit. I just loved it so much. And I know Michael freaky self loved it too. They're so damn cute. And they have several more days of this. Sigh, my precious babies! Lol. And the tour they did looked fun too but girl bye, my arms woulda got tired lol. Can't wait to see what happens nextttt.
Author's Response:
They really tried it with Michael smh.
"I get life when he stands on folks necks and pulls out the "bitch I'm Michael Jackson" card" <--lol! gotta let 'em know! I wish I could do that lol
Zaria is gorgeouuuuus. I loved writing that part with her dancing with her silly self lol. Michael tried to play all cool but you knew he enjoyed it too lol. As for that kayak trip...chile I ain't even about to lie, I wouldn't have even lasted as long as Zaria did lol.
But thank you for the reviewwwww. More is on the way <33
Date: Dec 28, 2015 10:30 am Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. I
They're so cuteeeee!!! I feel like I'm reading Zaria and Michael from back when they first started dating, being all adorable and sweet and whatnot, yet they're married with kids now. And that's a good thing! It's good to keep the relationship young and sweet like that, they are a trip. And why did I know somehow that comment Zaria made about being the mama of his future children would come back up? Lmao smh Michael is a mess. If she left it up to him, Zaria would literally stay pregnant. They'll be popping out more babies in no time--in 3 years lol. He can wait. They can enjoy the two they have now before bringing in more. Who knows, Zar may get lucky again and have twins next time and both babies will be healthy and ok. Michael will be over the moon chile lol. I'm loving these pics! Michael does spoil his boo but she deserves it. Shoot looking at these pics makes me wish I was on vacation lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. We know the sex is coming lmao
Author's Response:
It's like watching them grow, right? *gushes* Michael and Zaria are meant to be with the playfulness and all lol.
"And why did I know somehow that comment Zaria made about being the mama of his future children would come back up? Lmao smh Michael is a mess."<--lol! You already know that Michael wasn't about to let that one slide. Zaria THOUGHT she was getting away with it on the sly lol. She tried it.
"If she left it up to him, Zaria would literally stay pregnant."<--FOR REAL THOUGH!! lol Zaria wouldn't ever catch a break especially since Michael wants a big family lol.
"Who knows, Zar may get lucky again and have twins next time and both babies will be healthy and ok."<--Michael wouldn't know how to act if that happens lol but who knows...maybe it will...maybe it won't XD
That hotel is goregous, right? Makes me wanna go on a vacation too lol. And you're right, Zaria does deserve being spoiled as much as she is by Michael lol. I wanna be her lol.
"We know the sex is coming lmao"<--
^^^ you are too much! lol but more is on the waaaay ^_^
Date: Dec 28, 2015 01:22 am Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. I
They're so cute! And Michael is still a horn dog. Lmao. But I love it. It's nice reading them on their honeymoon, which is well deserved.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2015 12:41 am Title: Naku Penda Piya, Naku Taka Piya, Mpenziwe (I Love You Too, I Want You Too, My Love) pt. I
Awww this was such a cute gushy chapter, you know how I love them ones 😂 Michael really is a hornball lord he needs to calm himself lol. And he flirted so much in this chapter gahhh 😭 The place they're staying is soo beautiful. I loved the part about Michael talking about God's creation and all that. I could see him passionately talking about that stuff with that view in front of him. Bye at him suggesting he knocks Zaria up before the three years, I can't with him. I bet it's gonna happen though... 👀 Michael gets what he wantsss. Surprised they didn't jump each other's bones after getting settled in though seeing as how he couldn't control himself in the car 😂 Zaria better prepare herself if Michael plans to recreate the wedding night loool may god be with her. anywayyyy, great chapter dear. Love the quick updates, keep it up ;)
Author's Response:
Had to take it back to good ole days when things were all nice and peachy <33. Michael needs sex addicts anonymous lol.
"And he flirted so much in this chapter gahhh"<--
^^^ Flirty Michael is the best Michael
Martinique is such a beautiful place. *_* I wanna go there someday. And you know that Michael had to let out his little nature talk with his philosophical self lol.
"Bye at him suggesting he knocks Zaria up before the three years, I can't with him. I bet it's gonna happen though... 👀 Michael gets what he wantsss."<--
^^^ maybe it will, maybe it won't tsk tsk
"Surprised they didn't jump each other's bones after getting settled in though seeing as how he couldn't control himself in the carb"<--good things come to those who wait lol. Reliving thg wedding night is a mess in itselt lol. Wonder how Zaria is gonna be able to handle it this time *snickers*
And thank you babessss. I aim to pleaaase. Better enjoy these updates while you can <3333
Date: Dec 24, 2015 10:34 am Title: The Tables Have Turned
My my how the tables are turning indeed! And Michael is having a fit as I knew he would. One thing that Zaria is right about tho, she is not Diana or Tatum, and they did not feel the way about him as he felt for them. Unrequited as hell. Not to mention, Diana and Tatum are hoes lol Zar would never. Anyway, I missed the last chapter so I read that and got all my life when Zaria checked Michael for his nasty hypocritical ass attitude and being jealous. Chile if he don't shut up and deal! He's a possessive mess yet when women all over him, he expects for Zaria to deal with it since it comes with being who he is. well bruh, now you are on the receiving end of it!!!! And I live too! Lol this is only the beginning tho. Zaria is beautiful so of course she's gonna work with other men, and men will also be lusting after her too. Michael might as well get ready lol cuz it's coming. And OMG Kari is talking now! Time is flying for real and now the wedding anniversary is coming up. Sheesh. We've been a longgggg way with these two. I'm excited to see them have their honeymoon finally though, can't wait to see what happens with that.
And as always, the pics and gifs are always on point!
Author's Response:
Yes!! Zaria had to make sure that Michael understood that she is not Diana or Tatum and that she isn't one to be compared to the two.
"Not to mention, Diana and Tatum are hoes lol Zar would never."<--TRUE! lol
Zaria shut Michael's hypocrisy down with a quickness. Michael hurried up and pulled himself together real because he knew that he was wrong for that lol. He tried it.
"this is only the beginning tho. Zaria is beautiful so of course she's gonna work with other men, and men will also be lusting after her too. Michael might as well get ready lol cuz it's coming."<--ohhhh yesssss
Kari is springing like a weeeeeed. Baby girl is growing up fast!
"We've been a longgggg way with these two. I'm excited to see them have their honeymoon finally though, can't wait to see what happens with that."<--most definitely! I'm glad that you've continued to ride along for the journey! More is coming soon!
And thanks girl!!! Have a Merry Christmas!!!