Date: Nov 27, 2019 05:30 am Title: Battle of the Lovelies/Trading Places
I’m honestly just waiting for the next chapter. I check everyday to see if you did. π…
Awww. I'm gonna update soon. It's just a lot has been going on in my personal life and I had to take a hiatus. But thank you for reading my story!
Date: Dec 27, 2018 01:08 am Title: Battle of the Lovelies/Trading Places
Yassss I’m late as hell reading this but yass! I see this was published on my bday too but I was out of the country. I’m glad Zaria realized she was being an ass of a wife. Sis know she needed to clean that up as good as Michael is to her. Shoot he needs to be my husband lol. This was good chapter and I loved the trading places concept. She let him shoot her club up so I’m assuming sis must be watching that period app on her phone like a hawk (I bet she has one lol). No ovulation week huh Zar? I see you sis lol. Plan B game must be strong lol. But this was cute. And I am here for Michael being inspired to make In the Closet!!! And before I forget, lemme just say I am glad Diana’s bushy wig, lipstick stained teef ass got clocked and rightfully so. Michael handled his biz cuz lawd knows if Zar would’ve had to, Diana woulda been picking that nappy wig up off the floor, okuuurrr?? Lol anyway, this was a good update and I’m happy my two babies are doing well.
Date: Aug 21, 2018 04:55 pm Title: Disappointments and Confusions
Im with Michael. I have a dry opinion of Rene. Whenever I include him in my Janet stories its not for very long.
Michael knows best and he's definitely not someone who would be missed in any story lol
Date: Jul 30, 2018 11:59 am Title: Battle of the Lovelies/Trading Places
Wooooo an update!!! You did not disappoint, my love. You included lots of fluff and a little angst, always a good combo. Diana is a damn MESS! I’m so glad Michael put her in her place. She needs to learn respect at her big age smh. Anywho, look at Michael though staying in his lane like a good boy π Zaria wanted him to mind his business and that’s exactly what he was gonna do lol also, Tiahna is the ultimate troll. She’s a perfect mix of her parents. The date night was super cuuuute. Of course you had to include some nasty magic making π They can’t control themselves. (And I caught the reference to that particular ~experimental sex~ they had not too long ago π‘π‘π) You need help lol ANYWAYYYY... Great chapter!!! Can’t wait for the next one
Well thank you, my love.
"You included lots of fluff and a little angst, always a good combo."<--I try lol balance is key!
Diana needs to go on somewhere with her petty ass lol She definitely wasn't expecting Michael reading her like a book.
"Anywho, look at Michael though staying in his lane like a good boy Zaria wanted him to mind his business and that’s exactly what he was gonna do lol"<--Zaria got what she asked for lol. Michael was like, <--
^^^ "Not today, Satan."
Tiahna is definitely her parents child lol. As for date night, I really enjoyed writing that especially at the diner but I really wanted to add more. Maybe we'll get more in a flashback or something later. And of course the rabbits had to make their magic lol wouldn't be right if they didn't.
" (And I caught the reference to that particular ~experimental sex~ they had not too long ago"<--
^^^ I knew you would lol
But anyway, thanks for reading babeeeee. I'm going to try to update really soon.
Date: Jul 30, 2018 01:24 am Title: Battle of the Lovelies/Trading Places
I missed you so much! This chapter gave me too much life, from Kari being a troll, Mr. Brown's cameo, to mentioning my favorite show! They made me so happy with how in love they are. Damn near made me wanna find somebody and settle down XD.
Great update, as always.
Aww thank you, love! I missed you guys too! Kari is a little troll lol. She definitely gets that from her parents. Mr. Brown's cameo was my fave to write lol I love him.
"They made me so happy with how in love they are. Damn near made me wanna find somebody and settle down "<--I know right?! I'm jealous of them lol
But I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the review! <333